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Posted: 12 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: LILY111144

hw s dy ??mera late nite lapy band hei,late nite so ke suba utha nehi jaata tha aur headace hoti thi,guess wt blunder idid ,told dis 2 my hubby,ab bhukting...



Very bad...
Aur kitni der tak ho...??
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
thank u for ur kind words Mona dear.
im very sad but i know life has to go one. im trying to get better and come out of it.
my other kitten is very sad. he is a big boy of almost a year but still, she was his mama and animals sense each other's absence. i have been trying to make him happy.
no matter how old i get or whatever, im never going to stop acting like a 7 year old when it comes to pets. i have had cats for almost last 18 years when i was a kid. at first i thought i would forget about them when i grow up but see some things just grow up with us :) i'll always be the 7 year old with regard to my pets :) n im glad u can understand this. i know the value of pets. i had a cat i had named Fillie :) she lived with me when she was only a month old and i had her for 8 years. she died three years ago. she was my LOVE :'( i still miss her. u cant forget the pain of losing a pet :( they r best friends given to us by nature :(
anyway i hope u will update in some time
i will read and comment :)
im glad my friends are there for me when im sad n i have people around me who r understanding it n not making fun of me.
thank u again for ue concern. it made me feel better :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



matlab sirf babie ke liye??? or mere liye??? mona dekhhh


Naraaz mat ho...Wo mere liye nahi hai...😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: singh24


Naraaz mat ho...Wo mere liye nahi hai...😆

yeh tum sabke lye...😳
Fresh Evening
Fresh Evening
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: singh24


Naraaz mat ho...Wo mere liye nahi hai...😆



oops sorry... yummy samosa dekhke nazar bhatak gayi thi... its been long that i had one... and see lily brought only for mona...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: LILY111144

yeh tum sabke lye...😳

Fresh Evening
Fresh Evening



dekh babie... mona ke liye samosa aur hamare liye chips aur juice!😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57


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The Downpour... Part 39


Geet was so shocked to found that it was the same ear ring which she was wearing yesterday and had threw it away in anger. She picked it up. Started to recall everything which had happened in KM. what Man did and what he had said. She tried to recall his every word, his action and his song.

In her unprepared mind she could not remember the entire song but somewhere her heart was saying, he had taken her name!

Her body became cold, thrilled with the realization. Her hands and legs started shivering. She shuddered when thought,

"He was talking about me???''

She came back to mirror and placed that earring in earlobe. Her face glowed when it touched her skin. Her eyes started pouring happy tears when found unexpected. She could not believe on her fate, on her luck that could have given her this much happiness. She could not believe that Maan could have loved her.

She was lost in thought when again got call from Asha and then she remembered she had to reach KC. She hurriedly got ready but changed ear ring, not wanted him to know her truth.

She came out taking file. Her world had been changed, everything had been changed and everything looked new around her. She was more than happy, wanted to laugh, and wanted to twirl, dance. She wanted to run and reach to Maan and then...

"Fir kya karungi??''

She shied, smiled and patted forehead for behaving like mad. She took taxi and sat inside. Maan thought was giving her Goosebumps. She remembered how he used to tease her, his mischief, his naughtiness everything was for her only. It made her blush hard. She was smiling and shying like a new bride.

She found herself grinning like fool. She chided herself. "Geet, what are you doing?''As if, it could have been stopped, it was not in her control now.

"But Geet, couldn't he say everything in easy way. Kitna rulaya mujhe. Now it's my turn. I will also pester him till he say sorry!!'' She pouted, complained and then again smiled. She was not being sure what should do. How to handle her uncontrollable happiness and with these thoughts she reached to place.

Geet came out leaving taxi and paid. She searched for Asha and found her standing across road, waiting for her. Geet waved smiling. She was more than happy feeling him near. She was just few steps away from KC, could have seen KC building and his cabin window from outside. Her eyes moved toward it. She felt like run and reach there then and there and see him.

Asha started crossing road. Geet eyes were busy travelling over KM building. She did not notice a car was running toward Asha in full speed and when Geet watched it, she runs to save her. And all of sudden, everything became silent and place been filled with hundreds of people shouting, noising about the accident of two girls.

##

Maan reached Geet home but it was locked

"Where is Geet?''

