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Posted: 12 years ago
mona ab aayi ho??? Disney graphics
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-


walking by???? agar koi finish hua tho mujhe bathaana


OK, 😊 aree yaar jo finishing point per thy wo to
atak hi gaye..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24



Mil gai fursat aane ki...



nahi yr.. morning se mummy ko nose bleeding ho rahi hai ,, usi me busy thi


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MonaSWrites

babbiee tera update mai nahi padh paayi .. kal padhungi .. mummy ki tabiyat thori kharab hai



😲 Aree kya hua mom ko...???
Take care of her dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MonaSWrites

babbiee tera update mai nahi padh paayi .. kal padhungi .. mummy ki tabiyat thori kharab hai



kya hua??

take care dear...

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Posted: 12 years ago

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OK, 😊 aree yaar jo finishing point per thy wo to
atak hi gaye..



isi liye tho maine wo padna start nahi kya... i will read only when it finishes
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😆 😆 ye teen kaun hai...??
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24



😆 😆 ye teen kaun hai...??



khaane waali chuhiyaan main se ek pakka mona hi hogi... baaki shaayed hum choose kar sakthe hain... kyu?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Thank you so much for like and commenting here 😃

I am clearing some doubts about Maan. He is 8 years old here and alive but doesn't live in India.


Part 7



Geet went away with Maan to his house. Mohan returned back his home when Alka promised she will take care of her and will made her drop home also, he didn't need to do worry about Geet. Though Mohan had no heart to leave her daughter alone but could not argue with the gentle lady. He went his home back with worried heart.

Alka took Geet in her room and tried to cheer her up. Geet had stopped her cry till then but wanting Maan to be with her. Alka left out ordering Maan to play with her till she comes back.

Maan sat near Geet on bed. Alka came back with some biscuits for Geet and some toys to play and she excused them saying she had works to complete. Geet became engrossed in her toys and forgot everything. Maan was getting impatient now, sitting over there with no work at all. Whenever he tried to go she again started crying for him. Maan was getting annoyed by her cry now, he was not used to this shouts and noises since the time of his father death. His life had been passing in complete silence since more than a year. Finally he left from room leaving Geet alone there letting her keep crying.

He was passing the corridor when found Geet was following him with rubbing her tearing eyes. He walked fast and hid behind a pillar. Geet found him missing, she started looking for him and finally found behind pillar.

"Bhow!!'' she started clapping in joy and laughing.

Maan did not heed over her act and again walked ahead to get rid from her but Geet again followed him. It seemed like hide and seek game for her. Maan took a turn and again hid behind a door but Geet had already seen him, she caught him in no time and started laughing.

Now Maan also started taking interest in her game. He also laughed. Many times he hid and she caught him. In little time Maan opened up with her completely. Once he runs and hid under stairway. This time Geet could not find him. After sometime Maan called,

"I'm here Geet!!''

"Where?'' Geet asked almost crying. She was feeling fear alone in this long dark corridor.

Maan tried to tell her the way but small Geet could not find him when suddenly she saw a room, she recognized it was Maan room where he had given her pearl. She clapped in happiness. She rushed inside thinking Maan should be there but found, it was empty but then she saw a photo frame, made by same pearl, was kept on table. Now she was confirmed it was Maan room so she came and climbed up on bed and sat there, started waiting for him. She was so comfortable there like it was her own place. Suddenly her eyes fell on color pens and drawing papers there on bed, she took them and started drawing, and went missing in her own world.

Here Maan was still waiting for her. When she did not come he came out and found her gone! He tried to seek for her but could not as his room was at the last end of long corridor. He could not think for going there and check and also the door was slightly closed. He came back to Alka and asked her,

"Mama did you see her?''

"Whom Maan', She was making dinner with a maid.

"Geet..''

"She was with you na beta''

"But she went missing Mama''

"Don't worry Maan, she must be playing with fishes, go and check there''

Alka did not heed much. Maan nodded and rushed to the place but Geet was not there. He also looked on every possible place but could not find her when Alka called both children for dinner.

She settled dinner on table and sat there when found Maan was coming alone. She asked for Geet then he said she was missing.

"What!!.. Maan but she was with you Beta you should have taken care of her''

Maan expression was showing he was accepting his mistake. He was sitting there with hanging head. Alka worried for Geet as she was very small and this mansion was so big. Also much part of this haveli used to remain in complete dark, she must be feeling scared alone.

They started looking for her. Alka was leading and Maan was walking behind her, looking at every place.

"Did you check in your room Maan?''

He said no and both rushed there and found Geet!!

She was sleeping peacefully on Maan bed, in pool of pens and papers around. She was looking so cute that both could not help themselves but to smile automatically. Maan smiled because he found her at last and Alka, she came near Geet and caressed her hair, thinking, "if I also had a daughter like her', A small tear fell down from her eyes thinking now, it could not be possible in this life.

