The Locket (7) MG FF, THREAD 8 link pg 1, COMPLETED

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Sri_Radha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#571

Wonderful update👏

poor dev got slapped. 😆

Continue soon

Eagerly waiting for next

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teja21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#572

awesome update dear

thanx fr d pm

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Padfoot_Prongs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#573

thank u avi..😃

long way to go for dev...

naintara itni asaani se hath nahi ayegi..

Dev - Tara pair is just too cute..

kiss-pitayi-proposal sab ho gaya..

pari is just too irritating. dev need to find some permanent ilaaj for her..

or finally dev babu ko bhi gussa aya..

dev is running away from Tara..

waiiting whether he will succeed or not..

PS :- aash ka bday kab hai?????

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#574

wow that sure was one hell of a slap

dude you should have known that she would do this

but its not easy for her

her past has made sure that she cant let you in easily

and yes you will have to work hard for her favour

though she is right to tell you to be away from geet

i know you mean no harm but look at it from her pov

it looks na as if you are trying it with her too

even though you arent how is she to know

what with you and your flirty behaviour and charming self

gosh it really aint easy for these two

and yet in the end it all works out for them

hope he can help her what with her past

waise what actually happened i wonder

guess it shall be out soon

so dev wont be devdas and he wont leave her even if her said he will

but he wont force her or pressurise her either

cheers for pm

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valli30

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Posted: 12 years ago

#575

awesome update

dev finally confessed that he likes her

but NT even though she wanted to say yes,her past is not allowing her to do so

she warned him to stay away from geet

that surely did not go well with dev

loved it

eargely waiting for next part

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custodian75

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Posted: 12 years ago

#576

Though I am not a big fan of Dev and Naintara, I am starting to like them in this ff. your characterization of these two is so good that I have started enjoying reading about them.

Please update the next part soon.

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nishu_shorna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#577

nice update...
thanks for the pm...

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893213

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Posted: 12 years ago

#578

Originally posted by: gurti30
Beautiful part dear
poor dev got slapped. 😆 loved the way he tried to ease the situation.
And the lines he sang were too good.

Amitji ko pyar aur dev ko thappad mile 😆

Thanks😃

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893213

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Posted: 12 years ago

#579

Originally posted by: -jaanleva-
Naintara's inner demons won't let her be with Dev and that is truly heartbreaking. I see the parallelism here with the Maan-Geet love story - Geet's worries about her Darjee stop her from running away with her feelings also. But she is more open to Maan's affections and accepts his feelings, whereas Naintara blocks them from her mind and pushes them away... I guess her past life has been too traumatic for her to let it go but I do hope she can one day...

This particular verse summed her up perfectly, I really loved these lines:
'She was like a floating target right now nothing more than that. For the kite that has been cut there was nowhere to go but be lost in the emptiness of the skies or get torn up and mangled in the barriers it finds.'

Dev is such a gentleman, and I do feel sorry for him and his abrupt rejection from her, but something tells me that the Khurana brothers won't let go of their lady loves so easily...

Thank you for the update Avi 🤗

He is a nice guy, that's for sure. Sometimes people who flirt a lot and are jovial are not taken seriously. Their words are discounted easily. Same is the case for him.

Thanks Fozia. Glad you are here.😃🤗

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893213

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Posted: 12 years ago

#580

Originally posted by: aditi_2010
wow!!!! loved it...naintara is hurt and she is trying to protect herself with the shield!!!! but hope dev will soon be able to find the real tara hidden beneath!!!! loved how u showed an insight to dev's mind!!! waiting for next 😊

NT has a lot to overcome before that can happen. Thanks Aditi for being here.😃