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Posted: 12 years ago
Geet is much too innocent and cute... Maan now you have purge your sins... first steps towards it help Geet and get justice for her... Best of LUCK!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely part dear
so maan is trapping brij
hope brij will not find geet before maan a she has left the house
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice updaye
oh no geet left maan for his comfort
maan tried to trap brij...
disgusting person...
like is dead suha
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Posted: 12 years ago
i read ol parts of ff
n its really Osm
❤️ it😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
ye kya hogaya
geet left the house..
maan doesnt know about it
will she get in that mens hands..
omg..maan find her soon b4 she falls in trouble..
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Posted: 12 years ago
aww i lv it when she said to baby ur dad it was really cute n touchy😛😛
both thinking about each other
maanu for her trying to find out all n wnt to punish them
n here geet for his comfort want to leave him uff
ababji kya hoga
hope she didnt land in any trouble
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Posted: 12 years ago
Geet left ! all of a sudden !
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome
liked a lot dear
what will maan do now
sorry for replying so late
continue soon
waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 25
nice part...
OMG Geet has left and Maan has no idea at all...
cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
**MENDING HEARTS**




PART 26

Maan: I want her ..that means I want her I am ready to pay 10 million for her ..now say…

Well MONEY speaks he like a total pervert agreed … but maan didn't knew that one more problem was there lingering for him..his baby's mama had left him for his comfort …

Maan smirked knowing that now his plan cannot be backfired by any of the means this information will be upto brij and then maan can easily trap the creep without any further delay.. the man left and it was almost seven that maan had completely forgotten about geet … he was engrossed in his work and possibly for him geet was under the vigilance and strict care of the servants whom he had appointed for her but least he know that geet have made them fool and had left the mansion to live on her own…

Its been almost four hours that she had left the mansion unknown to herself that where she must be going she was conscious the fear that she did not land into the same problem that she had once faced in her life .. her eyes were getting droopy she was actually feeling tired ..geet had actually didn't even completed her lunch when maan had shouted at her she was hungry and tired…

Geet looked here and there , there was a small park where some kids were playing she without any delay went and sat on the bench she knew that there are many people and no one can harm her there..she was cutely looking at the baby doll she was hardly one and was trying to walk but the next moment she will fall down and started crying..geet being she couldn't see the little angel crying and immediately ran and kneeled down taking the baby in her lap..she caressed the baby and looked at the ground which hit the baby… for some time she was unaware that what she must be doing ..she was unaware of the gaze which was following her and was now seething into anger ..

Geet kissing the chubby cheeks of the baby and hitting the ground…

Geet : aww baby don't cry dekho I hit the ground..ganda ground baby ko lag gayi iss se…

The baby was looking at her with wide eyes and she gave her the toothy smile her two three teeth were visible geet smiled and now made the baby stand ..she hold her arms and made her walk slowly the baby giggled and was trying to say something..

Baby: bay..wak….

Geet too giggled and took the little angel in her arms…

Geet : haan baby walk… the baby tried to climb on geet but geet stopped her the protective or say the over protective mother in her made the little girl understand who once pouted but geet's sweet gestures made her smile a little more and more turning her into a hearty laugh…

Geet: na..na..baby doll.. shonu will get hurt..you know the small baby which is inside me… baby will not hurt shonu na…

The baby immediately nodded in a NO…

Maan who was seeing all these things came ..and from the other side the baby's parents came who too were seeing all the things..they were looking at the young girl playing with their little girl..and now seeing someone calling the girl they too came forward…

Maan : geet what are you doing here… didn't I told you to stay inside..aur kiske saath aayi ho tum yahan.i cant see your nurse with you…

Geet was startled with the voice he immediately looked in the direction of the voice and standon her feet taking the baby in her arms… the baby glared at maan seeing him yelling at her cute little aunty…

Geet looked at the baby who was glaring at maan she hid the little one in her embrace and warned her..

Geet: baby don't see him like this..warna tumhe bhi daantenge jaise mujhe aur shonu ko daatehain..

The baby pouted and looked at maan… but baby's mother came and took her from geet ..

Baby's mother : jia.. stop staring at uncle.. she scolded at baby and she looked at her mother with anger she pointed her finger at maan and then at geet …

Geet smiled..

Geet: are tumne toh ine dara diya..dont worry ye mujhe kuch nahi kahenge … I will not let him shout at me and shonu..warna tum ho na inhe darane ke liye…

Maan was geeting amused confused and he was actually feeling kind of odd one out in the visible crowd…

Baby's mother : hi I am priya aur ye jia hai..

Geet smiled : main geet aur ye…

She tried to introduce maan…

Priya: must be your husband…

Maan didn't know what to say ..he was tongue tied HUSBAND ..now from where this husband came…

Priya: first child… ?

She asked geet who shied and nodded in a yes…

Priya: congratulations…

Geet : thank you…

The baby left with his mum and maan hold geet's hand and took her with him to the car ..for god sake this girl was the way to hell…and the place where she was it was already deserted ..today only he had set his foot in the plan and geet all ready to be trapped…

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