The Downpour#4 (Thread 5 link @ PG 151) - Page 39

Originally posted by: MonaSWrites

Bahut hasi aa rahi thi dono ko na

ye le

o teri laksu...

Originally posted by: sam111111

hey mona main goldi hoon ab🥳 aur maine ek new topic bhi post kiya

Originally posted by: LILY111144

hey mona ,wts up...?? uper ki post pe q nehi ho reha...

tum rooti reho,hum manate rehe

aisa karne mein bara mja ayega

apna pyar aur bar jayega...😳

Originally posted by: LILY111144

Originally posted by: CutieTeju

Mona U made my day...😃🤗
Coming to update.. Finally Dadi met her future bahu...😆😉 By looking at girl she understood something is cooking up btwn them.. Maan will be shocked to see her in her home.. 😆 Hope they won't start their romance in front of dadi..😳

Originally posted by: MonaSWrites

yaar bina chain kaha re,, pyar bina chain kaha re

sona nhi chandi nahi yaar toh mila ..

chalo dosti kar le

yeh dosti hum nehi todege...

Originally posted by: HNosheen

Awww Mona such a sweet and peaceful update.
but before commenting on that, I'd respond the reply u posted for me.
Thankyou so much its indeed so sweet of u 😊 I didnt cry because of u not replying., i was just sad but the way you asked, it was so nice and that little sad kitty photo made me laugh it was extremely cute 😆 Im just upto the irritation of suffering from a bad sleep routine and deadline-irritation. hahaha see i even sound horrible. 😲
Gang? you mean how all u guys regularly talk here. sure I'd love to whenever Im online.

anyway i know it will pass,its a phase. 🤢

So the update. This is really amazing.
Oh and i had to mention something important today. The thing is, even if there are slight rechecks required with regard to spell-check or tiny miny grammatical errors, I still love your work. You know why. a very major reason is . I love the font you always post the updates. Italic, simple and very very easy to read. Really no extra buttering. Im being completely honest. The font is so well selected,literally I dont need to re-read, squint or try harder to focus ,my eyes simply glide on the lines and I read in ease. I have come across many other FFs ,some of them give me no problem at all with fonts (and u are included in them 😃)
but there are others which are not bad but their font makes me feel "ufff "

And now the events, so the jealous Asha is all set to spy and stalk and speculate as to what is Geet upto and so far she is failing. hahahah maza agya 😆. Geet thankfully did not mention getting first salary to Asha. I liked you mentioned her bonding with her parents. these small things are eastern values . even if at distance from her parents, Geet did not forget to call her parents at all and so happily told them about her first salary. that adds to a good attribute of Geet's personality besides many others she already has like generosity and concern and her humble nature 😊 She's Asha's friend so she's generous enough she doesnt see her faults. she is much concerned about Maan being her friend and also for Asha. Then her humble nature how she buys the gift for Savitri Devi. All these small things show how innocent and pure she is 😊

I like Adi the way he behaves. He has hinted Maan's behavior towards Geet and yet he is decent enough not to poke his nose in trying to find out and dig into the personal matter of his boss. He is an exact opposite to that Asha.

I liked the scene you have described about how Geet enters KM along with perfectly putting her feelings in words. You have done it very nicely. Her apprehension and scare upon seeing the grandeur and elegance of KM and her hesitation to step inside with her wet clothes and muddy shoes. and it was so kind of Daadima to first let her in and then tell her to call her Daadima . Plus, she cared enough not to let Geet stay in her drenched clothes and decided to offer her Annie's dress. I am instantly a fan of Daadi-Geet bonding 👍🏼

and coming to the friendly-lover 😉, Mr Khurana himself 😆 poor guy came back home so unhappy . and so unaware that his favorite person actually happens to be visiting his house 😆

Precap is very awesome 😳
jaldi jaldi update today

And ya come whenever u can come onln.. we mostly gather in night after 10 .. will tell you how would use pics nd smilies

Originally posted by: LILY111144

yeh dosti hum nehi todege...

Originally posted by: sam111111

hey mona main goldi hoon ab🥳 aur maine ek new topic bhi post kiya