MG SS- STILL WAITING #2 PT26 PG131 new thread link in INDEX - Page 54

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Posted: 11 years ago
Tu comment khayu kh rhi h. Ek to tera dimag hil gya. Jaisa tune khud kaha.
Update itni late di.
3-4 update to deni thi.
Superb update. Tu emotional kr deti h yaar. Kbi to hasayo.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priya_21

Tu comment khayu kh rhi h. Ek to tera dimag hil gya. Jaisa tune khud kaha.
Update itni late di.
3-4 update to deni thi.
Superb update. Tu emotional kr deti h yaar. Kbi to hasayo.

kam kitne jada h mere pass dii ki dimag ki batti band ho gae h, n 3-4 update kaese likhu tym nahi hota h, n Avi nahi hasaogi... Wait for it
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Posted: 11 years ago
still me feelling like beat maan blue n black 😡😡
kamina khahika huh 😡...
maan loves geet phir bhi kuch nahi bolega 😕😕
poor geet ek pal mein happy durse pal mein unhappy 😭😭
disha ko bhi nahi aya
geet roti so agye aur ye maan gussa horaha hay😡😡
kabhi thik nahi soch sakhta hay 😡😡..
chalo finally geet mil gaye acha hay abb thora care tho kiya 😕😕.
awee mithi n ami soo cutiii😃😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome one,d past is so painful,and how man's family behaved wit geet also is so cheap, bt wen maan telling d reasons for his rudeness towards geet,really feel sad for him,waiting for nxt part
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Posted: 11 years ago

Congratulations too alll, our dd our geet won jdj, so this is small treat from my side, but still m not happy wid response, are u all not liking it now... Reply me if u r not liking it...plzzz


@priya di- bht jada work h dii cant update regularly
@khwaishan - dear Avi vivah os bhul jao, i forgot the story too but will update when i will be in my home means in Oct last or nov starting.


Part 23 waiting

Present


After kids slept maan tried to talk with geet, but she was ignoring eye contact too wid him n cocooning ammy in her arms like her life n was looking at maan from corner of her eyes n watching his every moves. Maan was about to say something when both heard knock on door, maan still looking at geet to say something when geet said "maaan ji plz open the door, otherwise kids will woke up" this bring maan back from staring his lady love. He simply nodded n went to open the door while geet controlled her high pulse n heavy breath by holding ammy near her heart.


Maan gave glares to aniee n arjun, aniee didnt paid any attention to his glares n went near geet who was too happy to see aniee, she made ammy sleep peacefully in her lap n after that aniee sat on bed n cupped her face n asked soo lovely "how r u baccha" geet smiled at aniee n replied "m f9 dii, dont worry dii" but on this line aniee frowned n said in stern voice "m too angry wid u geet, I never thought u will hide this things wid me, u always said m ur big sister, tum arjun ko apna bhai maanti thi na" geet cuted her n said cutely "manti thi nahi hu" on which arjun came near her n said while placing his hand on head "then y didnt shared this with u bacha, y u hided that u r suffering from cancer" geet bow her head n said meekly with choking voice "I dont want to give u all tension bhai, i was aware i cant live more n more over i didnt wanted to live bhai, for whom i will live bhai," geet said in tears, maan was looking everything from far n understanding her pain. Arjun said "u r liar geet" geet looked at him while others too when arjun proceeded "u always said na, u wanted to live for ur kids, u wanted to see them growing up, u wanted to see them living their life, know what happened geet, did this disease is that big than ur dreams that u lost ur hope, I have never seen u that coward n broken geet" geet looked at her kids n kept her head on arjun's shoulder crying n said "I wanted to live but my life is not normal life bhai m always burden for others bhai, 1st mumma left me, then nani maa n then I was burden for papa n chooti maa, they made me marry maan ji," she stopped for sometym n looked at maan with longing eyes n said in almost too lost n hurt voice "he too never liked me, I was burden for him too" maan broke there eye lock n looked outside the window to hide his tears, he only knows how much he love her from the day he saw her in that baby pink colour simple suit, looking lyk princess that too without any makeup n small smile on her lips. Maan's terese was broke by Arjun's voice "bachha y u r saying lyk that, u was never burden on anyone, just people never tried to understand u, ur heart baccha, see ur kids geet, how much they love u, when u was unconscious. They were crying for their mumma, did u want to maje them cry whole life baccha the way u miss ur mumma" geet instantly nodded her head in no n started crying while hugging arjun, where aniee threaded her hair to calm down.

