The Locket (7) MG FF, THREAD 8 link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 57

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Posted: 12 years ago

Dekha ek Khwaab! Indeed a khawab in different context and understanding of it in three different states of mind. Lovely culmination and combination of dreams and desires with ego playing spoil sport.👏👏👏

The part started with fulfillment of his dreams of having her in his arms with him giving into his desires of feeling her intimately… but ended up with coming back to reality with a slap.😉 😆 I loved the pillow fight. So childish yet spoke of so many of her defenses and fight to be that strong Ms. Kapoor. But when he spoke in his defense of him being there for her in the night to soothe her of her nightmares caused her to put up her facade of strong though weakening defences as she didn't want to be her vulnerable self; even though knowing that unknowingly and unconsciously he has become a part of not only her vulnerable self but also of her entire being.

I guess there's more to Naina's and Poonam's story …. And I'm eagerly waiting for you to reveal it all.😃

When she was still fighting with self to be strong in front of him her old and raw wounds resurfaced when he tells her about the kiss being in his dreams and she misunderstands it as her being the unworthy to receive such love showered on her, bringing to forefront her own insecurities and feeling of inferior deep within.

I have again started liking Dev…😳😳😳 make it loving him (It was always there but when he used to torture her by his dominance it had decreased somewhat but now with this part it has again come to be as before 😉 ) I really liked the gradual yet needed changes you have showed him going through … his transformation from the person who considered his own emotions the most important is now majorly affected by Naina's emotions and pain; him making peace with his true feelings for her without trying to evade it any longer and ready to bar it all to her; him being in front of her as just Dev and not at all with his earlier pride of being with the 'K' tag.👏

Her conflicts were so well worded Avi… loved it. ❤️ The way she was holding onto that moment when he confessed his liking and want to be with her more than anyone but just Dev and his Naina knowing that she is at present can't fulfill his or her own need to be together, she treasuring that so as to treasure and live with it here onwards was beautifully explained. I so felt for her when she imagined him being happy if she accepted his proposal with his song-dance routine but then being shackled within self and going and denying him by wearing that hard mask of professionalism.

But Dev was a true gentleman and charm personified when he tries to remove that awkwardness between them making efforts and then having a talk with her to put this behind and remain on good terms as before that morning.😳👏

Somewhere Naina wants him to hold onto her even thought she presently can't hold onto him … deep within she wants him to be holding on for both of them but as she can't express it all she feels all the more enraged when her those wounds are rubbed in with Pari being there on the call from the other side… somewhere her jealousy for being that Girl comes out as her outbursts later when she warns him to be away from Geet. But I so loved his answer to her… khush kar diya … leaving her all shut.😳😆😉

Devdas Dev with his conflicts was so good…👏👏 the transition of his wants, conflicts and dreams was too well worded. Where in the start he wanted to live that dream… in the middle her rejection and insult on his face caused his ego to act leading him to reject and avoid it all as sour grapes just not wanting those dreams… But then indeed later it culminated with him being restless with those dreams and fighting it out and agreeing he does need her.👏

Thanks for updating… 🤗


Edited by Onir - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fabulous and fiery update
👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Fataakdi + Cool dude = The deadly duo
Fire and ice
😳

Before I forget superb song
Priceless piece of beauty by The Legend who changed the definition of Love of Hindi cinema
The king of romance
😊

Finally Dev's fantasy meets light😳
His dream realizes to have so close feel her and kiss her too!!!
but reality strikes and how😳

NT livid with his sudden advance
her initial shock replaced by anger and then
Dev ki dhulaai😆
He stole her first kiss

But I liked Dev taking the command and confessing to her the actual reason of falling asleep beside her
Tara's vulnerability surfaced out her glaring eyes immediately turned anxious with a fear of disclosing facts of her past in her sleep
Another insight to her past of events transpired post her Mom's wedding to Chandan and her eloping from there.
The danger still lurking around😔

Her darkened past finds light with Dev coming in her life
he has unknowingly brought out change in her otherwise lifeless being,
her feelings wisps of emotions, attraction and awareness around him.
His blunt truth that he had been dreaming and a thought that it wasn't her pricked her, her steeled persona cracking by tender caresses of love😳

Dev finally giving in to his attraction, his concern and his feelings for her, opens his heart to her admitting he would like to give them time and chance.
Loved it Avi so direct and simple just straight from heart probably thats why she could also feel the honesty in his voice
😊

But will Tara give them a chance?
Torn between her heart and mind and her soul lies lifeless in the dark alleys of her past
A range of emotions throbbing within fear, insecurity, anger, liking and pain
And she closes the door to her happiness leaving no room for dreams and desires😒

Dev very tactfully diffused the tension laughing out his hurt but still
easing her that nothing changes between them professionally

Pari's call affecting NT and she is worried for Bambi too

The last scene was just superb both fighting for Geet
one to keep her safe and other possessive for her
Such earnest emotions give you an insight of wonderful human beings they are😳
Bechaari Geet totally unaware ke uske liye ek nayi Mahabharat chid gayi😆


Fabulous one Avi
hats off to u for putting it down so beautifully
you feel a pinch at them parting away, laugh at Dev's dramebaazi, hurt to see NT in pain so impactful!!!!

Thanks for updating yaara
Have a great holiday
will miss u
🤗


Edited by heytal - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Dev & his zoo animals ke fights ka intazaar hai
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Posted: 12 years ago
kitna time lagega bata do yaar...
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow great story plz update soon
i'm really looking forward to your next part of your story
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful part dear
poor dev got slapped. 😆 loved the way he tried to ease the situation.
And the lines he sang were too good.

Amitji ko pyar aur dev ko thappad mile 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Naintara's inner demons won't let her be with Dev and that is truly heartbreaking. I see the parallelism here with the Maan-Geet love story - Geet's worries about her Darjee stop her from running away with her feelings also. But she is more open to Maan's affections and accepts his feelings, whereas Naintara blocks them from her mind and pushes them away... I guess her past life has been too traumatic for her to let it go but I do hope she can one day...

This particular verse summed her up perfectly, I really loved these lines:
'She was like a floating target right now nothing more than that. For the kite that has been cut there was nowhere to go but be lost in the emptiness of the skies or get torn up and mangled in the barriers it finds.'

Dev is such a gentleman, and I do feel sorry for him and his abrupt rejection from her, but something tells me that the Khurana brothers won't let go of their lady loves so easily...

Thank you for the update Avi 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing , superb and Mind Blowing 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Edited by monikaseth - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow!!!! loved it...naintara is hurt and she is trying to protect herself with the shield!!!! but hope dev will soon be able to find the real tara hidden beneath!!!! loved how u showed an insight to dev's mind!!! waiting for next 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I loved the update...this was d real side of dev ...the real lover boy side of it... dev attracted
To her n wants to really knw her :)) bt i agree with tara...firstly she hs a dark past n then to top it up she
Hs strtd havin feelings for the casanova ( frm tara perspective )...she cnt trust him n.she will take time...
Dev seems to b upset abt d rejection bt i loved tat he cares to fr tara n rejection is nt the first thing in his mind
I wish tara sees this carin side of dev too ...
Also i loved how tara is possesive abt geet too...i want to see some geet tara scenes :)))

Waiting for maaneet :)))

Thanks fr the pm :)

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