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Sharmeen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#281

Part 9

Superb Cute Update 😃

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Sharmeen

@SheenGcian

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Posted: 12 years ago

#282

Part 10

Nice Update..
Brij is so Evil 😡
Hope Maan will take care of her 😉

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saf24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#283

Fantastic updates for chapters 9&10. Geet is so innocent that she doesn't realise what exactly took place with her. Fab job and looking forward to what is in store next.

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Gudiyalovesguru

@Gudiyalovesguru

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Posted: 12 years ago

#284

Excellent part...
so it was brij who played game...
and i am nt getting maan's POV...
actually wat happend with geet there????
where is our dadima????

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suhaaana

@suhaaana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#285

** MENDING HEARTS **

part 11

hiii all here are few answers to your confusions ... I am actually really sorry for not able to depict and clarify the things correctly...

doubt 1

some of you are in a doubt that geet is 12 yrs old... But she is actually 12th pass.. Completed her schooling
age of geet handa : 17+

next doubt : maan's age

26 years

doubt no 3 : why geet is so innocent despite of her age..
ans : the base of story is depicting a life of a girl who is mature by her age but the circumstances didnt let her to know what the actual world is like.. And believe me there are many like her who are not aware of what occurs and what is meant by physical relation...

doubt 4 : where is daadi..

ans : dont worry daadi will come soon in lime light..

doubt 5 : does maan get other girls pregnant...

ans : nope... Reason will reveal soon...

doubt 6 : how did geet wake in hoshiarpur

ans : keep patience updates are still to come...

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part 11

she was in his arms but needed a change so maan took one of his long shirt and when he was about to call the nurse she stopped him...

geet : mat jao na.. Mujhe dar lagta hai..
maan was reluctant to even think of changing her clothes she was already very delicate and fragile and an innocent princess in the hands of a beast like him will be only destroyed...

maan : geet let me call the nurse she will help you to change..

geet made a cute innocent face and she bit her lips she had sent the nurse to sleep as it was about to struck nine and nurse was yawning and poor geet she cant see anyone in any kind of discomfort so she asked her to go and sleep and he was not there at that time..

geet : um.. Wo nahi aayegi.. She was yawning and wanting to sleep toh maine use kaha ki wo so jaye...

maan looked at her with his keen eyes she was definitely one of her own kind... But her cute innocent talks and gestures made him to smile or atleast a small tinge of happiness emerged in his life with her arrival...

maan : acha use neend aarahi thi toh phir theek hai let me change your clothes . Waise bhi they are smelling...

geet : theek hai par .. She was thinking something but suddenly she jumped on her spot yelling and glaring at him...

geet : nahi.. Bilkul nahi... Main na khud kar loongi... Haww babaji .. Dekho na ye kya keh rahe hai... Aap toh jaante hai na ki mujhe kisi ke pass bhi jaane ke liye taiji ne mana kiya tha.. Aur kal main yahan se bhi chali jaungi...

though she had made up her mind but still he wasnt aware she thought with her baby brain but he was sitting listening to her she was looking up and talking animatedly gesturing with her hands making faces...

maan st : ye kya kar rahi hai... And why the hell she will leave tomorrow and where will she go.. And why... Kaise rahegi akele.. He was actually thinking quite a lot and that was the effect of her presence..

maan suddenly realised what he was doing and immediately stopped doing this.. He was going mad with her presence this time its her cute innocent gestures seems like she forget all those thoughts what she thought and crying for the same... She was badly hurt and it pained her too but she knew how to cope up with the same that was the difference between him and his geet...

maan : geet why are you thinking so much... And dare you think of leaving this place... Kahin se bhi dhoond loonga tumhe...

he threatened her and she was scared like a cute lamb... She made a terrified face...

geet : par main yahan nahi reh sakti..

What will your family think about me... Aur main waise bhi kisi ke liye shubh nahi hun.. My presence is cursed...

maan : acha let me see how much cursed is your presence is to me... And geet do you think you can survive alone...

he was trying to put some brains in her pea sized brain and she was still thinking...

geet st : akele .. Ye theek keh rahe hain geet akele kaise rahegi aur phir se kahin uss din ki tarah ... Nahi geet inse keh de ki tu kuch kaam karegi.. You need money for survival aur bina paise tu kahin nahi reh sakti...

geet : main na koi job karungi warna main aur baby kaise rahenge.. Aur kal main yahan se chale jaungi.. She was now getting stubborn and he was getting frustated...

maan : geet tumhe ek baat samaj me nahi aati ... You are not going anywhere and what job will you do... Kya kaam aata hai tumhe...

geet : sab kuch.. Haww aapko kya lagta hai mujhe kuch bhi nahi aata.. Main sab kuch kar sakti hun...

maan : okk the you will work for me and i will pay you... But ek shart hai.. You will stay with me and that too here i cant risk you alone with your childish acts...

geeet again getting with her stubborness..

geet : nahi reh sakti.. Aap samajte kyun nahi... Aapki family ko kya kahoge..aapki wife.. Unhe koi objection nahi hoga..

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Edited by suhaaana - 12 years ago