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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -MSKdeewani-

Edited my chutku comment 😆


😆😃...thanks Sweeto❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shikha_guta25

SUPERB N NICE UPDATE 👏👏👏
BUT ITS TOO SHORT

NYways i liked it n enjyed it 😃
continue soon as im waiting eagerly 😊


thanks Shikha

well from next to next update I will try to give longer ones
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gonna update in a while😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mirror1521

tomorrow aaj hai kya 😛


yup 2morrow is aaj only😆

will be updating in an hr
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Posted: 11 years ago


Thanks Taslima and Jyo for the beautiful banners🤗


Thanks a ton everyone for sticking up with this story, though lost the track of it. I will try to update regularly from now on, sry for the trouble friends. Thanks for all the comments...have replied for a few...will do for the rest 2morrow, sry for the delay😳


This update is for my sweetie (candy_js) and Priya (Priya_21) as I don't want to get beaten up by them, but I am kinda sure they will in any case beat me up at the end of it though its lengthy...of course teaming up with all the readers too😛😆😆


@pop77...hey dear I tried to work around college moments, though not much masti for now😛, but still hope u like it



Part-11



On his way to college, Maan had million things going on his mind, which seemed to have forgotten to rest making him more worried and restless.

He did not miss all the questioning and astonishing glances as soon as he reached the college premises as he expected, but as he tried to make his way to class ignoring everything he heard a loud shriek...MAAN...MAAN...which halted his steps and made him turned around to find the source of it

And when he did what he saw made him gulp his saliva hard

Where the hell were you

Can't you just bloody pick up the phone

Tumhe pata hai hum kitne tensed the

Aisa koi bin bataye chala jata hai kya

Aur tum apna yeh gussa control karna kab sikhoge...ek problem aate hi pehle gussa phir sochna aata hai...hadd hai

Ab tum aise goor..goor ke kya dekh rahe ho

Jawab do...kahan chala gaye itne din bina kissi ko bataye

But all these words had a very different effect on him...he was watching all with amusement.

It kinda felt hilarious to him and laughed out loud too and of course gained cute, cute glares from some of his dear friends while some were grinning at him.

Before he could control his laugh to not to miff his friends more, Raghav approached him and asked the reason behind his laughing so much and to share with him too, but this just set him to another bout of laughter.

All his friends were very happy to see him smiling, but didn't let their cute anger waver and walked off leaving behind the best buddies.

R: Now tell me what has happened that made the great Maan Singh Khurana to laugh said Raghav teasingly

Maan ignoring his friend's tease went on explaining all the happenings once he reached college

R: Maan they were worried for you, and their concern was natural...isme itna hasne ki kya baat hai

M: Arre baba mein samajhtha hoon and I wouldn't have laughed at all if it was coming from the girls.

R: Don't tell me said Raghav shaking his head understanding the reason behind his laughing

M: Yup that were all the bandars of our group, Adi, Arjun, Rizwaan and Varun, teasing girls and you should have seen the way they told me all those words, typical Hindi serials type...he said the last few words in a whisper but Raghav's sharp ears caught that and Maan too understood that and was avoiding any eye contact with him...yeh Geet mujhe sach mein pitwaa ke rahegi. She and her habit of watching those stupid shows that eat my brain and now I am even comparing things with them.

I know they did this to make me smile and not to feel awkward...Maan tried to do damage control by diverting Raghav, but whatever he said was heartfelt...You know I am very lucky to have friends like you all who love and care for me so much and want to see me happy. I am really blessed to have you guys. He was overflowing with emotions seeing his friends' attempts to make him comfortable and couldn't help himself from expressing them.

R: Accha...achha ab itna senti mat ban aur chal class ke liye late ho raha hai

M: Haan par ab thoda time haina mujhe unhe manane tho de

R (with a teasing smile): You can't do that now Mr. Maan...seeing him confused further says...They have to submit their projects today and are gone to do so. They can't be late like you who is an exception, the MSK.

M: Shut up dude...its all because of elections they gave me more time for submission. By the way, aren't you late for your class now.

R: oh teri, mein toh bhul hi gaya...I can't miss this advance surgery technique class says Raghav all the while collecting his books and starts to move ahead after saying catch up at lunch man only to be held by Maan and when he turns around he sees a smirking Maan clearing indicating his intentions of getting him late for all the teasing.

