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chavvi16 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
man that was something
didnt know you had written another chapter there
but wow this is getting so much fun
not long to go right
and they shall meet but what will that encounter of maneet be like
cause she aint like his other queens
she is a rajput princess and there is no way she will submit to him
so she went on her own to teach the king a lesson
wow she is good aint she
and brave and intelligent not to forget beautiful
lets see how maanveer shall fair against the beauty with brains and courage
her father was right to send her away
but of course she didnt stay there for too long did she which she wouldnt
cheers for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
MAANVEER IS VERY SPOILED AND GREED HOPE GEETAJALI TEACHES HIM A LESSON HE WILL NEVER FOR GET AWESOME UPDATE THANKS FOR THE TRANSLATION CAN'T WAIT FOR THE FIRST MEETING THANKS THE PM
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Posted: 12 years ago




chapter 3



This is a purely imaginary Fiction, nothing is related to history even some place is also not exist on earth. someone have problem pm me than.


In rangmahal (a pleasure palace)

Maan entered inside with a lion pace and settled on main singhasan (chair) .. other bow in front of him and take their own seat to see celebration dance.. their is egoistic smirked on maan lips.. like a real won lion.. dancer comes and greeted to maan and maan signal them to starts their art and entertain him.. this is the way king relaxed when they are free from war field.. some dancer.. different liquids.. and beautiful slaves.. who are just here for their pleasure but they never make out with them.. this right is only went to their queens.

Main dancer sat in middle in seductive posture too woo maan and maan just smirked..

Khoob parda hai ke chilman se lage baithe hain

Saaf chhupte bhi nahin saamne aate bhi nahi

Other side of palace one shadow is moving inside with selective steps.. there are many secret ways in the palace and right now this shadow just want her revenge only.. only two eye are visible to other .. and one shining sword is shining in her beautiful milky white hand.. she is moving with lighting speed.



Sunlo tum chilman uthegi nahin

Jalvon ki roshni milegi nahin

Tum udhar ho chilman ke,

roshni toh chan chan ke

Aayegi aashiqon tak

rukegi nahinTaa

na dhum dhum dhum, tan na dhum dhum dhum,

taa na dhum dhum, ta na na dhum

Other side maan enjoying cool breezes.. and his one exotic drink.. full moon is shining in black sky and only candle and moon light is covering whole and giving it a divine aroma.. and breezes are mingled with jasmine flower smells.. over all this is heaven on earth for a daring ruler.. maanveer is following every step of dancer with dark eye.. he is full in dreamland with such a beautiful composition.


Kaisi hai yeh dastaan

Kuch na hum ne kaha

kuch na tum ne kaha

Baat pahonchi kahaan se kahaan

Kaisi hai yeh dastaan

Khoob hai yeh junoon aap ka

Other side of palace that shadow is successful in coming inside after crossing boundaries.. and throw one heavy rope in the palace backside window and climbed in the palace without any unwanted attraction.. and moved to her target with thief steps with so much consciousness.


Shukriya shukriya shukriyahai

junoon ka jo yeh daawa

Toh huzoor ka hai kya iraada

Ek naam japenge

jhoom jhoom jhoom


But to her bad luck maanveer one solider caught her and pin her with bhales (sharp nib weapon)..and here that shadow means princess Geetangli are stuck with delhi soliders.

"Kon hu tum (who are you)" one main solider asked in scary voice.

"Aapse matlab ye mahal humara hai hum isse wapas lene aaye hai (this is not your matter.. and this is our palace and I am here to take it back)" Geetangli answered them in true princess manner her eye are splitting fire and voice had a proud which made maanveer soldiers fumbled..after all they are mere soldiers and she is a princess.. her head is high even when she is covered with enemy also.

"Isse maharaj ke samukhe (in front) le chalo (take her in front of king)" one solider spoke and escort her in rangmahal but no one touched her only they are using bhale this is their culture.. soldiers never touched any princess or ladies.

Other side maan other trust able man come near maan ear and filled him with new moments in his place and soldiers are coming here with that yudha (solider).

Man tu shudam,

tu man shudi,

man tan shudam,

tu jan shudiTaakas

nagoyad baad azeen man

deegaram tu deegari.