She tried to wake Geet up she was in deep sleep, holding pen in a hand and paper in other. Alka left her sleeping and said Maan to have dinner.

After sometime, Mohan came to take Geet. Though he knew she would be fine but his fatherly heart did not let him live in peace. Alka said how she slept without eating anything. Mohan took Geet her in arms and found her holding Maan's things. He very tried to remove those papers and pen but Geet hold was so firm due to deep sleep and she was stirring when Mohan was trying to snatch things so Alka said let thing be with her only. Mohan left and Maan kept looking Geet from far. His child heart didn't understand his emotion but he had started accepting her friendship.

Next day, Geet woken up still holding paper in hand. Mohan came and kissed her head, "What's this Beta'' he pointed toward paper where she had drawn a figure.

"Its him'' she still didn't remember Maan name.

"Who Geet, is it me?''

She nodded no.

"Then?''

"Wo baba yesterday I had gone to his place na.. that my friend''

"Oho.. so its Maan?''

She nodded yes and smiled. "Baba I want to go him again today. You know we played hide and seek there and also he has lots of toys..'' she kept telling Mohan about Maan and what they did and what they played and Mohan kept hearing her sweet talk lovingly.

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About a week days passed when Maan did not meet Geet. One day Mohan was bringing Geet home from school when he saw Maan. He was with a servant, sitting on his cycle. Mohan asked where he was going.

Servant told that Alka had to go to court for land handling process and she didn't want to take Maan there. Maan was getting bore alone so he brought him here. He also told that they were going Delhi back tomorrow.

"baba ice cream!!!''

Suddenly Geet shouted seeing an ice cream vendor and started cribbing for it. Mohan make her buy one and also offered Maan. He told both children to sit in temple campus and have their ice cream and he himself went to meet random villagers there around.

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Both children was sitting and having their ice cream when suddenly some marriage chant started playing in loud speaker which caught Geet attention. She rushed to see what it was happening there and saw a marriage ceremony was taking place at a corner of Temple.

She became excited. She runs back to Maan and started dragging him there.

"I don't want to go, leave me'' Maan said but adamant Geet puffed her face.

Fearing that she will again start her dangerous cry Maan had to agree over her wish and both run to the marriage place and started watching them. There was a ritual going on where bride and groom were taking Phera around holy fire. Geet started clapping. She also runs inside temple (little far from the marriage place. This place was empty because all were involved in marriage ) and started running round n round around a small alive Hawan- Kund , before Devi Durga statue.

"What are you doing Geet?'' Maan came following her.

"I also playing marriage- marriage game'' Little Geet was so excited.

Maan came near her and said in his boyish attitude, "You can't marry alone Geet and it's not the proper way. I have seen in films''

"Film kya hoti hai?'' She looked him innocently.

"What you watch on TVs and theaters. Wait I show you how it happens''

He came and tried to search something around and found a Red Mata-Chunri. He picked it up and tied around her neck and a corner kept over his shoulder. Geet was looking at him as what he was doing!

The marriage chants were announcing on loud speaker in full volume. Maan took few Sindur from Devi statue and filled Geet head. Some powder fell on her nose and she squeezed her nose feeling weird smell of it. Maan wiped it with hand.

"Now we have to run around this fire''

Geet nodded. She started running around fire when Maan shouted, "Slowly''

She slowed down. Maan held her hand and both started taking Phera in their own childish way where Geet was jumping only and laughing that she learnt to play a new game. How many Phera they took they didn't count but finally they stopped. Geet dragged Maan back to see what the real bride groom were doing and found them taking blessing from elders.

"Now what we will do?'' She looked toward Maan curiously. Maan thought for some time and dragged her back and both took blessing of Maa Durge statue touching her feet.

"Yieee'' Geet was so happy and excited. She turned back and found the couple and people were coming this way only when suddenly Geet eyes fell on something shinning in bride neck. That Mangalsutra caught her attention.

"I also want to wear this'' she pointed toward Maan chain he was wearing in neck. Maan was in thought whether should give her or not. Geet eyes again started filling with tears and finally Maan had to give up before her cry and He tied it in her neck and this was the exact time when all people seen them and they got shocked!!

When found Geet and Maan tied in a holy Dupatta and Geet head was filled with real sindur and both were holding each other hands before Devi statue..



Precap: Past continues ... And Jhalak of Maan present


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Edited by MonaSWrites - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago


for the first time am feeling sad for maaneet marriage...

but how can the villagers take it as a proper one??? after all they are just kids...

with the glimpses of past its clear that geet does remember maan and all around her takes her as married... but what about maan???

loving the story line mona👏

ps: dhumka lagaana bhool gayi.. mein first jo aayi...

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Edited by -lakshmi- - 12 years ago

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