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Shruti Jain

@smj1977.shruti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: reachsky2011
What was that...

certain things known before completing it was...

those 2 are Maan & Geet

dev being the intermediate

& the narrator will be the mrs. VSK 😉

😆

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: smj1977.shruti

post kiya to aap gayab ho gaye

just saw now

will read it in lunch time

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Shruti Jain

@smj1977.shruti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

just saw now

will read it in lunch time

OKie Dokie

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kalabhas

@Hanamisuki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

it was a funny one.
interesting to read.till the end u maintained the suspense of the narrator .
very good os.

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Jeba Rahman

@the_chosen_one

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

its superb di.
I am blown away.

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take_a_hint

@take_a_hint

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

that was really good

loved it

knowing the end was too good

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.Tulip.

@.Tulip.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

dat was awesome😆

luvd it

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chhavi

@Shonameet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: smj1977.shruti

thanks A Ton

nw thats rhyming hon.. 😆

Edited by Shonameet - 12 years ago

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Geet88

@Geet88

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Wow wooow
So awesum + interesting one story
I read it eagerly to knew who r they nd why they behaved like this in office
Once again lovlllyyy story

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#50

Wow...lovely part dear

Very simple & sweet story

Poor Pari...itna spy kiya par haath kuch nahi aaya...aur upar se heart break bhi ho gaya...but she was not at total loss...haath to nahi mila lekin "ungli" to pakad payi...lol...aakhir mrs vicky singh khurana to ban payi...vicky loves her but kya she has not seen him in office ...sirf maaneet ke peeche jasoosi kar rahi thi...

So they were fighting over kids..geet wanted kids as it was 4 years of their marriage and maan did not want so soon...thats why they were not on talking terms...