MG OS#17: Tumhain Haq Hai - Page 3

lovley os...loved how maan got nervous and naughty & bold geet

awesome and a very very cute os 😊

You have amazing style to narrate story and capture reader's whole attention. Awesome OS loved it.

Originally posted by: sonu4ever

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Yay first spot is mine. Sorry im almost the last to comment though 😆
What to say?
That was utterly cute and lovely. 👏 😳
Awww i absolutely love how u portrayed their characters here.
Maan being a soft gentleman and geet the graceful yet naughty lady. 😳
Loved how beautifully described the romantic atmosphere, detailling the table set up. 👏 😳
Aww maan secretly staring at geet's back 😳
Maan in grey suit and white shirt with pink tie. 😳
Hehe geet had to make the first step making him hold her waist. 😳
It was worth the try coz he confessed 😳
Awww i always love ur romantic os and this one was lovely, too cute. 😳
Do write more os please. 😳

no worries dear...
there were many after you to comment😆
thanku so much dear...Am so glad u liked these characters...
awee...thanku you for liking those details...wanted to create an environment for you all to imagine
if geet is wearing such a seductive sari..i mean vlouse...Maan had to admire her😳
thats a killer combo on dressing i like myself on a fair man😉😳
thanku so much for the appreciation dear...luv ya😊

Originally posted by: daredevilisback

Great os..
naughty geet😉
Maan luv u yaar😳
Loved it..
u r an awesome writer yaar😊

Originally posted by: lenageorge

beautiful os dear
maan was too nervous
geet was a bit bolder than maan😆
loved d gift of geet to maaan

Originally posted by: anjalisen85

nice👏👏

thanku so much guys...
ur response means alot🤗

Originally posted by: prettyji

amazing

Originally posted by: yappingduck

simply brilliant.loved itc

Originally posted by: rizwanaq

so sweet!!!!

thanku so much you all🤗

Originally posted by: maaneetkimeet

hey dear awesomeee superb lovley update fabulas love it lot ...myyy god geet is so cute ...and sweet superb os dear ...like it very much fabulas ...superb duper hit ...and hayeee maan was to dreamyyy in this os at last tie sence love it and geet was to blod for myyy shy and cute cutey maan ... thank you for lovleyyy PM dear ... where u update to pm me... and for friends request ... also thank you dear .

thanku so much dear...
am so happy u liked n enjoyed this os...
tie scene was the scene for which i wrote this whole OS😆😆
no prob dear...😊

so sweet and romantic !! she got a tie to make him bold and he kept controlling himself and loved how she took his hand to place on her waist...!! this lady is cute and naughty...and she got her lovely confession...as a return gift...beautiful...!!