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Posted: 12 years ago

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The Downpour... Part 34



Dadi, who has come?''

Dadi was just waiting for him to come, her Nautanki started.

"Oh that's so good beta you came back. Actually my Bahu has come to meet you''

"Whatt!!!!!''

Nothing more could come out from his open mouth. He was standing on spot lost thinking on what just Dadi said or was it his illusion only?

"What happened Maan! Come inside beta!!'' She chuckled. Maan came back in sense hearing her voice, he gained his composure.

"Dadima, if this is your new joke then I must say you have lost ability to make me laugh on your jokes'' He walked inside in his full attitude.

"You don't believe me no Beta. Okay! No prob.. I know I have become old now but that doesn't mean I lost my ability to make my son happy!!'' Dadi glimpsed him making helpless face and then smirked when saw Maan stopped on way. He turned to Dadi,

"Dadima, please you don't need to do this drama I know you want to pull my leg but still, your dream can not be fulfilled this soon. Because no girl is here who can win Maan Singh Khurana heart so easily'' He said in proud but in heart he knew it was not true. A girl had already won his heart that too without her knowing herself.

"Uff, no one can win him in his dialogue-bazi!!'' Dadi shook head hopelessly. "But still I should find out first that is there really something cooking between both or I'm having my head in clouds only, without any reason!!' she thought.

She made worried face. "But beta I am not joking. I have really selected a girl for you and she is here only, upstairs, waiting for you to talk her''

Hearing her genuinely Maan worry started making place in his mind. He knew, his Dadi could do anything for his marriage, any plan could have been planned and so he decided to take it as serious as she was presenting it to be, to bring truth out.

"But why suddenly Dadi?''

"Its not suddenly Beta. I had fear of losing you!! I have been fearing Maan that one day you will leave this old lady and go away!!!'' She turned back, hiding her expression from him which was so funny.

"Losing me?'' Maan also animated his voice toward concern.

"Haa Maan. Dont take me wrong Beta, you know how desperate I had been for your marriage since years and it was my dream to make you wed with my selection of girl only. Dont think I do not trust your selection Beta but I do not have trust on these modern age girls. That day, when I saw a girl with you, and in office also you were taking her name.. What her name was!!'' She acted to think and here Maan heart was beating fast.

"O haa.. Geet!!!'' Dadi said and his heart felt like blow out at once.

"I started fearing that someone is there in your life beta. And so I decided to call my friend daughter here, to meet you and you can also see her Maan. I feel she would be best for you!! And you know what.. She also loves you and wants to marry you. I know she will be best Bahu of me''

Dadi brilliant dialogue delivery along with her superb acting misdirected Maan mind that it could be drama also. He knew she could do anything of this kind of but he was not at all ready for this marriage,

''Whoever girl was waiting for me, I would abruptly go and tell her, I can't marry you so don't keep any hope from this alliance'' He decided.

"What happened Maan!!'' Dadi shook him

"I'm sorry Dadi I don't want to marry anyone and you don't need to keep fear of losing me because, I am not going to leave you ever. I love you and your drama but still can't marry anyone else and that is final!!!''

"Anyone else' Hmm!!!'' Dadi Shatir Dimag noted this point.

Per Beta..

"No Dadi, I can't marry that girl and I will not!!!''

"So It mean should I think it's really true that there is any girl in your life and because of her you are denying me.. Me Maan your Dadi, did you forget me??'' She brought fake tears in her shinning eyes.

Dadima please'' He could not see tears in her eyes even if it was fake. He tries to make her understand to leave this stubbornness but she was not at all ready.

"No Maan now it's enough. Either you have to tell me if there any girl is in your life or else you would have to marry with the girl whom I have selected for you. I want my Bahu now, otherwise I won't eat anything!!'' .

Maan was shocked to see as why she suddenly forcing him to marry but he had to control this situation anyhow now.

"Thik hai Dadima. I will meet that girl''

Dadi smiled, wiping her tears.

"But I have a condition ''

"Condition?''