After spending quality tym wid geet, aniee arjun was gng back when maan said "take kids wid u" geet eyes filled with it n she looked at maan, where as he continued "its not gud to keep them in hospital, n I talked wid doc. They are discarging geet tomm. So they can be with their mumma, so its matter of half day n night only" kids n geet looked at maan, where as maan came near kids or say geet, as kids were in her lap, he sat opposite to them n said "ammy n goonj aap log Avi bua ke sath ghar jao, n disha di n dhruv ke sath khelna, n aese chehre mat banao kal aapki mumma aapke sath hogi" geet was just starring at him, while ammy said "no ammy, mithi, mumma ke pass" on which geet too nodded her head. Maan took ammy from geet n said "baby mumma needs rest na, u know na mumma is ill, dont u both want mumma jaldi se theek hoke aapke pass aa jae" geet was not saying anything but then maan again continued to see his wife n kids as confused souls "n geet, bacho ke lie hospital ne jada der rehna is not gud, u know na environment, try to make them understand plzzz, n they need proper food, rest hope tum samajh rahi ho meri baat, m not trying to seperate ur kids just sending them to have rest" maan said last line too see geet's possessive hand cocooning her kids n understand her turmoil.

Aniee was agreed with maan words n more over she too wanna to give maaneet some chance to talk, becoz the truth know she knows, she didnt hate him but angry on his past behaviour, but somewhere she wanted to see this family happy n smiling n more over together. So she too took maan's side n after trying so much, at last geet understood n made kids go home with aniee. After sending kids geet looked at maan who was looking at her n wanted to say something but she ignored his eyes n tried to settle herself on bed to sleep, but in this attempt, she got hurt on her hand as she was not concentrating, maan ran to her n took her hand in his n blowed some air on it... (me- sab kuch Avi hi bata du kya hehehe itni aachi nahi hu mai, chalo past me chalte h ab thoda roe ke aate h, aachi idea hai na :P, gaali mat do its NYC lolz)


Past
Morning rays hit geet eyes n she twisted her body on bed n opened her eyes lazily n adjusted her vision n looked at clock, it was 10 am, she sat in bed with pout n complained to her baba ji "aaj late kar Dia na aapne, maan ji office chale gae ho he, aaj v nahi dekh paee na mai disha ko" her complain chain by broke by cute crying if disha, she looked at the door n saw maan standing with disha in her arms. She got excited seeing her n again looked up n said "thanku baba ji" she was about to go near maan in hurry, when he showed his big eyes to her, so she sat quietly with pout, where as maan came with disha n gave her to Geet, she too softly took her n looked at her angelic face n said "yeh bht jada cute h maan ji" maan smiled n said "Haan Geet, she is too cute...just like u" geet took her small hand in her hand n kissed then on her cheek n forehead n then look at her small legs, which was adore with two cute b small payal, geet smiled wide to see disha wearing her gifted payal (ab yeh mat socho sab Ki itni choti bachi kasese payal pehnegi, agar Mai lappy se hoti toh pic de deti, it is same like small kada but it is payal with chain but no ghungru to make baby skin harm) geet kissed her foot then again start staring at small bundle of joy in her lap, she looked at maan n said "humare babies v itne hi cute hoge na" maan nodded at her, where as geet kept her head on maan shoulder n disha was in her arm, n this moment was captured by aniee who came to look for geet n disha, but went away to see them together. Geet played with disha n where maan too played with her, it was cute moment for both. After 2hour disha starts crying n maan got panic seeing her crying n tried to calm her with diff. Methods on which geet broke in laughter n said laughing "maan ji...haha... Isse kuch Hua nahi h...hehe...she is hungry.. She needs her mumma" maan looked at geet with baby face untill aniee come running hearing disha cry, n saw them smiling but geet gave disha to aniee, n aniee left to feed her.

