MG FF: A TORN RELATION #2 LINK TO th 3 PG 1 - Page 23

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Posted: 12 years ago
Kismat se tum humko mile ho

kaisa song hai for tr
agar acha laga toh bolna
will use in ff
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome song go with it
u fought with ur bro omg don't pull such stunts next time😡 even I have a sis so can relate to ur situation😆
but yaar u scared us so much
plsss don't say such things next time
many of us were wondering what actually happened suddenly
keep writing always😉
will pray that u don't fight with ur bro next time and then in fits of emotions do something like this😆
waiting waiting do update soon 😃
love aanya 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aanya84

awesome song go with it

u fought with ur bro omg don't pull such stunts next time😡 even I have a sis so can relate to ur situation😆

but yaar u scared us so much

plsss don't say such things next time

many of us were wondering what actually happened suddenly

keep writing always😉

will pray that u don't fight with ur bro next time and then in fits of emotions do something like this😆

waiting waiting do update soon 😃

love aanya 😃

sisters are much better aanya
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Posted: 12 years ago
Mujhe shock nehi laga coz I'm seeing this note today only :P

Dare u discontinue any of ur ff

Thn katti katti katti... Humph..
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Posted: 12 years ago
thank god
plzz update soon
waiting for ur update
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Posted: 12 years ago

~A TORN RELATION~



PART 16

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Arohi: why are you not saying anything now maan.. … do you know she was not saying anything… aur use dekhkar lag raha tha that she doesn't wanna live… why cant you forget that Ayesha …. She had already destroyed you .. why are you ruining her now…

Maan : what she did arohi… geet ne apne aap ko marna ki koshish ki..how can she do it … she is pregnant … wo aisa kaise kar sakti hai…

Arjun and arohi were shocked… arohi was suddenly numb..and maan cursed himself what he had said infront of her … arjun called arohi to know if she was fine…

Arjun: arohi …

Arohi looked at him and then at maan..she was having tears and left to see geet … she was hurt … it was something she was not able to take since the pain of loosing her little one was still fresh .. she sat beside geet the way she saw geet clutching her stomach made her smile… she really loves her baby .. but why was she there in that condition almost dying … she was scared but why.. did maan did something.. was he responsible for her fragile health… she was looking like a ghost… eyes having no expression.. she closed her eyes in utmost pain.. she was somewhere responsible for maan's behavior… she had always been his little sister for whom he was overprotective and this relation he meant more than anything.. even when arjun had proposed to her he had been extremely twitchy and caring and even knowing arjun from his childhood he had questioned him just like if he was a criminal and maan was the crime branch officer she still remembers their sweet encounters.. and it was the time when ayesha had entered his life….

(ayesha and maan's past will give later I love maaneet more..and ff unka hai so I hope no one will ask now their past…. )

Arjun looked at maan who was hiding his impatientness and the curse that he was probably getting now… he knew that he had done a big mistake.. first mistake was ayesha and rest of them were his… followed by that big black mark of his life that wretched woman ayesha…

Maan had tears in his arms.. he broke down.. this was the first time he was broken beyond the needs of repairment… his knuckles clenched eyes withdrawn from the truth yet he was having the deep feeling of having a cursed life that made her a lifeless soul.. he should have known that something was terribly wrong with her.. the way she was withdrawn from him ..his eyes that encountered restless always… her fear filled eyes..he way she always goes away when he even was near her..was just because she was scared..scared of physical intimacy and his accusations made her wounds to bleed…

Maan cried …. He had tears of remorse and the feeling of first love… that always come from the mixture of guilt and pain that makes him to drown in the feeling of love that always starts from her and will end from her…

Maan: she is so innocent arjun… massom hai wo… aur usne… kyun.. sab meri galti hai arjun sab meri… its all my fault I had never been a good and faithful husband .i was not able to take care of her… nahi rakh paya main uska dhyan nahin samaj paya main use… kyun arjun… why is am so cold hearted… why I am not able to overcome her betrayal…. Wo pyar .. jise maine…

Maan was not able to complete the words LOVE were fake and meaningless when taken with his name… he was not feeling right… nahi samaj paa raha tha kya ho raha hai.. why everything was uddenly attached to his heart that he had declared to be dead with her ….

Arjun looked at his friend he was not the maan he knew from some last days.. his remorse his guilt everything was with her .. GEET..he smiled with the new start of two lives… they were finally be one and happy if they will be having some misunderstandings still now he can be sure that maan will overcome that difference that was still in between them…

Arjun kept his hand on maan's shoulder ..he knew something new and this was the time to make him realise….

Arjun: you love her right…pyar karta hai na usse …. Isliye ro raha hai… sirf uske liye uske dard ke liye… the maan singh khurana I knew never shows any emotions who not even was like this when he was with ayesha.. kyun maan…

Maan's head immediately shot up… he looked at his frined confused and shocked with his words…

Maan: arjun.. with a heavy voice…

Arjun: kyun ..kya hua… why are you denying..she is your wife mother of your child .. why are you still denying to be with her with all your heart and soul… tumhari zindagi me aa chuki hai wo maan.. you are crying for her… just because you feel that you are wrong…

Maan still didn't say anything he was shocked ….

Maan : what are you saying…. How can I arjun..she is too good for me… I am a beast don't you know what I ….

Arjun snapped angrily .. he had enough of maan ..this man was hell bent on now destroying three lives his geet's and the baby to be born…

Arjun: then why the hell you are repenting and crying… mat rao maan … acha hota uss waqt arohi wahan…

Arjun couldn't complete because maan had angrily pulled his coller his rage filled eyes.. his eyes which were having tears till now were now red with anger and erupting the deep care and concern for her….

Maan shouted shutting arjun's mouth…

Maan: dare you… kuch nahi hoga MERI GEET KO…. Kuch bhi nahi… how dare you arjun…

Arjun smiled… he knew that it was difficult but not impossible … maan was a hot headed person and needs this kind of rough behavior with him to make him understand…

Arjun: kya hua..nahi sun paye… jaante ho kyun .. just because she is yours… sirf tumahri you have made her an indispensable part of your life… maan it's the time to move on… you have to be with her she needs you at this time most… and what have you done that she was aloof in this rain.. jaante ho na kahan thi wo….

Maan : I am sorry.. arjun I wont let anything touch her …I wont…

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1. MG FF : MENDING HEARTS ...


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2. MG OS : A NEW TEACHING

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3. MG FF : KASHMAKASH...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Yipeee me first ... lovely.. Arjun hit the right cord in Maan.. Meri Geet hayee so sweet
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Posted: 12 years ago


wow lovely emotional update.. te way my maan ki gussa , in tat i can only feel his love for his geet.. te way arjun making my maan to confess his love was so lovely..i love te update so much
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesumly touching...loved arjun-maan convo...continue sooon
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
wow maan ne geet ko meri geet kha really maan it's the time to move on
forget that ayesha
continue soon

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