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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
part 2
awesome...
so funny...
bechare Maan and Geet...
Maan loves Khushi and Geet loves Arnav...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: spvd

hey dear u are posting the same thing again na till part 4? i have commented in the other thread till part 4...


No need of comment dear I was simply posting all the parts here because this thread I am going to use only for maaneet update, that thread I am not gonna use for manneet

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Posted: 11 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: spvd

excellent concept...
the intro itself is so funny and promising...
cont soon dear...


Thanks a lot Deepa😳
for commenting again

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Posted: 11 years ago
#14

Part 4 (ARSHI)

(Hey guys

Hope u r good

Ok guys come to story no mood of talking?)


'Hey Geet, is something bothering u' Arnav asked Geet with concern.


'Nothing, why?' Geet replied


'I am witnessing u r not happy with this engagement' Arnav said


'No nothing like that' Maan lied 'I just went to London without informing me abruptly u announced ur engagement'


'It happen so fast, he suddenly proposed me and I couldn't say no' Khushi said with a smile 'I know what's bothering u, u r worrying about me na, that how is Arnav'


'Once u will meet Khushi na, then u will come to know she is just perfect for me' Arnav said with delight


Here Geet and Maan couldn't tolerate their praising as if their talk is stabbing like a nail to them . They tried to avoid the topic but both Arnav and Khushi are adamant to make them listen.


'Ok come with me' Arnav said


'Where?' Geet asked


'Let me make u introduced with my would be wife'


'No no, I am f9' Geet tried to avoid


'No I am not gonna listen any word of yours, come with me' Arnav grabbed her wrist pulled with him to introduced her with Khushi


Maan and Geet are feeling like shot themselves


Arnav saw Khushi she is engrossed in few people, he freed her from them


'I told about my best friend, Here is Geet' Arnav acquaint with her with Geet give her a side hug.


Geet gave meek smile


'Hmm, nice to meet u, and I heard a lot from Aranv about u' Khushi and started to chat with her.


'Good or bad' Geet said taunted voice trying slightly smiling.


Khushi frowned 'Of Couse, Good only' said in teasing mood.


After sometime Khushi turned to Aranv 'oh Aranv, I forgot, I wanted to introduced with someone'


Geet is trying to delight in front of Arnav; actually she couldn't stand even 1 single second of Khushi, top of that meeting with Khushi's relative is unbearable and Arnav is not letting her leave.


When Khushi bring that person.


'YOUUU UUU!'

Only 1 word came from Maan and Geet mouth.


'You both know each other' Aranv and Khushi said unison


'bohut achi tara' Geet said with gritting


'So well, that I will never forget in life' Maan said with same attitude

'Wow! You know each other' Khushi said excitingly (wow! say oh no! margaye gi )


Arnav and Khushi both r acquainting them with their best friend


In front of Arnav and Khushi both Geet and Maan r smiling (wow! Looking so cute, I am thinking how they r so quiet, jo milete hi ek dusre kat-ne ko dorta hai, ab inta chup chap, guys don't u think that dal meh kuch kala hai, sirf kuch kala nahi hai, guys bohut kala hai)


Actually the scenario is dangerous. Their state of mind is horrible both r spitting venom with eyes, if possible trying to destroy each other only with eyes. (see, see I didn't tell u dal may bohut kala hai)

Their 1 look is enough to start 'Mahabahrath' (Guys y do u want make this peaceful earth into kalyug, I don't want to die to fast, even I haven't married yet, kuch toh tarsh kou )

'Didn't I tell u he is very good' Khushi said low voice to Maan

Maan plastered a fake smile on his lips nodded and thought 'Good huh! To the hell with that. When he had friend like Laila what else I can expect from him more, he trapped my innocent Khushi'

Arnav whispered to Geet 'she is just perfect, isn't she?'


'Hmm' Geet nodded with false smirk and assumed 'perfect! My foot! That idiot Romeo only had taught her such low things, now my Arnav is trapped in her hoax'


(Guys they asked u comment about their partner here u r cursing Laila and Romeo, woh log koi dud pita bachi nahi hai, jo kuch sikaya jai)


At night when whole world peacefully sleeping, where 2 people had demolished their own sleep with their own hand.