He nodded. "If I don't like girl you will not force me to marry anyone, ever!!''

"But Beta, it's cheating. You are anyway not ready for her!!''

"Toh thik hai Dadima, what if the girl herself refuse me!!!''

He smirked, seeing baby pout on his grandmother face.

"Where is she?''

"In Annie room, she is there waiting for you''

He left, but did not know; his grandmother was not just smirking but grinning like anything.

"I know Maan, neither you would refuse the girl whom I have selected for you and nor the girl would do. And I'm quite sure from your side but now I have to be sure from Geet side also''

She wanted to dance but her old bone ditched her, just watched Maan going up. She decided to give them time to sort out things themselves.

##

Geet was with servant going to Annie room which was at the end of long corridor. She was admiring the beauty of mansion and in way, was talking with him. Servant also was taking much interest telling about his owner and mansion and with very slow walks they reached their destination.

"Madam, you go inside, there is Anie ma'am room'' Servant showed Geet direction of room and left to do his households. Geet stepped there when servant called from far "And walk slowly Madam I have just wiped the floor. It can be slippery!!!''

But before she could hear and control her walk, her already wet foot stumbled on floor and she slipped terribly. She waited to hit the floor hard and pressed eyes tight in reflex but it did not happen and she felt touch of two strong arms and then his smell touched her breaths...

##

Maan was ascending stairs, going toward Annie room.

"Don't know who is she? Why Dadi is so adamant to make me marry her. But I cant marry anyone else besides Geet but can't tell this to Dadi now. It's not the right time. Before taking any step I have to know what geet think about me and then I would tell everyone here''

He was thinking and stepping when suddenly saw a girl, in corridor who was looking like Geet!

"Geet??? Here??? '' he wondered. "No Maan you've gone mad. How she can be here. I am sure she is the girl but why she is looking like Geet!!!!'' ' "Maan go and got checked your eyes.. in every girl now you started seeing her!!!'' He laughed on his madness and walked to her when suddenly saw she slipped and was about to hit floor and he runs to save her..

##


Geet was feeling herself safe in his arms. She knew Maan had saved her from falling.

"Yes I know it's him!!'' Geet smiled in semi-consciousness identified him and then heard his shaking voice.

"Geet.. are you okay!! Geet!!''

Maan was holding her in arms. His hand was tightly clutching her waist and was patting her cheeks to make her open eyes but she was not opening them. He got scared. Not for once he thought that how she came there but he was worried for her only. And then she opened eyes slowly, like she was waking up in morning, so fresh and having satisfied smile on face of sound sleep.

Both eyes met with each-other and then could not move out.

"Geet.. tum thik ho??''

His eyes were keeping her hypnotized with his that she could see only him, neither her surrounding nor could sense in which position she was. She was feeling heaven there but her dream broke when heard his voice again and again.

Immediately she tried to stand on her legs but groaned having pain in legs.

"What happened Geet!!!! Are you okay!!'' He asked instantly.

Geet nodded slightly. She tried again but couldn't.

"My ankle is paining!!!'' She cried. She pointed toward her ankle.

Before she could understand what happened, she found herself in his arms and being carried away through long corridor.




Precap : Maan carefully keeps her down on comfortable couch and he himself sits on floor, touched her leg and brought near.. Geet outright slipped leg back, stared him in shock ..


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Edited by MonaSWrites - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Last two update no Kiss on Cheek .. I missing Maan's Kiss 😆😆😳

now in another part don't forget abt Kiss 😆😳

hayee what a Mahi Mahi scene 😳😳
Maan always reached before GEET fall down 😳



& last but no least .. Maan jaisa DADI sobko mile 😆😆😆 she is real DRAMA Queen 😆😆

Edited by URME - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

esse ku shock ho rahi ho...😈
Make-over kiya hai kya tumne bhi...???🤣
Daily bina bataye bhaag jaati ho...😡 hum yahan dhoonte rahate hai...
Ye nahi chalega...

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