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Posted: 12 years ago
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I will post all the parts again! SO that the flow is not broken!!
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interesting dear! continue soon👍🏼
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#13
thanks for starting it again...
PM me 😊
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#14
thanks dear for starting again
do pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congrats on the new ff
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesme cs
love it
con soon
n do pm please.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank you for restarting this ff...
will be waiting 😊
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As I said, I'll post all the old parts again...so that the flow of the FF is not broken!

PART 1

The thick forests of Mumbai show a directly opposite story to the buzzing life in the city. If the people inhabit the city...the forests are abound in wild beings...quite a perfect setting for some people...Oops...I may not say...'people' but beast would be a proper setting...

Far in the heart of the forest...a small grassy area is reverberated by the sound of an elk, the leaves rustling and some heavy heartbeats...a predator is watching. When attention is moved across the forest...shiny blue eyes glitter from the bushes... The elk seems unaware of the danger creeping towards it...the predator is way too smart and fast for the timid prey. And then, with a fragile leap...the shadow brings down the prey and all is over in a few seconds...the elk remains alive only for moments while the predator preys over its blood. The predator is in danger of losing its secrecy...a teenage girl has seen it preying on the elk's blood. "Eee..."screeches the girl... "Who are you?" The predator rises and moves towards the girl. Drops of blood leak from the sides of its fangs... "Don't come near me...I will shout!" Poor girl! Do what you want to...!

Saying this, the predator pounces on the girl and bites her...It's not tough to bite...its as easy as sinking teeth in butter... It drinks blood in content and then cremates the body...It drops the ashes in water and leave instantly...

The Residence:

Everyone is waiting for Geet...Ayesha cuddled in Milind's arms and Leher in her room with Abeer...

Ayesha: Geet aa jaye...phir chalenge...!

Milind: Yes My Love! He smooches her lovingly...! They clearly remember that sleepless night when they had found Geet...injured down a cliff...bleeding from tip to toe...

A loud thud sounding from the first floor, inform about Geet's arrival.

Ayesha: Ah! She's home...finally! Oye Geet...aak kya mila...

Geet travels down the stairs washing her hands and mouth... Aaj...kuch nahi...ek elk aur ladki! Ladki? Haan...bechaari ne mujhe dekh liya to thikaane lagana pada! oh! thank god...! Waise tu aaj ghar mein hi hain na raat mein...? Till now! To theek hai...main aur Milind jaa rahe hai...bahar dinner karne! (Winks at Geet) hmm!

Her phone rings...ACP's number flashes on the screen.

Dr. Geet...sir! Geet...an emergency...I need you in 15 minutes...CID Bureau! Yes Sir...! She hangs up the phone...Ayesha! Mujhe bureau jaana hai...tum leher ko bata do... hmm!...

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Khurana Mansion(that morning):

Maan Singh Khurana at the breakfast table reading business plus. Dev sitting by his side...playing with Aashka...his and Naintara's daughter... Maan looks lost...

Dev: Bro! aap tension mein...kuch hua hai kya...

Maan: Nahi!..kuch nahi...main office ke liye nikal raha hoon...meeting hai...

Khurana Constructions...:

Maan sitting in his office gazing at a photo...his wife's photo...aur better...his victim's photo... Geet Handa


Her smile...her face...all so beautiful...divine... Maan thinks to himself-Maan Singh Khurana...tu itna janwar kaise ban gaya... itni pyaari muskaan...tune isko kya kar diya... tujhe Geet hi mili thi... apne iraado ko anjaam dene ke liye... Geet...kahaan ho tum...mere paas aao...mujhe tumse milna hai Geet...please.!


Precap
Maan meets Geet for the first time!
Edited by .BadtameezDil. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Me first😃
Nice u r reposting it..
I've read all parts u updated
so will join u after reposting all ..
plz make it fast😊
Edited by daredevilisback - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its longs time I read this FF...waiting for u to continue...but u started it fresh...thanks

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