Maan having coffee walking to and fro in his bedroom and Geet is sipping hot chocolate sitting in her bed. (U r thinking y they r awake? Hai na? Actually I was thinking that only )


Geet is looking up celling 'First this Juliet was 1 problem and now this Romeo, y this things happening with me'


'I can't let this happen with me, whatever this Laila Majnu has to throw out of my path' Maan said with determined.

(aur main soch raha ho tum log ko demag ko kaise tik karaye jai )


'But how' both r utterly frustrated can't find any solution to get rid of this problem 'khuch toh Chamatkar' kar do, oh God'.


'Wait! Mil gaya Aladin' ki chirag' suddenly they just got little hope 'if if'with little smile slowly it turned into big (wow! Idea milgaya, matlab demag ki bati jal gaya jaldi jaldi bato, plzzz )


'Romeo's Juliet'(haa! Romeo Juliet) both smiled devilishly 'Laila's Majnu' (haa! Laila Majnu)


(don't give so much suspense, Jaldi jaldi bato I can't wait a single second now)


Both took the pillow jumped on the bed and sealed their eyes waiting for rising the sun.


(nahiii!!!!!!! Guys no no don't sleep, plz let me know the plan I was eagerly waiting to know ur plan, & without telling u r sleeping this is not fair at all, get up guys


Get up guys, u never listen to me, I hatech u, hatech u guys, katti katti katti

Y r u looking me like that?

Hmm

Yeh log gore bech kar so rah hai

Toh may bhi sone jah rahi hu


Tum bhi so jao, Good night


Bye

Fatima <3)


Disclaimer: This is just a fiction. Any names, characters, occupation and places of residence, incidents are all my imagination. Any resemblance to any profession, any similar scene to any other fiction or actual events is purely spontaneous.

Edited by fatima_FM - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: spvd

part 1
awesome dear...
funny...
so Arnav and Khushi are getting married...
and Maan and Geet are angry about this...


Thanks dear😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: spvd

part 1
awesome dear...
funny...
so Arnav and Khushi are getting married...
and Maan and Geet are angry about this...



Thanks dear😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: spvd

part 2
awesome...
so funny...
bechare Maan and Geet...
Maan loves Khushi and Geet loves Arnav...



th@nks dear😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: spvd

part 3
awesome...
funny...
very nice...
cont soon...


Thanks again😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: spvd

part 4
awesome...
funny...
cont soon dear...


Thanks dear😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20

Part 5


(Guys!!
R u always like this? Or only with me u r like this?

Y What happen?

Oh God So serious!

Chill out guys!!!

Smile😊

That's perfect😆)

Mr Romeo & Miss Laila eating so fast as if they r going 2 miss the last train (Guys slowly slowly) after finishing they ride on their own vehicles.

Miss Laila at her pink scooty

&

Mr Romeo in his black car. (He! he!😆What a lovely combination)

So Miss Laila reached to Mr Romeo's office

To make her mission successful.

(yeh loh, ab yehi baki thi, aur kya, her cursing session started)

Geet observing the office 'So Mr.Romeo is owner of such big'Badmash company' so what do you think he does here, no wonder, obviously he produced badmash only' (Guys is there any machine to produce badmash, if any such thing was there, what would happen just imagine🤣) She went to receptionist 'I want to meet with Mr Romeo where is his office'

'Sorry mam!' receptionist said

'Whoops! Sorry Actually I want to meet 'Yes boss' means ur boss' she said with big smile showing her teeth. The receptionist giving her weird look about her exceptional knowledge. After arguing few minutes with her not for not having the appointment she compels to call Mr Romeo means Mr MSK.


Maan attend the call 'Miss Geet wants to have few words with u'


'I don't know any Geet' Maan said, he doesn't even remember her name (how they will remember their name, yesterday they was so much busy tom & jerry fighting)

Geet is listening to their conversation.

'But she is telling she knows ...'before she could complete her sentence Geet cut her


'Juta, bilkul jut, Ur sir is telling lie' she shouted from other side.


1 dialogue was enough to recognize her mean Miss Laila voice.


He looked at phone and bang on his head and thought 'Oh God! This crazy girl is here, only crazy, not at all, she is equivalent to' Krazzy 4'oh God'


Then receptionist explained Geet to wait, after meeting he is going to carry her.


