The Locket (7) MG FF, THREAD 8 link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 31

Originally posted by: Sheen-Coolkiwi

meko makhan lagaing mere sath aur bhi log thay 😆

Originally posted by: Onir

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Lovely update but then I'm left with a question that instead of getting diverted hasn't he pushed her & himself into a pool of desires and dreams to be resisted here onward. 😉😳

Ab sapno mein diversion aayega. Thappad yaad aayega..😆😆😆

The few songs you incorporated in this part were too good to help to switch from moods while reading the scenes... be it the start where that song spoke of his need to break the silence between them... or the chak dhoom song speaking of the joy and contentment of re-living an aspect/memory from her childhood. ... roop tera mastana breaking the awkwardness (even though being replaced with indifference to shadow the actual attraction and vulnerability) and making them feel to stay in that room... Bheege bheege si yeh raatein a song that spoke of Naina's inner turmoil and fight that she has to endure each day with self & her own desires and pain... 👏 This part was a musical collaboration for me making me feel all the emotions expressed. ❤️

Thanks. It was a khichdi update to write with a lot of mixed up emotions so I took the help of songs...

I liked how you showed both Dev- Naina in different light to the other in their own childishness and carefree self. A new aspect to discover for both.

Dev called her Haathi... 🤣 he still remembers that slap but nonetheless couldn't stop from receiving another slap from his personal Haathi... 😆

He is a gone case poor guy!! Plus I am liking the fun of having a handsome intelligent guy getting kantap when I want to give it to him...😆😆

Naina is having a lot to deal with at a single time... from fighting her past memories to her own wounds, to this handsome man who keeps invading her dreams, thoughts each moment with his actions, presence and ways. But he is there for her in his own way to soothe her when she is in the clutches of her dark and lonely past.

Naina misses a father figure but Dev in his own ways and dealings is renewing her wounds but also giving her a solace.

You caught that about the update. She has trust issues given her life so far. It will be hard to her to let go anything and Dev has been with quite a few people too, so she does not take his attentions seriously.

Both Khurana twins are quite fond of kids and are making a special space in the hearts of their lady love through bonding with kids... 👏😳

He advised himself that good things come to those who wait but couldn't wait to kiss her in that sleep dazed mind and in his own pool of longing and desires and ended up getting a slap... Poor Dev but yes he deserved it for his action... 😆

Continue soon... 🤗

Originally posted by: Onir

Congrats Avi on the 6000th post... 🤗

Kya speed hai 👍🏼

Originally posted by: dqno1

😳😳 Kya karu... I am quiet by nature but some people..😡 push me to talk so much...😆

Originally posted by: Onir

Haan ji haan kuch log hai hi special ki aap bol padti ho... 😆😆😆

Originally posted by: sonai-adrica

Avi,
U have beautifully potrayed the feelings of rose day. Feelings of a friend who didn't want her friend to feel lonely so made an arrengement so that she also got an rose.feelings of teenagers for whom the number of roses are more importent than the feeling attached with it. Feelings of a botany professor for whom an unique rose is only a tool to share wisedom.feelings of a person who didn't know if he could be able to give the rose to it's rightful owner or not.the anxiety,nervousness,eagerness as well as fear of rejection.the feeling of dejection after witnessing the fall of every petal.the feeling of helplessness when u hurt the person most whom u started to think beyond friend. you have described all these feelings beautifully. And last but the best while drowning in sorrow and compairing ur life with darknesss when u suddenly got to know that ur feelings is reciprocated may be secretly but equally then the feeling of removal of heavy weight from ur heart simply heart touching.


About dev and naintara i always adore this couple more.i thought to ask u that how did naintara know dev before meeting in office.firstday before their meeting naintara dreamt about dev.but u have already given the answer. Naintata's longing for a family is really heart wrenching. About the slap and push.. this is much needed push to proceed their relationship further.for good or bad future will tell.

Originally posted by: dqno1

Tu update type kar Onir... 😲

it's been too much vacation for you...😊