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Posted: 12 years ago
such hearttouching nd emotional part.geet is soo innocent to undrstnd all things.feeling sad 4her.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Read all the parts together. Liking the way the story is progressing. Fantastic job so far and looking forward to what is in store next.
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Posted: 12 years ago
** MENDING HEARTS **


part 6

such a innocent heart .. She was all worried for that little angel who was breathing in her womb she was clueless who did this to her does she even know in which condition she is.. Maan was with the doctor who had warned him about her state and the need for care and look after...

maan : i will make sure that she is perfectly fine...
doctor : fine mr khurana i will get the discharge papers ready..

maan entered the room only to see her carressing her still flat tummy she was continously looking on the monitor looking at the baby... He knew that its his blood .. He had came to know when she was unconcious adi had gotten her all the information and he knew by her gestures that who was she.. But still why she was there was a mystery...

****** TWO HOURS BACK *******

maan was looking at her wounds they were still fresh like someone have caused them recently... It was like a storm that was caused in him she was just like a child but the atrocities she was dealing were no less than bearing hell..

red and blue marks were very prominant it was looking like she was badly beaten and burn marks made his blood boil...

adi came to the hospital maan had already given him his whereabouts about his location... He handed him the file and looked at the lady lying lifelessly he was shocked to see the girl infront of him whom he had just known.. And what she was doing with maan sir was a question...

adi : sir here is all the information about miss geet...

maan : adi where is her family... What ave you found about them.. Her parents any siblings...

adi : sir miss geet handa is orphan she lives with her paternal uncle and aunt her parents are dead long back about fifteen yers back in a car accident but she was left alive...

maan : hmm...
adi : she is having two cousins an elder brother brij and sister rajji who is a year younger than her... The only love and affection she got was from her daarji and dadiji.. But dadiji also expired when she was about eleven...

maan loked at geet longingly she was also having same fate as his... He was looking at her when adi further gave him information...

adi : sir she was never treated good at her home just completed her matric.. Even the neighbours harly see her and from last three days she is missing...

maan : what is the source of income ..

adi : her uncle gurvindar handa is a small share broker and cousin is involved in illegal drug dealing unknown to the family... He is also involded in human trafikking ... Selling of girls mainly...

maan : adi you go...

************

after two hours when geet gained her conscious..
maan looked at her she was looking quite radiating her lips purred into a simple smile while she herself was just depicting her simple self..

maan st : within so many pains how can she be so quite and hurt... Doesnt it hurt .. Isnt she so naive to understand anything...

geet tried to get up when the needles pierced in her veins pierced her soft skin and she let out a sharp cry... She was crying tears gave their way through her eyes ... She sobbed.. Wory eitched his face.. He immediately went towards her and took her pale form in his arms.. She snuggled close to him she wanted someone who would soothe her pain who would care and here he was doing the same thing though he was too responsible for her fragile health and composed her...

maan : geet look its fine.. Dekho idar.. Geet meri taraf dekho... Why are you crying ...

she looked at him with those baby eyes filled with anxiety... Her lips pouted and tears flowing .. One drop after other... For a small second her found his entire world she was a beautiful naive princess who had made him mad but it was her body which had drove him to insanity but now her inner and outer self had totally captured him...

maan : geet look at me...
she made a cute face and sniffled hiding herself in him...
geet : dard ho raha hai...

maan : dont worry abhi doctor aayegi and she will put an ointment then we will go home...

geet : hmm par taiji ne ghar aane se mana kiya tha she disowned me saying that i am a black mark on the family... Why they did to me..

maan : geet always remember that you are not any black mark tum jaanti ho ki angels hote hai.. Just like stars...

geet : haan jaise mere ma papji... Wo mujhe chod ke chale gaye the toh daadi ne bataya tha ki they are looking after me ...

maan : exactly now if you think what all everyone say than angels will turn angry and you know meri mom bhi angel hai toh she will also be angry on you...

geet innocently...
geet : aur papaji.. Wo kahan hai...

maan : geet i dont have family except you baby and my daadi...
his voice was cold and hatred filled that she didnt understand...


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next part below
Edited by suhaaana - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing story..love maan trust on geet is innocent and the child is his..cant wait to know the culprit..they will be dead meat for sure under msk..pls cont soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh
you update
i am just roaming in thread and found anyher update
wonderful
maan fall for geet
but i am till puzzled why geet is in that party wr maan see her first time

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Posted: 12 years ago
read all the parts now..
its awesome..
thanks for the pm continue soon!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
read all the parts dear loved the concept
continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
** MENDING HEARTS **



part 6 B

angels are often hurt and she was no less than any angel in his life... Her smile her worry the way she talks about her family the craving of having parents was visible in their life... That day iitself maan had brough her to mansion while she was sleeping in his arms comfortably... His hands couldnt stop touching her tummy no wonder becoming a parent is the biggest wonder that occurs ... Geet was in her sleep but she was not even turning and twisting just sleeping holding his one hand but maan was aware of her proximity the way her head was resting on his chest three buttons of his shirt were open and her cheeks were rubbing continously on his bare chest.. Finding it difficult he tried to pry her off and make her away from his burning desires.. She was unconsiously torturing him and the next second he found her hand on his which was till now was with her.. They were together and this togetherness has marked arrival of a new life...

maan : geet i know who is actually responsible for your this state and how they threw you out alone.. Yumhe kuch bhi yaad nahi hai par mujhe sab kuch yaad hai.. That day your appearance was fake to the world jisse koi tumhe pehchaan na sake and i will make sure that the culprit will be given the hell of his life...


maan very carefully caring about her wounds she winced a little and then next snuggled to him she was under sedatives and was sleeping with no worries...

the servants who were working for khurana's since ages were surprised and shock to see a girl with maan their maan sir..

maan looked at the servant WHO WERE MORE THAN CONFUSED


part 7 page 35

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Edited by suhaaana - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part.. but is Geet lost her memory how she didn't recognize Maan. but Maan in glance knows she is carrying his baby..

waiting for next part.. do cont. soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 2
omg..who wiped her
that she is bleeding like this
n she is pregnant..
how..

is she married

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