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Part 6A
hay, this FF is in chapter and each chapter divided in to few parts depending on how long each chapter is. :) enjoy please comment






The party was held in the raizada house, as usual everyone was there and with them maan. I looked at him across the hall, and this time he walked towards me like a goddess. Does he polish his sexiness or something? I forcefully smiled.

I wore a blue dress with red high hill and light makeup, like usual.

'I am little surprised to see you here!' he spoke out as he did a formal handshake with arnav.
'why?' I asked as I took a drink from the waitress.
'I went to last 5 party of raijada and did not see you.'
I could see by his facial attitude that he was glad to see me.
'were you looking for me?' I pointed my eye brow up.
'yes, of course, as I don't get to see the real you in the club, just like you don't see the real me!' he winked which irritated me.
'I don't intend to Mr khurana. Just came along to give my friend company!'
'I am sure you have...' he took a seep of drink before arnavs mum joined.
'hello handsome glad to see you!' she stroked her hand over maans shoulder seductively and spoke in deep sexy voice. She wore A long satin red dress, that barely covered her Brest. I could see the embarrassment on arnavs face. I felt so sorry for him.

Maan looked uncomfortable with her hand on his shoulder, he gently held her hand and removed it from his shoulder. 'I am really glad to see you to! Mam!'

He smiled and kissed her hand. 'miss hands was just about to dance with me, if you excuse us!' he lied.

I looked back at him with a annoying glare, I sure did not. He took my hand and pulled me close. I instantly had to let go arnavs hand and he was not amused.

'oh that's good!' merry spoke. No matter what merry, arnavs mother may be, she always looked at me with daughter eyes. I gave out an uncomfortable smile, because it was really an awkward moment and merry did not look happy.

'oh.. So..' she clearly thought that we might be seeing one another.

'is it that's why you were asking about geet?' merry looked innocently at maan, and than arnav.

Something was going on and I did not know about it, but it soon became clear when arnav spoke out.
'oh, that's why mum you requested geet to come?'

I understood instantly that for past 5 party maan was looking for me. I did not like that thought I gave maan a glare. He pulled his tie, to hide the embarrassment.

'Shall we dance?' maan suggested.

'yes but before tell me why you have interest in geet?' she took maan's hand off me and came between us.

'I am not interested in him. I broke mr khurana's plan. I barely know him.' I walk and came next to arnav.

'babe,' merry looked at me and arnav, 'why don't you two go and dance, I have very important talk with mr khurana.'

I looked at maan and his not pleased face. Every time arnav touched me, it ignited a fire and that was clearly visible on his face.

I stayed close to listen, yet barely hearable.. They were taking about something, Merry looked serious and maan looked angry. They kept looking at us.

I looked at arnav, 'what do you think they were taking about?'

'I am not sure!' we both looked at them, with curiosity.

Maan left soon after as merry came close to us. He looked seriously pissed.

'was everything alright?' me and arnav stoped and I questioned.

'yes, I just told him, that would he like to do any business deal and he did not agree! That's all...'

I could say that was a lye. She was purely lying, neither me or arnav believed her, however I couldn't care less as I was glad mr khurana was out of trail.

'I hope you didn't mind that maan walked off without dancing!' merry spoke with little irritation yet with sympathy.

'no, not at all, it's perfectly alright!' I smiled.

I was clearly unaware about the whole situation or what they might have spoken about, but liked the thought maan left and respected what ever merry had to offer.

Merry have known me since young and very good friend with my mum but one thing I did not understand what may be the reason for her what she is today. I remember when I was young, I never thought she would be a party animal, specially when she hated party.

As the evening went by, arnav dropped me off to my apartment.





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Posted: 12 years ago

awesome update

m also wondering what maan n merry were talking that maan left abruptly

i think its about geet or may be something else


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Wow double treat loved it!
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lovd dis strymaan s mystry.hes nt dat typ wt geet thot of hm.he card 4 geet. ab yeh arnvs mom ki bhi mystry hei .could nt undrstand .waiting 4 nxt prt. hope mystry soon b reveld...thnx 4 triple treat...
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