M: Arre itni jaldi bhi kya hai...abhi class start hone mein 2 minute hai and continues without giving him a chance to speak or free himself from his hold...waise tu yahan kar kya raha hai asked Maan narrowing his eyes.

And it is when Raghav remembers the main reason to be in Arts Block and that is to meet his sissy to know how she is doing as she left disturbed the other day but seeing Maan he forgot all about it and now its too late to check in her class as all the classes must have started and he too was getting late but most importantly he didn't want to put her in a spot in front of everyone knowing her hesitant nature and the devious nature of some of their classmates.

M (seeing his friend all lost said): Come to earth My Lord

R: Huh..??

M (shaking his head): I said you are getting late dude

R: oh yeah...will catch up at lunchtime Maan and dare you run away warned Raghav and moved towards his class not giving any chance for Maan to retort for his warning.

Unknow to both of the buddies, there were 2 people who watched all the happenings making one to burn in anger at the fail of well devised plan and the other to melt in the moment seeing Maan laughing so openly, but both couldn't express it or do anything about it.

The sight of a carefree Maan was eating up someone very badly. The person was very angry to see Maan so happy and was feeling very hard to digest the fact that the plan failed to break Maan emotionally. That person wanted to humiliate Maan and make him alone and to get just pity from everyone, but it all went in vain, so now was busy in thinking ways to destroy his enemy, Maan, completely and didn't knew when the time passed and lunchtime already came.

Canteen

Parul: We don't want to listen a word from you boys...come on girls lets move

Rizwaan: Ohhooo hold on Tigeresses (the girls in Maan's grp are called Tigeresses when they are teased or appeased by the boys)

Nisha: You all love to make fun of us and our feelings right...now we will see how u enjoy it without us, chalo ladikiyun

Varun: Wow...u girls are so sweet, leaving us all to make new-new plans to irritate you guys

Adi: Ahhhaaa...now I understand why they melt so soon whenever we irritate and then manofy them.

Ridzy: Oh really...and what conclusion has your stupid brain come to

Varun: Well it is because you can be teased again so that you enjoy it more, but act as if you are very hurt and angry.

Arjun: Absolutely right...otherwise y u guys will leave us all alone to plan and plot against you. You all want us to tease you guys so that you can act angry and make us roam around you pleading and pampering.

WHAT!! said all the girls shocked and angry

Maan: Guys...Guys its enough

Raghav: Do you really think you are making any sense boys

They all were interrupted by Maan and Raghav who were watching everything amusingly along with Rashmi, Vinay, Priya and Joy who were enjoying the free show though they don't know the reason behind this cat fight while Pinky was all busy in her eating😆

Oh you both gentlemen...JUST SHUT UP said all the boys but in turn they shut their mouths receiving a deadly glare from their friend (well u can guess who that is😳😆) and earning quite a few giggles from the tigresses making them frown and sulk

M: I am sorry...as soon as the words left from his mouth he was encaged by his cute and sweet friends making all boys to pout and crib for having to manofy girls for their deed though they did it all for Maan leaving Maan smirking

R: Agar tum sab ki nautanki hogayi tho kuch order karle...I am famished guys and then entire lunch time passed with Maan catching up with all and their cute and funny fights, but Maan didn't fail to notice Raghav's worry all through the lunch and thought to ask about it later in the evening when they meet up after college time.



On the other side, it seemed like a best day of Geet's life. The early morning surprise with Maan home, the eye-pleasing moment the minute she reached the college premises seeing her Maan laughing, a content heart knowing the people who made him smile making her worries vanish, and the proud and happy moment she had in her classroom where her professor praised her for her hardwork and talent for taking care of every minute detail in the project left her grinning big.

And this is how Raghav found her and was very happy. The other day when she left abruptly almost in tears which he noticed though she tried her best to hide and her absence for the next 2 days has left him disturbed and worried. He could not see his little angel in so much pain and her absence has feared him, but now when he looked at her smiling and happy could not stop himself from reaching and hugging her tight.

Hey Angel...missed you so much

Missed you too Veerji said Geet bringing a sweet smile on her brother's face, but soon he extricated himself from the hug with stern face

Tera mobile kahan hai??

