MG SS: Salaam -e- Ishq * || part 5 & 6 @ page 30 16/6/14 ||* - Page 3

"enjoy reading n do leave a few words .."
Few words...hmmm...
Sobi I'm going to leave so many words😆

Hayyyeee kya story hai yaar😳
Main toh dreamworld me hu😳
I looovvveeeddd so much.,.,.,.,😊
I can't form words how much I loved it😊
Yaar sissy tu toh bahut talented nikli apne papa aur bhai ki tarah😎
Seriously sobi...u r just great😊
An awesome writer😊
abhi khatam nahi hua mera comment ..more coming below😉😃

Haayyyeee mere maan ki entry😳 main toh THUD...

ok let me tell you...about dialogues on which I was like 🤣
1. Whole maan-adi's discussion🤣
2.. Agar aaj ka aapka disater phelane ka kota poora hugaya
3.Geet (read the card n found the company's name as THURANA) :gosh Thurana group ...( N started laughing n hit her head with the card itself)


Inn sabke samne bahut saare 🤣 ye wala smiley laga😆

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Now most imp part..next half of the update..
When I read first half of the part...I felt like they are hopelessly in love with each other...but not realized yet..
as I saw maan is J...geet is crying cause maan's anger on her..
A person can only cry for there loved ones or due to loved ones..
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But when I read next half part...I was like😲
They are in love and even realised it much before..⭐️
Here this story got my heart..
Now I'm hopelessly in love with this story😳
The way you described geet's CS..like smart yet innocent,naive...Marvellous sobi...loved it so.o.ooo much😊
maan k baare me toh kya kehna😳
My poor maan is scared cause everyone left him ..
Still he can't resist his love care for geet..
I loved this maan ...sober, humble⭐️😳
This was most beatifull part..
The way you write cute yet perfect..their fight yet their love...their present & their past 5 years journey⭐️⭐️
So much to say...but I'm wordless now...itne se hi kaam chalalo😉😆
Will be eagerly waiting for next part..😊
Continue sooon!!
plz jaldi dena😊
Luv u sobi..mera big bro😊
Pardon me for mistakes...Mobile se comment kiya hai...
😊

Originally posted by: daredevilisback

"enjoy reading n do leave a few words .."
Few words...hmmm...
Sobi I'm going to leave so many words😆

Hayyyeee kya story hai yaar😳
Main toh dreamworld me hu😳
I looovvveeeddd so much.,.,.,.,😊
I can't form words how much I loved it😊
Yaar sissy tu toh bahut talented nikli apne papa aur bhai ki tarah😎
Seriously sobi...u r just great😊
An awesome writer😊
abhi khatam nahi hua mera comment ..more coming below😉😃

Originally posted by: lovebirdsmaneet

5yrs stil their silent wala ishq uff
both were head over heels in love with each other
maan was soo protective na must say posesive
no hardles were their bw them but their insecurivw and hesitation waiting for next

Originally posted by: Romanaxx

Beautiful story dear :)
awesum :):)

Originally posted by: drashtirockzz

luved-it

amaizing

continue-soon

Originally posted by: abinash079

lovely start
both love each other but cant express due to their own reason

Originally posted by: lehr

congrats for the new story dear

part 1 is awesome

continue soon

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Originally posted by: sandymg

great start..

continue soon!!!

Originally posted by: sheetalvasa

Wow! Beautiful concept. GHSP ki yaad aa gai.

Maan ka gussa & geet disaster queen!!

Dono Mann mai hi ek duje ko pasand karte hai

Annie, dadima, prem dono ko milane ki koshish kar rahe hai

Aapane CS bhi bahut interesting banaya hai

Cont wait for next part