MG SS- STILL WAITING #2 PT26 PG131 new thread link in INDEX - Page 42

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Posted: 11 years ago
nice part
loved it
maan loved geet but what stopped him to show his love for geet
nice precap
waiting for the next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awsome hot and passionate update sweety
loved it alot...
Maan is very naughty and Geet is sooo innocent
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Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful update...
glad maan showed his concern towards geet...
nice one😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey diii

kab do ge update???
rakhi main abhi bohot der hain...
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aur maat karwa o intezar 😭😭
I knw u r busy but still i'm eagerly waiting for SW
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😊😊Update Soon Plz 😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi, new reader of your this ff and loved, kept reading it and cried a lot please update soon as it is very interesting now...
Thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nelufar10

hey diii

kab do ge update???
rakhi main abhi bohot der hain...
.
aur maat karwa o intezar 😭😭
I knw u r busy but still i'm eagerly waiting for SW
.
😊😊Update Soon Plz 😊😊

nelu write kia tha but meko kuch maja nahi aaya us part me the lain was missing so update nahi kia woh part 22 kar Dia h bt still need to write 21 jo kal likugi free tym me
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: geetsmile

nelu write kia tha but meko kuch maja nahi aaya us part me the lain was missing so update nahi kia woh part 22 kar Dia h bt still need to write 21 jo kal likugi free tym me




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ok Diii... will be waiting as today is RAKHI 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 20

What is maan upto re why he is doing that

When he don't love her why he is playing with her haa

And she cont do anything of her wish also

Ahaa maan ko ab batha chala kya babies will kick also soo funny

And his claim on babies oops uff chodo I will curse him definitely so leave it for now

And he is caring for her inly for babies not for her right I know it
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Posted: 11 years ago
This part us spcly fir two my best dii, who always help me whenever u need then, they always wanted kids soo its for u mohi aka bulbul diii nd ria aka sumaiya ria diii. Love u both sooo much...

Part 21


Present




Gunj woke up n saw maan with droopy eyes, then looked at geet n went near her n took her hand in her n kissed her hand n said cutely"mumma woke up na pluujee"she was holding geet's hand standing near bed n talking wid her mumma. Maan was drooling his baby n her way of saying everything, which is same to geet. His drooling session was broke by knock on door, maan carried ammy in his arm n opened the door, doc. Was there for check up.

Doc. Checked n gave her injection n was gng when goonj hold his coat in her small fist, doc. Looked at cute goonj n asked "what happened baby" goonj signalled him to come at her level, doc. Smiled n come at her level n again asked wht happened, "doc. Untel mumma tab uthegiii...(gulp).. Me n ammy wants to talk her" maan looked at her princess, doc. Caressed her hair n said "till evening ur mumma will be with u n talking"

"Sattiii"

"Muchii" doc. Smiled at her n said to maan "she will be awake till evening, her pulse is normal n we will talk about her further treatment after she will be awake" Maan smiled where as goonj jumped n shout in excitement, so ammy to woke up but seeing her sister smiling, he again hide his face in maan's neck n asked "isse tya hua papa, tilla ku rahi h mithi" maan smiled at his son n said "after knowing y she is shouting u too will shout" ammy opened his one eye n looked at maan n asked "why" maan said smiling "if I say ur mumma will be awake till evening then?" before maan can say anything he jumped in his arms, if maan was not holding his safely he must have fallen, maan smilled at his kids, n in another arm he carried goonj n both kids hi-fi each other n hugged maan. Maan to cocooned then, with a smile on his face to see his jaan awake today, he will be seeing her talking, smiling all after a weak.





After an hour both cuties start making maan's life hell, as it was their food tym n both were not having a single morsel of food n running here n there in ward n maan is having a tough tym to make them eat ir drink milk "how they both drink their milk n had fruits silently n now they are making my life hell, but beta maan, u have to made them eat" maan thought n again start chasing them, if ammy goes ri8 then mithi at left, both never ran same side n it was difficult for him to catch them, if he cath one another will run n vice versa, both kids were laughing n giggling seeing maan's plight, maan has never did type of work but 1st tym he is enjoying, with his kids, at last maan get hold n cute goonj but ammy was too smart that he made maan run more n made goonj too free from his grip as he cant see his sister making saddy face, he is total possessive brother from now only, he can tease her but if anyone else did, he didnt leave them, not even elders.


Once again maan got hold on his princess n this tym he carried her on his arm n ammy again ran n this tym showing his toung to maan, n he got bumped with table near geet's bed n started crying loudly, maan made goonj stand on his feet n ran to ammy n took him in arm n started checking cut he got on her knee, maan 1stly tried to console him but he is nowhere to stop n a small sharp thing cut his soft skin, he looked at geet n cried "mumma ammy ko tot lag gae" maan was trying his best to make him calm but ammy is ammy. Goonj to said him to stop but he was not hearing anybody, maan called for nurse n showed her his knee but when nurse tried to apply medicine or clean it he cry more bitterly.



