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Niharika

@Niharika.Nair

Rocker

+ 9

Posted: 12 years ago

#61

I was reading story and mid way I felt so sad and depressed and cursed myself for reading it!! but then the story took the interesting turn and loved it!!

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Sampa Ghosh

@sweetsampa39

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Trust me aadhe OS tak main yahi sochti rahi ki how Maan wud survive without Geet.It was painful to see them separated and that poetry is so painfully beautiful.

But the second part was as mast as the first part was painful.
Loved the way rushed to Geet in vest and track pants.And the jealousd girls,the confused family members and among them our Maaneet drenced in love.

Badhiya OS hai.Continue it as a series.

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 12 years ago

#63

hi thanks 4 da pm n beautiful emotional OS! Thank God it was js a dream! Maan wld nt have survived! All teasing Maan! Superbly written!

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punam2712

@punam2712

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#64

IT WAS A BEAUTIFUL

THOUGHT IT WAS A TRAGEDY FIRST BUT HAPPY TO KNOW IT WAS A NIGHTMARE

AND MAAN CAME RUNNING INHIS VEST AND TRACK AND EMBARRASED EVERYONE

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dhakdhak22

@dhakdhak22

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#65

awes um yar😊

maan fulfills hs angel s all wish😃

geet angry on maan😆

all man r out😛

maan's plan backfire👏

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Pooja Verma

@impoojaverma

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#66

superb OS

both d OS were amazing

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m-g19

@m-g19

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#67

oow...that iz so cute.

i lovd maan both angels n there cute cute talk .

maan iz such a lovely dada never say no 2 them.

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simran

@Pumpkinseed

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#68

lovely os
loved maaneet both angels they are so cute
their talks are just out of the world
maan is really a very sweet dada

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prachi sinha

@geetsmile

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#69

till romantic mode tak padha hua h n uska comment v kia h

ab aage ka deti hu

maan geetu come back n pihu khush ho gae n ran toward her dadda

n dada ke arms me gae n complain karng

n dev choti kitu ko pareshan karing saying aapne dadda ke pass raho

but kitu toh bade papa pass jana h

n dev ne rula dia bachi ko

hehehheh n got slares from maan dadi n all

chaloo ab shopping tym

n maan buying everything for his dolls n making them smile

n geet poutings hehehehhehehehehe

then masti tym

n do larki h dono hugged maan n dev

aaelo dono biwi gussa

hehehhehehe

dono age kam se

geet fuming in anger n meera ki silent treatment

hehehhehehehehehe

n uspe se kitto n pihu want kittens n ab dadda kaese mana karege

chalo kitten book for two sweet kittens

but still ladies are angry

n bhej dia sabko garden me sone

hayela pihu saying she like heroine mumma

n pihu v gae garden me apne dadda ke sath n kitu v

chalo chalo maan ne plan banya light ura di hehehehehe

n mummies hi nahi bache v andhere se darte h

ladies in garden n maan showing fake anger

par pihu ne bhanda phor dia

hehhehehehehhehehe

bechara maan n dev

n vicky babu hasi khushi kudte aae n said usne socket nikal dia hehhehehehehhh

mumma pet dukh gaya mera

n socket tor dia but sab happy happy h

diii muje mumma n baby moment v cahie plzzz

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Ash1991

@Ash1991

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#70

Awww sucha sweet os...
loved reading it...pihu n kitto so attached to maan. n maan pampering them so much...maan n dev sleeping outside n planning revenge...
Aweaome...its always fun to read ur os after reading so many emotional ffs...

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