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Posted: 12 years ago
part 29 was sooo sweet.😆😆😆geet is such a sweet angel yaar...poor maan😆.only she can make him crazy😆..babaji giving him sign "wife"..i hope he got it soon..😉..wonderfil update..cant find part 30..pls cont soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 28 and 27
luved them
geet was in park
maan found her
now he is angry on her
geet told him tht she left for him
wht will he say now
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 29
cute part
maan taking care of geet
geet thowing tantrums
i think maan should now try 2 make geet understand their situation and abt her pregnency also
and he should also decide wht relation he wants with her
Edited by Sexy_Witch - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
**MENDING HEARTS**
PART 30
MAAN looked at the stubborn kid who was very keenly and impatiently waiting for her answers she pouted and looked at maan doctor had left long back and now he was alone with his mishty..
Geet : boliye kis haq se rahun aapke saath.. Jaante hain na main yahan nahi reh sakti hun.. I lived with daarji because he is my father's father after papaji aur mumma left me..
Maan was listening to her patiently for the first time she was saying about someone who love her other than that leech family of hers..
Maan : phir kya apne daarji ke paas wapas chali jaogi..maan was standing crossing his hands on his chest.. Geet looked at maan and nodded in a NO...
Geet : nahi daarji ke paas nahi jaa sakti kisi ke paas nahi ja sakti.. Ma ki yaad aati hai par sab kehte hai hamari ma buri hain.. Bahut buri hain.. Jaante hain kyun.. Kyunki paapaji ke jaane ke baad wo mujhe chod kar chali gayi.. She left me.. Daarji and daadi were there for me phir daadi bhi geet ko chod kar chali gayi.. No one is there for me... Taiji me mana kar diya she told me that for me they are no one..
She was sobbing by now.. Her little heart was having so much pain she was given the pain of this lifetime..
Geet : aap jaante hai agar main yahan rahungi toh sab galat samjhenge aapki family sab log... Its better that i should leave..
She on her knees came to maan and cupped his face.. She was having so much of purity and innocence in her that everything evil wiill shy infront of the divine baby doll..
Geet : aap ye mat samajhna that you are responsible for the thing that happened.. Galti meri thi.. Aap jaante hai veerji aur rajji mujhe wahan leke gaye the.. It was my mistake that i was there ... Veerji ne kiya hai ye... Pata nahi unhone aisa kyun kiya.. I dont want to see anyone.. Sab ko dard deti hun main .. Ab aapko nahi de sakti.. Main yahan se chali jaungi.. Aap ko tension lene ki zaroorat nahi hai.. I wont tell anyone ..
Geet was trying to make him understnad with so much conviction that maan failed that she was crying with her each word... And his heart ached to see her like this.. Maan slowly kissed away her tears and made her look at him...
Maan : geet look at me.. I know that you still are not clear what occured between us.. But believe ma if i had known that you were trapped in this dirty game than i would have never touched you... But believe me you were never this much pure and innocent.. You were wild that night geet and i was drunk that i made love to you... Do you know that that was the one experience in my life that i cant forget ..
Jaanti ho kyun ?
He asked her and she nodded in a NO...
Maan : because that night made him feel loved and that night was not kind of business or s** that i usually had just because it was you.. That night gave me you.. I dont know why want you in my life but geet i cant let you go... And you know shona.. He teased her with the baby's name.. She made a cute face...
Geet : shonu... Baby will get angry..
Maan : aur baby's mumma..
Geet : wo bhi..
Maan : acha mishty but you wont go samjhi and with every HAQ that you and baby have on me.. I M baby's father na mishty..
Geet : haa..
Maan : soo from now on with the relation of baby's dadda.. My shona's mumma will not ever think of leaving me.. Will you mishty..
Geet smiled and kept her head on his chest smiling..
Geet : kabhi nahi..

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naina was looking at brij he was though sleeping but she knew that she had to search for geet tomorrow she had seen her in the park and that will give her about her whereabouts..

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maan looked at his mishty she was still not closing her eyes .. Turning from one side to the other..
Maan : geet kya hua so jao..
Geet : nind nahi aa rahi.. Bhook lagi hai.. Aap mere liye gol galle le aao..
That was not a request but order from her side and maan made her lie..
Maan : geet if you are hungry that something healty not something that will hurt you and baby after.. Just know you threw up..
Geet : nahi mujhe khana hai..
Maan: anything but not your gol gape..
Geet : getting angry..
Geet : aapko pata hai ya mujhe ki baby ko khana hai.. Aur uske baad icecream bhi..
Maan : ice cream is fine i will bring but no gol gappe wiat i will bring something healty for you..
Geet was sitting pouting..while maan brought juice and some veggie sandwiches for her along with nuts and almond chocolate icecream he had seen her eating that flavour many times..
Geet once didnt took but when maan forcefully fed her she had and relished it.. Later icecream making sounds and maan was getting really wild desires with her messing with icecream still he cant do anything till he will not solve the puzzle called geet...