Geet is waiting and waiting half hour passed, now her temperature is rising with the increasing time.


At the board meeting Maan looked at his wristwatch with smirked and thought 'Miss Laila this is ur punishment to misbehaving with MSK'(waise this is not fair at all, to wait her like this, ha na guys)


'huh, what does he think of himself? 'Mughal-e-azam'or what? my foot, that he will make me wait like this, just wait and watch Mr Romeo, abhi tumare meeting ko bara se tera nahi bajaya toh mera nam Khushi nahi hain' She said angrily to herself (haaa, Romeo ab gaya kam se)

Meeting is going perfectly, suddenly peaceful office started to ring

Warning bell

Maan thinking what the heck' and people running here and there (may be is thinking, kahi Yamraj toh nahi aa gaya😆)


His meeting got ac ki teysi (Now only full on AC is required to cool down his temperature)


Full on rage mood he is shouting with his assistant 'Sir, someone prank with the fire'


'Who did this just find out? Go!!' Maan shouted and assistant left the room instantly.


Suddenly some1 offer a glass of cold water 'Have this, this will cool down ur fire'


Maan raised his head to look at the person 'YOU!' he yelled.


Geet said chilled out expression 'Ah, ah, don't shout, your anger will turn into bomb, which will blow BOOOM!' making blasting sound 'then no alarm will ever work again'

'So it was all done by u' he said with gritting teeth


'No, it was ur punishment for making me wait outside about 1 hour'(so yaha phe punishment punishment game chal raha hai, khabhi Romeo aur khabhi Laila)


'So u came here to take revenge, huh!' he said raising his brow


'Look Mr Romeo I didn't come here for any revenge, I have come here make deal'

'Ohhh deal' he replied sarcastically 'Miss Laila u r standing in my office, u know what I can do, in a second u will be thrown out of my office by my security, deal toh dur ki baat' relaxing in his leather seat

'Oh really Mr Romeo' showing all the teeth with a big smile 😃 'so u think that they will throw me out and I will keep quiet hmm' she playfully flustered her eyelashes


Maan is staring at her wired expression. (May be is thinking, yeh ladki ki demaag toh karap nahi ho gaya)


Suddenly angrily she BANG! On the table with the both hand a killing look, Arnav has taken back with loud sound 'then u r wrong Mr Romeo, if they touch me than I will break all their bones' (bechara Maan is thinking kis goondo ko beach main fass gaya, nahi goondi )

She looked at him frowning her eyebrow 'Aur what do think about me, I don't know anything huh, I am black belt in karate and knock out many guys, ok do u understand Mr Romeo' (aye lo, shuru ho gaya punching mood)


'Hmm' he nodded his head stupidly (ab stupid ki tahar sar kiu hila raha ho)

Suddenly his devilish side of brain chided him 'from when u r listening to nonsense of this girl now not any anymore' (ab aya na uot pahar ka niche)


Maan said angrily 'Look'


'Look what?' She also shouted equal anger.


'Yeh baath peh kiu chilati hai' he thought

At last Maan give up and said softly 'look, Miss Laila this not ur bedroom ur r calling Romeo, this is my office I have reverence over here, so stop calling me that Romeo' (jab sidi se baat kiya tho tab kuch asar nahi hua, aur ab jab ungli teri kiya toh, sher ban gaya chua)


Her anger has little calm down 'Ok Mr Romeo'.


'Again'


She bit her tongue 'Whoops!'


Maan introduced himself 'I am...'


(So Guys at last their fight is over, now they r introducing themselves, so guys what will happen huh!

First they tell their name

Then meeting-fitting at coffee shop

Than eye lock and all

Hai na guys?

NOT ALL GUYS

They r Romeo and Laila

Agar asi hogaya toh main apni naam change kar dunga

Bilkul Nahi, khabhi nahi karonga! I have such sweet name, Parosi ki naam change kardunga par mera nahi

Naam tik karke rakna guys


Fatima <3)

Disclaimer: This is just a fiction. Any names, characters, occupation and places of residence, incidents are all my imagination. Any resemblance to any profession, any similar scene to any other fiction or actual events is purely spontaneous.

Edited by fatima_FM - 11 years ago

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