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Jeba Rahman

@the_chosen_one

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#131

wow superb update.
now maan is gone :D

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Sindhu

@sree10

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#132

Beautiful loved it, i think this will go forward form here.

congrats on the new thread.

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harshithaaaaaaa

@harshithaaaaaaa

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#133

congrats di

geet is trying to open up

superb part

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prachi sinha

@geetsmile

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#134

congrats for new thread

n update was awesome

soo at last geet wore colourfull dress

waiting for next

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Sushmacholke

@Sushmacholke

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#135

Congozzzfor new thread Smiley 😊Sati is sumthn wch depicts pain sweet pain you have beautifully described it Part 48 feel of IT 😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳 subtle way of expressin it👏👏👏👏👏👏 Me wonder how MSK slept wtout loosin himself😆😆😆😆 Part 49 awww so 1 of truth about her hair n dress revealed... Geets loyalty n here Maan was all careless :/ Now all I wanna see is Maaneet sweet love from your magical wand 😊

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crazydream

@crazydream

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#136

Congrats for new thread.

This update was beautiful.

Maan understanding her n

Wat she went through was

Unimaginable.

He told to trust him n

Will make everything correct.

Geet naya avatar.

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---nishu---

@---nishu---

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#137

''new emotions''

hasratyien aaj phir

sar chad rahi hai !

bhikhar gaye the

jo sapne !

unnhe phir se aaj ,

aaankhein bun rahi hai !

tu chali mere saath ,

toh

mujh pe bhi hai noor aaya !

ke tujhe dekh kar

saath mere ,

duniya yeh jal rahi hai !

sirf duniya kya

woh khuda ,

jisne hai hame banaya ,

ab saath hame dekh kar

usse bhi

khud pe hai fackr(proud) aaya

yeh teri payal ki

cham cham ,

kya yeh khanak ghungruoo main ,

hamessha se thi !

yah aaj tune

chu liya inhe ,

is liye yeh bhi bahak gaye hai !

chamak teri mukhde(face) ki dekh kar

dekh

suraj taare bhi chip gaye hai

itni hasi hai tu

ke tujhe ik baar dekhne ko

saaye bhi ruk gaye hai

Edited by 9n9i9s9h9u9 - 12 years ago

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KawaiiGeet

@kawaii_geet

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#138

congrats on the new thread diii
and update, though sad, was a bright one..like an unknown rope pulling them towards the light

it was so so so emotional for me to read her insecurity when she said she cut he rhair off for it was meant only for his eyes...
the more he gets to know the more he feels the pain..
but unknowiingly, she is slowly very slowly coming out of that same pain by letting them out.
its a very slow process but i fear the time when she will be out of her cage yet binding him to another cage of guilt.
i loved the update sooo much but a little scared of what might happen next
i am sure he will bring her back but am uncertain about the fact if he'd be able to live a guilt free life with her... it was sumwhr his fault too but even he didn't know that they would make her sati...
ohh this is breaking my head
diii continue super soon