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part 31 after my dinner if i will have papa's cell..
next part below with a note
Edited by suhaaana - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
get is to cute n her q
ye maanu geet ke q ka ans kyu nhi deta
may he also dont have any
bt maanu have to think something na😉
lv it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally Geet maan gayee.. dekha Maan kitana easy tha.. baby's mom lil childish but sensible... Geet is so cute yaar.. 😃 Maan fulfilling Geet's cravings... Amazing part...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
**MENDING HEARTS**

PART 31

IT was four in the morning.. And she was wide awake.. It was only five hours that they have slept and she was all up again.. Geet looked at the cushions which were neatly settled on the couch the bridge of pillows and cushions was not here.. She was sleeping on his chest while his hand was wrapped around her wiast which was covering their little one.. Geet was holding him from his stomach..
Maan : geet sleep baby...
Geet was twisting and turning she was wide awake and why not maan had warned her last night to sleep at that time just because she need to get up early.. And when geet asked how much early he blurted out four and here she is all awake..
Well this was kind of routine for geet back at her place everyday poor girl had to wake up at five in the morning and do all the daily chores she took care of her daarji specially as he used to be ill his medicines food she used to feed him.. He was though old but always make sure that she had her food else the poor girl will be deprived of the same.. He clearly knew how geet's tai will not give her food he had seen her doing this to geet many times and from that time he was there for his granddaughter yet he cant do anything to stop his son and DIL..
So now geet was all awake although maan had spoilt her habits she use to sleep a lot her craving food mostly he feed her and she bosses him telling the yummy one discarding the blunt ones..
The baby princess carrying their shonu didnt help to feel ticklish when he turned and slept taking her in his arms again.. Maan's breath was fanning on her neck shoulder.. But geet was not at all sleepy now..
She looked above and cribbed to her babaji..
Geet : babaji dekhiye na.. Kaise hain ye hum office ke liye late ho jayenge.. Inhone kaha tha ki jaldi uthun aur app dekho main uth gayi na..
Maan was listening to her cute blabbering and was smiling nuzzling to her neck.. He was so sleepy but she was talking to her babaji.. By now he had figured out that it was her god..
Maan sleepily : mishty sleep else i wont take you..
Geet tried to turn and he gladly loosed his hold so that she was now facing him his eyes were still closed and she was so close to him their lips were just inch apart..
Geet : haww you cheater.. Ramanchi ki aapne.. Aap jaante ho main aur shonu late ho jayenge .. Jaldi uthiye..
Maan : acha ramanchi.. Sweetheart i am not a cheater but its till two hours for you to get up and get ready..so now sleep..
Geet : sachi bol rahe ho aap..
Maan : ha shonu ko bhi pata hai.. Baby is smart but not her mom..
Geet : haww jhute baby ko nahi pata..
She looked at her stomach.. And looked at her stomach..
Geet : shonu aapko nahi pata na..baby dadda is lying na..
Maan opened his sight to notice the beautiful sight..
Maan carefully took her angry form in his arms and asked her softly..
Maan : mishty can i kiss you..
Geet fluttered her eyes on his demand she was not sure of the answer and maan sensed her hesitatin in her eyes.. He softly kissed her cheeks and was about to leave her when he heard her..
Geet : mujhe WO wala kiss karna nahi aata..
Maan: kaun sa wala ?? His teasy voice was looking so sexy with her innocence..
Geet : wo wala jo ..jo..
Maan : haan.. Kaun sa wala baby..
Geet was looking down and twisting his shirt that now she always wore at night..
Geet: wo wala jo samar aur maya ne kiya tha..(random names i dont remember any kiss scene from any movie me hardly watch movies)
maan : should i teach you mishty..
Geet didnt said anything but she just looked down while her cheeks turning read and read..
Maan : bolo geet.. Should i teach you..
Geet nodded and maan made her look at him..
Maan : look at me mishty..
Geet looked at him he just made her calm for the first time she saw him smiling and maan very carefully took her supple baby pink lips in his andsuck and nibble.. While geet was all numb with the sensations that she was feeling this was creating havoc in them.. Geet was feeling butterlies doing karate in her pit of stomach while maan was concentrating on her.. He touched the tip of her tongue and she just did what he was doing geet hold his neck supporting her body while maan settled her on him making her lay on him and he he took the support of the bed rim.. Their first kiss ended when maan saw geet's droopy eyes.. He made her settled beside her while she slept clutching his hand...

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two parts again.. Three in total today.. Share your views dearies

see note below its important..
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Posted: 12 years ago
@idunno dear the past only was of hosiarpur while everything was of delhi geet's family too belonged to delhi..
Why brij took geet to HP will reveal..


NOTE : DEARIES I AS THE THREAD IS ENDING I AM NOT OPENEING A NEW ONE.. REST OF THE UPDATES WILL BE ON BLOG..
INTERESTED READERS CAN JOIN.. WILL PROVIDE THE BLOG LINK TOO..
ANY PROBLEM DO TELL ME..
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part dear loved it
time to open new thread
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsome update
finally geet accepting maan as her baby daddy

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