~sati~ maaneet THREAD 9 last pt pg95 jul19 - Page 58

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Posted: 12 years ago
congrats for completing it well this story was really different from start to end initially you showed women pain who has lost her husband at that time maan was not that good person but you show how love has changed him and how it also changes the meaning of sati to geet every line of this ff has such a deep impact love u for such an amazing story tc dear bye
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Posted: 12 years ago
I was shocked to see the words last part.😲 I was really not expecting it to end. This is one of ur best works. ⭐️

Loved it. And the epilogue was awesome. So cute and romantic. 😳How about one more epilogue. I know I am greedy, but am not ashamed in this instance.


Honestly, I was a little unhappy with Geet's behavior towards Maan.
But,
Maan – warna tum mujhe kabhi maaf nahi kar pathi
she innocently looked at him – kis baat ke liyen Maan

This two sentences washed it all away.🥱
Edited by custodian75 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved d whole story
d ending was awesome
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome finish... maan had to wait for 18 loong yrs...one of my fav...will miss sati very much...being busy with two cutie pies u took out time n updated ..thanks n a big for that.❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh loved the journey sooo much dear!!!
emotions in every form..awesome!!!!! ⭐️

Bt please let maan's one dream of having a daughter be fulfilled!!! Common I know they are married for long 😉 bt the pregnancy n holding lil Geet's like in arms.it would be blissful!! 😳 Wont mind if you cover in just one part..long one actly 😉

PLEASE!!!!!! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aww.. so cute part.. specially when Geet said.. she is failed to become his sati.. Maan told her she couldn't have forgiven him for whatever he did... How easily he made her understand that she isn't at fault for whatever happened.. Finally happy ending..😳 will miss.. this story..Sati.. plz Keep writing muski di.. loved ur writings.. 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Am i the only one who missed dadi and dev+family presence in epilogue. was kind of wondering how life has treated them over he years.


Okay so here I come clear that you would not have seen a single comment of mine on sati or even for that matter a like. I am writing this one to let u know firstly how deeply sorry I am for not giving you the much deserved appreciation. seriously thanks a ton for this. A couple of years ago or even before when u penned down ur first FF PKE I used to make sure I let u know how I felt abt the update, even if it is thru a couple of words or even when I am using a phone. As years passed by, ur work transformed completely, so refined and defined. So yeah I am not gonna defend myself for not doing my bit even I was lurking in a corner silently enjoying ur hardwork. So this comment is going to by me feeble attempt at giving you the feedback.
😳

SO when u started writing Sati, I only discovered it after I guess 13 parts onwards. I was free one day and I took a plunge. Intrigued was i left..can be an understatement. First I was like..Sati..okay..probably it wud be a modern take on the malpractice. but then ppl actually tried to burn her alive.Totally unconvincing...in today's time. Then began a story of her struggle..For quite smtime I actually believed Maan was dead. Maybe the story was a different take on love..where u arent destined to meet (quite like ur vengeance) Then tadaa we meet a new character..and the moment he was introduced I knew its maan and that bas***d is still alive. As if that wasnt enough, he left no stones unturned to make things difficult for her../.wanted to rip him apart when he forced her even after bng sam and more when he accused her to be with DEV..this man would sure end up in hell😡 Here I would also like to tell u how I never was convinced with PKE, madhoshi, maitri,TM(in particular) bcz no matter how badly maan hurts geet in all these, he finally gets her.😭 He doesnt have to go thru even an iota of pain as compared to geet. I have bugged you a lot about that then. And even all ur current stories DJ, kashmkash and smwhere DA were fixated on same reckless emotions of Maan. So i always had this issue with u, why dont u PUNISH HIM ENOUGH? Bcz frankly he deserves that in every FF. Sati and DJ made me feel, no matter what, things can never be fine (again like ur vengeance) There was too much damage done. But then You started Maan's redemption track. Frankly I expected it to be finished in 4-5 parts. BUt then u AMAZED me by ur prowess as a writer, and more by ur deep understanding of human emotions. How simply you put all those complex feelings in words..I feel u are like painting a sort of picture..etching every detail beautifully.. Exquisite..superb..renders speechless..I did not realize when I started feeling for Maan and when his pain outweighed geet.17 years what the heck 😔How difficult!!! what redemption👏. loved it. Entirely. So plz count an extra like on all ur update. Bcz I dint only like it but love it.

Regards and love to ur twins 😊
Hope they are doing fine and not causing muma any trouble 😆
Edited by sarita21992 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part
loved it
thanks for the wonderful story of maaneet

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome end...lekin itni jaldi khatam😭 will miss this storyy
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely FF and lovely ending. Never expected it will end so soon but like every good thing have to come to an end.even this one is ended. BUt never the less, we will get the Diljale now. Thank you very much. How about DA?
jaya

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