Maan looked at Geet who was sleepy again, n said in stern voice "go n get freshen n have ur food n medicines then sleep" on which geet pouted n said "where us dadi maa" maan looked ay her n asked "y, u want dadi maa now" geet pouted more n said "today is my appointment with doc. Aunty, so call her na" maan looked at her n then said "dadi maa went to her frnds home as she is ill" geet looked sadly at him n said "ok" she went into washroom for getting freshed, she came out filled her partition n then took her file n said to maan " can u say any of driver to drop me at hospital" without looking at maan she said, while maan said "u r not gng alone m coming with u, dadi has said me to come with u as its ur sonography" she nodded her head while hiding her tears.

She sat in his car for the 1st tym after their marriage, its spcl. For her, they drove to hospital, doc. Checked her n confirmed everything is alri8 but still geet is weak n need proper rest. Geet was lying on bed for her sonography, n other side in same room there was jenny, who too came for her sonography, karan was there holding her hand, geet looked them n smiled, doc. Came to check her n start her test, she was looking at screen when felt maan's presence in room, he was standing beside her n looking at two cute image, which are their part. Geet was staring maan continuously, as it is 1st tym he was standing beside her, after test, both were gng out when karan n jenny too came wid them, while karan was talking wid maan n jeeny wid geet. They were standing at parking lot when geet looked at golgappa stall, her mouth watered to have it, as after her marriage she hadnt n its almost a year. She looked at the couples standing there n enjoying, she looked them with praising eye, as she was unlucky too have that life. She smiled sadly, n came near car n sat in car, while maan was still talking wid karan n Jenny, who was inviting him n his family on jeeny godbharai, geet was hearing everything n touched her belly n smile sadly n said "how lucky all gals are na baba ji"
Maan started car n it was silent drive, geet was caressing her belly, maan stoped the car after sometym n said her to come out, without asking anything she came out, maan took her inside mandir...

Precap- sab kuch aaj hi du kya, socho sab maan geet ko mandir Ku laya h... N pyare readers let me think about solid reason till then wait :P

Teaser is on the way, ab yeh mat puchna kaun Sa wala. Are wahi song wala okkk

No quota for next update, wase v aap sab comp. Nahi karte ho

Edited by geetsmile - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
meee first
wow awes um part yar
maan wants to talk geet alone
maan went with geet to doc
wow maaneet see their babies
precap is interesting
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Posted: 11 years ago
nyc dear...
socho socho dear...
but make sure dat d reason is worth it ...
i m not able to reason maan's act ...
ab dekhte hai tumhara dimag kitna chalta hai...
Edited by Jane523 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice👏👏



maan wants to talk to geet😉



update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks kiddo for wonderful update
About present
Feel again sad n cry to know that geet lost hope to live but arjun n annie made geet realize how the kids are her life
Wants to know wat annie knows about maan's biggest truth

Past
When geet woke n saw the time she cribbed that she woke up late n then saw maan with disha which her cribbing by seeing disha n got excited to take n afterwards she played with disha
Maaneet gone for sonography n geet was looking at maan
While returning maan took geet to temple

P.S. i want to know regarding geet's health when she got to know that she is having cancer n during pregnancy she was having????
At which stage she got to know that she had cancer????
Please do let know the answer of these question
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Posted: 11 years ago
at present maan tells he loves and loved geet always, then y should he behave with geet like a devil in the past????

what is the reason behind that?

this story is really confusing me ? am i missing something????/

plz clear it...

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