He called her but phone came unreachable. His heartbeat became fast thinking something bad happened to her. he scolded him to think like this but adamantly his mind was forcing him to think like this only. He called Asha but couldn't succeed talking with her also. He got frustrated. He went back in car, extremely annoyed and finally called Adi, thinking can talk Asha in office.

After few impatience rings Adi took phone.

"Why the hell you wasn't taking phone Adi!!' Maan shouted then he tried to collect his calmness.

"Get me talked Asha''

"Wo Maan sir'''

"Adi don't waste my time, I want to talk her urgently!!''

"Asha is not in office sir''.

"Nahi hai? Matlab? Where is she??'' Till then Maan had quite guessed something was not good. He could hear the normality of Adi voice was missing.

"Adi tell me where is she!!!''

"Sir, she had met with an accident. She in hospital''

"What!!!'' Maan shocked. "But how it could be possible. She was in office how did she reach on road???'' Question arose in his mind. And then his mind went toward Geet, "where is she'' Before he could ask, Adi himself told,

"Geet also..''

Maan eyes widen hearing her name. His anxiety started reaching high and breaking any limit of straining. "What happened to her Adi!!! Where is she!!!!''

"Sir Geet was with Asha when accident happened and both are here in ABC hospital. If you'''

But before Adi could be completed, he heard car was already started and phone became silent.

##

In no time Maan reached hospital. He was very worried for Geet, wanted to see her now!! His face became drained out like had not inhaled a single breathe since had heard about her. Leaving car in parking he runs inside, started to search for Adi. He was querying on reception when,

Maan sir'' heard Adi. Maan immediately turned to him. He hastened, clutched him tight, shook him asking "where is Geet, how is she Adi!!!!''

Adi was shocked to see his condition. He had not seen him like this every before.

"Calm down sir, Geet is alright''

Maan stopped, looked Adi quietly for a second. It seems, his one sentence had returned back the gone life in Maan, relief breathing had returned back in him.

"Where is she?'' he almost whispers. Adi pointed toward a direction. Without waiting for a second Maan hastened toward the direction. He crossed a long corridor, took turn and stopped, when saw her standing in front the ICU. She was alone, crying. Place was hushed. Maan heart skipped beats. She was all fine, standing before his eyes, nothing more he could have asked from God. He squeezed eyes tight to control his inner turmoil and then opened it, fearing if she would disappear again.

Geet heard something known, something which she had been familiar with, since long. She heard familiar footsteps coming toward her; she heard someone's breathing sound. She knew who he was. She turned, found him there, before her eyes, for her!!

Her every excitement which she had been experiencing since morning started to irk her. She felt like if he was there, she did not need the whole world being by her side now. Her burden of heart and happiness of finding the treasure of life started to force her to embrace her world, her love, her Maan and she runs toward him.

Without thinking anything, without giving second thought that what if someone sees her but no, she had no thoughts at all. She had crossed the boundary of any mental ability and her heart was controlling her now and it wanted to be in his arms. She runs toward Maan and hugged him tight, like her life was depending on him


Precap : Maan walked toward door when Geet pressed his hand slightly to stop him. He turned.

"Maan I want to say you something!!''


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Edited by MonaSWrites - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



dekh babie... mona ke liye samosa aur hamare liye chips aur juice!😡

lo tum sab khao...vaise juise hlthy drink hoti hei...😆
Edited by LILY111144 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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mona ... tune prove kar diya ke tum bedard nahi ho...

i so much love u for this part...

jo jaise kartha vo vaise hi bhugtha hai... and u proved it by keeping both maaneet safe and sending asha away from geets life to the hospital...

maan ka tension dekhke adi kya mujhe bhi darr lagne laga tha... but i love the end waala hug...


Edited by -lakshmi- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chalo Geet ke bheje me baat aai...ki Maan kya
kahana chahata tha...😛 tubelight...😡
hmmm...accident...??😕 Aasman se gire..khajooe mei
atke...😕
Accident pre-plan tha ya ...natural ...😕 Asha lapete
me aa gai...?? 😈
kal tak latke raho...🥱















Badi school mei Party-sharty ho rahi hai...😈
Koi na aaj maine bhi bahar se dinner order kiya...😉

Enjoy sweeties ... maine bhi Dinner me khaye hai...😊




Edited by singh24 - 12 years ago

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