His cry was reaching geet's ear as the effect of medicines were gng out n she was restless like someone is snatching her baby, maan hold ammy in his arm securely, while showing his knee to nurse to clean but when nurse touched dettol on his knee he cried too loudly, n started crying more, his cry effected geet soo much that his sharp cry if her baby made her open her eye, she jerkly opened her eye, n saw ammy crying lungs out n goonj was too crying silently standing near maan n holding his shirt. She is weak that her voice was not coming out from her throat but after 2 attempt she said in lil audible voice, "ammy, kya hua sona" ammy lifted his face from maan's neck n looked at his mother n said crying "mumma, app uth gae" when maan, goonj n nurse heard him, geet forwarded her arms toward her jaan's but seeing maan looking at her, she took her hand back n looked down but maan forwarded ammy to geet, geet looked at him when maan said "make him calm" ammy hugged geet tightly n hide himself in her, where geet was rubbing his back n in middle maan said nurse to call doc.


Geet asked him "kya hua y my strong baby is crying" ammy showed geet his knee which was bleeding, geet blow air on his knee n try yo make him calm n cocooned him in her arms , where mithi was looking at both n said meekly to maan "mithi v muumma paasss jaegi" her voice caught geet attention n she forwarded her another arm to her, maan lifted her n made her near geet, she instantly hugged geet, where as restless geet felt calm after cocooing her babies in her arm n cried lil. After minutes all apart n wiped each other tears, maan was standing near bed n looked at three n cried silently, he know his mistake made him away from his family, he too wanted to cocoon his family in his embrace n shower his live to them, he wiped his tears before anyone notice.


Geet made both cuties sit in her lap n asked ammy "how u got hurt sona" ammy hugged geet n told how he was teasing his papa n got hurt. Geet looked at maan for brief sec. Who was drooling her since she got up, she said something in mithi ears n started asking ammy what he did in last 3 days as he is also chatter box, whenever he is with his mumma, maan was amused while geet cleaned his wound without letting him know or cry in pain. Meanwhile doc. Came too check her n was amused too see a small mother hidding her babies inside her warmth n talking animatedly with them. Who can say she is the one who was unconscious from last 3 days n now making her babies smile n showering her love.



Doc. Disturbed there moment n kids looked at him with frown, doc. Chuckled at them n start checking geet n asked her some question n she answered meekly. Doc. Observe her behaviour n came near ammy with injection, ammy looked at geet with complaing face n geet smiled at him n said "baby, if u didnt take injection na, u will get wound n after some day, or ur wound will get ganda n then this. Doc. Uncle will give u lots of injection, now say u want one ir dher sara" ammy looked at doc. Then at geet n at goonj too.goonj too said "le le ammy, ottherwise doc. Untel will give u lots of intection" all were suppressing there smile to see kids n at last ammy got ready for injection. But he was watching doc. With one eye closed n sleeping in geet's lap whereas Geet was saying all lovely dovey words to him n trying to divert him so she asked "did u both had ur lunch" in serious tone goonj looked at Geet while ammy bite his tongue n showed his baby cute face, while Geet maintain her stern face n said "u both didn't love ur mumma na" both shook her head in no n said in usion "we lobe u mumma stoo mutch" Geet suppressed her smile n said "u both will have it 1st then talk with ur mumma" both nodded her head like gud kids where as doc. Said "thanks Mrs. Khurana for helping" Geet smiles n make ammy n mithi seat in her lap while maan forwarded their food to Geet, she silently took it n started feeding them by saying different stories as both kids demanded it soo Geet was saying them story of choota bhim n both were hearing it silently n asking what happened next while maan was looking all seating on bed with his family n in between story goonj sat on his laps as ammy need to stretch hi legs soo both kids were in arms of their mumma papa. N Geet was feeding both while goonj took spoon from Geet n filled it n bring near Geet mouth and said to have it, Geet silently have it but there was some tears in her eyes, after feeding Geet, goonj bring spoon near maan n said "dadda aap v thha lo, aap v tuch nahi thae ho na tal se" maan looked at her angel n took it from her hand while shedding some tears, which was wiped by mithi n hugged him n maan feed her. All were feedIng each other except maaneet. All were confuse who was feeding whom, n this confusion geet bring a morsel near his mouth, maan looked in her eyes, when both eyes locked they were looking at each other like asking each other lots of question but there moment was broke by ammy who said to maan "papa jaldi se Thao na hume v thana h" geet looked everywhere except maan n tried to take back her hand when maan hold her hand n have it. She looked directly in his eyes, in which she can see soo many things for the 1st tym in her marraige, their another eye lock was broke by mithi n ammy who said "papa now u feed mumma" maaneet looked at each others, the gap of 1 year made them more far from each other. But both kids forced maan, so maan took peice of food n bring near her mouth (it was like mauke pe chauka) geet was starring him n without breaking their eye contact she had it n kids clapped their hand in happiness. After food maan wiped the lips n hands of kids n made them drink water, but geet was unable to do it as she was too weak soo maan wiped her lips n hand without looking at her eyes while geet was openly staring him. After food both kids lie beside geet while maan gave medicines to geet.


Both souls are waiting to talk each other.
Both souls are waiting to cocoon each other.
Both souls are waiting to be one. Both souls are waiting fir each other. Is there waiting will end ir they will still wait...


Precap- old precap.

Thanks for completing likes in 2 days n sorry for not fulfilling my promise bt kya karu Gande teachers bht bht jada assignments dete h, soo tym nahi hota h sorry for all mistakes





Edited by geetsmile - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
update maan handling babies amy hurt geet conscious and calming amy kids and geet bonding fab



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