Mobile Veerji said Geet confusingly yet forwarded her phone to him

Raghav was very happy to see her so free with him and was elated when she addressed him as Veerji but remained stern... Yes mobile. Don't you think your brother should have your number. Do you have any idea how worried I was when you left so suddenly the other day and were absent for 2 days. Kuch bataya bina chaligayi aur jab maine awaaz di tab bhi nahi rukhi saying he saved their numbers in each other phones.

Though Raghav tried to be stern, his soft and concerned voice told it all to Geet. She was overwhelmed and emotional seeing his love and care for her and was thanking her babaji in her heart for sending an angel like brother in her life.

After saving the numbers, when Raghav looked at her understood her condition as he was also going through somewhat same emotions and diverted her mood asking the reason for her unbound happiness

Aap ko pata hai Veerji aaj class mein kya hua...without waiting for his answer or seeing his reaction she went on telling him the happenings of the day and recalling them...

Geet was praying hard while she made her way to college. She was tensed as today was the day when her results were to come for her first ever project after joining college about "Our Dream Room." Though it was a simple one as it is the first one to know students' knowledge about their subject, she was praying for her results to be at least good if not best. At the same time, she was complaining to her babaji about her luck after seeing Nakul.

Hey babaji sabko mujhe phasa kar accha lagta hai...mein bichare akele iss jhwalamukhi (Maan) ko kaise jhelungi koi sochta hi nahi hai...pehle woh sam aur ab dadi said Geet making a cute angry yet cry baby face but was determined to talk to dadi about her secret planning (sending Nakul) and teach Sam a very good lesson for hurting her Maan

That is when she reached college and the sight her eyes caught made her complains vanish into thin air and her life and smile brightened more than the sun. She saw her Maan laughing heartily with his friends that made her lips automatically stretch into a big smile and not wanting to disturb them, which would have happened if Raghav saw her, made her way to class.

The moment she reached the class all her nervousness came running back making her fidgety and giving chance to others to tease her more, but to her luck and babaji's grace professor arrived.

Prof. Govind: Good Evening Class. Are you all ready to know the results??, but in answer all he received is complete silence, which made him grin more than already he is.

Well, we will start with the Project Stars of our class and started calling one by one and gave them nicely for their zero basic knowledge and as the time passed he was seemed to get more and more disappointed with everyone for their lack of knowledge and disinterest and taking things lightly by some students who could have done much better and finally the chance of the nervous freak girl (waah Geet teri liye yeh naam perfect suit karta hai...save me babaji) has come.

Prof. Govind: Miss. Geet Handa

Geet: Ye..yes Sir

Prof Govind: Hmm...I want you to give your presentation again now, hope you remember it.

That once sentence from Prof and all the eyes on her brought her near to nervous breakdown and all drenched in sweet within no time but again remembering Maan she went ahead and gave her presentation leaving everyone stunned with her knowledge, confidence and style of presenting and of course some of them jealous for gaining brownie points of Prof. Govind which was evident with the pride in his eyes to get a student like her and a smile that was rare to see.

That really was a great presentation Miss. Handa. You really impressed all your professors and I hope you keep it up and wouldn't disappoint us saying he asked her to take her seat after grading her the highest and ended the class not before revealing that all the students presentations were seen by all their class professors along with the principal. I know you all must be surprised but as the elections were on and almost all the classes were stopped due to your over enthusiasm we thought to check your abilities in this way saying he left the class with a grin leaving all the students jaw dropped.

This is what happened Veerji. I am so happy that they all liked my project. I know now I have to work very hard and not disappoint them ever and she went on and on her plans of how she will be doing that, but what she didn't notice was a happy and shocked Raghav (well I think you can guess why he was shocked😆😆)


Precap

Just Maaneet😳 and a reentry😉


Sorry guys for no maaneet though a long update, but to compensate it all next I will give a Long and most of Maaneet update where you get to see a different Maan😉

Hope you guys like this update even without Maaneet


I have tried to show the bond between Maan and his friends and the progress in Raghav-Geet's frndship too here...waiting for your likes and views about it😳

Edited by Cherishh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
yaha pe upd aane wala hai kya 😉
mai res kar leti hu first place 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mirror1521

yaha pe upd aane wala hai kya 😉
mai res kar leti hu first place 😛


yup dear...just 2 mins, posting it
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mirror1521

yaha pe upd aane wala hai kya 😉
mai res kar leti hu first place 😛


posted dear and me bhaginggg too😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice ud
all friend make maan laugh
geet feel happy to see maan laughing
who's the another person who was not
happy

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