Geetangli entered in rangmahal like a true lioness.. there is Grace in her pace and head is high between all her enemy.. her almond eye hold maan eye instantly.. this is first time any princess is directly borrowing her eye into his.. he is amazed with her guts.. her eye spitting fire .. like trying to burn him.. but still they are so beautiful and her khol is enchanting her eye captive power.. maanveer one time wants to see her face only and singers lines making situation more exiting for.. maan eyed her from head to toe.. she is simply breathtaking.. maanveer singled to his soldiers to take 2 step back from this lioness and stand up from of his sit suddenly and other also stand up instantly in respect.. Geetangli still holding her sword and her proud high.. no matter what if she is in front of Delhi king.

kya kahoon tum ajeeb lagte ho

door jitna bhi jaa rahe ho tummu

jhko utne kareeb lagte ho

kya kahoon tum ajeeb lagte ho

meri qismet mein tum nahin,

phir bhi'mujhko apna naseeb lagte ho

Daghina dhinak tum tum daghina dhinak tum'Sunlo tum'..

Maanveer takes slow steps toward geetangli but she didn't even show a single line of fear.. her eye only showing hatred for maanveer.. or a determination.. other side maanveer only showing amazement and a lips had a smirk.. all other members are slightly shivering to saw a girl is watching directly in their king eye and he didn't even said anything still.. they are fearing from his peace..

ek baar utha do parda

ek baar dikha do jalwa

is dil mein chhupaaloon tumko

saanson mein basaaloon tumko

aankhon mein sadaa ki khatir

tasveer banaloon tumko

aanewaali tanhaayikal saath jo apne laayi

gham ki bhaari zanjeerein

toh hongi yeh tasveerein

inhe dekh ke main jee loonga

har zeher ko main piloongatum

jaao kahin tum raho kahin

goonjenge yeh bol meri

Maanveer tried to touched her veil with his hand and Geetangli immediately took 2 step back...

"Safdan maharaj!!! Ye ek rajkumari ki maryada ka preshan (question) hai (alert king!!! Here is a question about princess self respect)" geetangli pointed her sword on maanveer chest and made maan more excited.. he never mat any lioness in his life.. and she is daring.. right now she is on his misery and she had guts to pointed her sword on maan chest.. maanveer playfully surrendered in front of her..with a smile and made other gulped their saliva.

dhadkan kedhadkan dhadkan dhadkan dhadkangoonjenge yeh bol meri dhadkan ke

tum udhar ho chilman keroshni toh chan chan chan keaayegi aashiqon tak rukegi nahintaa na dhum'.

Maan again sat on his sighasan (chair).. and all artists greeted him and left from there.. and maanveer turned her full attention on his new interest object.. who is still trying to kill him with glares.


precap: what will maanveer do now?

words: 1100

thanks for likes and comments



Edited by BULBUL.A - 12 years ago


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keenu_kk thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow so maan did not see geet face he saw only her eyes dear
that me confused😉
bt overall ossum
finally lion met his lioness
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Posted: 12 years ago
that is totally beautiful
bgm is apt..
geet keeping head high even b4 maan..
maan is first time attracted to a wild lioness
only seeing her eyes..
loved it..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow geet is so brave
Waiting 4 maan's reaction wht he will do now
Lets c a face off fight between dem n with few conditions
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part
loving this geet
maan only saw her eyes...i think he liked her nature

Edited by harshithaaaaaaa - 12 years ago
chavvi16 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
maar dalengi aap sach mein
kya solid first meet thi
man he is never gonna forget this meet for sure
not till the day he dies
so our princess was out to kill the king
but she got caught unfortunately
but thats okay after all she is the princess
the way she spoke and wasnt even scared when caught
wow now that sure was something
she sure got his attention
but beware maanveer rajput rajkumari aint that easy to handle
must hand it to her that she still was showing all her courage though surrounded by the enemy
wonder what he shall do or say now
well be careful is all i can say to maharaj
oh this just keeps getting more and more intriguing dear
haiyye that pic of maneet was just amazing
cheers for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice dear😊

love geet she is so brave 😃

does nt bow down👏

maan is happy to see a daring princess ⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
bulbul everything is just perfect.
aisa lag raha tha ki me seeing a movie its just awesome part

hats off tu u re


ye maan vir apna jit ka celebration kar ra hay uder princess in her way

ops pakri gaye but she is princess how can she bow her hear neverr


maanvir fida over geet .nobody still never rise his/her voice to him but today geet did

dekhan ye hay abb kya kya hota hay

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