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Posted: 12 years ago
outstanding reet.finally arjun realized that his behavior towards her has turned her into this.
Make her fine doctor .. will you ?

this line has said so many things all together.it's like his life is slipping away with her.he needs assurance that his life will be with him.that's amazing reet.


I m helping you because geet wouldn't recover it this time . last time she survived because she was too young and gullible to be fooled .now she is not .

i really hope maan will know the past in no time after this statement of mr.awasty.

I m the one she has got .

only one .


this line is so beautiful.it's right arjun is somewhere the reason along with herself that she is in this condition but he is the only one that can make everything right.



Hoping so badly that she didn't mean it when she had said ..she wanted me to move on..

Because that means she has lost the faith on life ..hope for herself.

Because that's not her defeat ..that was mine

I was defeated .. defeated by time , my destiny , her and love ..its only so much I could take .


i really felt somethung clenched in my heart after reading this line.



Never forget where I m touching you geet . cause if you do .. It would burn me alive


last but not the least this line is incredibly beautiful.

i hope geet does not say this again that arjun hates her cause in every line he told her two words are there her arjun.only her.this update is just amazing.satya is a darling.anant raichand what can i say about him??typical zamidar always thinks about their reputation.when his grand daughter is in her worst he is thinking who'll marry her after this??

reet this update is outstanding.i don't know what is missing in previous update but i must say this is totally a filler update.everything is there where it should be.you are a wonderful writer reet.


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Posted: 12 years ago
superb and speechless
pain of maan and geet can never be defined
anant was mean and selfish person
only arjun can bring geet out of depression
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Posted: 12 years ago
updated on previous page...😛
Edited by palindrome - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Amour_Reet



no dear ..i came across any fic like that . i hav hardly read any maneet fic. i m myself crazy about aarmanshilpa/ridz or angad kripa fan..later read stuffs on arshi too

maneet i didnt read other than one or two very good fics .

that must be co-incidence ..


of course it is co-incidence because the situation, the feel everything is very very different..

i loved both at their places.. i just wanna quote that physical violence wala part..😊


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Posted: 12 years ago

4.30 am ?

Why isn't there light yet ?


how can there be light when his life...his love...his soul is lying there lifeless...depressed...torn...broken and ill...her smile is the light that brightens his life...when she is lifeless lying there between white hospital sheets with closed eyes...how can there be any light in his life???

(beautiful depiction of his life reet... ironic...its dawn for the rest of the world...time when light returns after sun is up from its nap but for him...he knows it better)


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Before I marred her life with my presence she used to be so happy , always jumping full in spirit ..the chortling sound of her musical laugh used to bring smile in faces who hadn't even known her.

She loved making rongoli's .. dancing crazily ..shouting endlessly ecstatic about something trivial . squeak in joy .. always surrounded by so many people that sometimes I used to feel jealous .

geet couldn't stop talking even in the middle of the class .. Now she lay there in the colorless room wearing all white all alone and quiet like a deadbody .

good job satya... 👍🏼 rangoli and all...i love satyas detailing to arjun abt her activities😛😛i wish satya had helped him right from the time he left...if he had...arjun would have known what awashty left unfinished

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. I had to be close to her .as close as possible . I don't care if she doesn't know I m here .. I don't care if she cant feel me .

(reading this line suddenly a song came to my mind...nt song but line of the song...sang sang yuh chalu tere jaise tera aasmaan...i dunno even if dis line makes sense...😆)


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how things changed between us .. like a bolt from the blue .

I was livid at her outrageous allegation ! I felt ruthlessly betrayed . humiliated by my students , the teachers , every face I saw in front of me .. I couldn't meet my own eyes in mirror ..

I had blamed myself for loving this girl .i have been so crazy about her that I forgot everything . sacrificing everything , every relationship .every last thing I got ..i had just loved her . then she shattered my pride , my reputation . she didn't only humiliate my reputation .she disgraced my love .


My pure untainted love .


That left me in no position to stand .

I reacted ..may be brutally . I didn't want to see her face.. for long .

But when I did ..i actually saw her .. my hatred for her whipped me back .

She had coiled herself within this shell of a body .

She made herself invisible day by day .

Just because I didn't want to see her .

What surprised me .. I hadn't had to say her that .. she had read it in my eyes .

that I hated her .


the realization of his actions... heart shattering at this moment ...but is he allowed to feel the pain...NO there lies his soul who needs to be taken care of...he cannot dwell into his realizations now...the beholder of his heart needs him more than the oxygen mask


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Suddenly I remembered something anant had said ..

"Do you realize you aren't worthy of what you want . a low life like you can never keep her happy the way she deserved ..so she is better off without you ."


look whos talking😲😲😲

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I m the one she has got .

only one .


both of them realized the irony of her life...he is the one and only for her

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arjuns one sided conversation and geets silence took the cake ... one hell of a scene u wrote reet👏

Now there is a reaction ..a proof of life .


i have nothing to say about that scene where he heals her ... something she neede to hold on to her life...


about anant the less said the better...waiting for maan anant confrontation...i will defo see lightening when they clash ... the monsoon will only help me more


i want awasthy to finish what he started when arjun is lil more calm...


dia-satya...do i read something between the lines here ????😉😉

Edited by fffanatic - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh reet its just awesome, supereb, excellent and what all can i say its just mindblowing update👏.
loved satya verymuch how he explained everything to dia. Mr.sahay he just got confirmation that there is something more between arjun and geet and loved how he supported arjun. 👏
The best part is how arjun removed the touch of that b*****d vikas 😡and seeded his touch on geet so that she can come out of the feel.Arjun treatement has worked.
Satya and dia me thinking good pair chalega.
And last but not the least waiting for the two titans to clash anant and arjun it will be thunderstorm definetely.

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Posted: 12 years ago
Satya well don.😃
thank god u told her everything...
"Do you realize you aren't worthy of what you want . a low life like you can never keep her happy the way she deserved ..so she is better off without you ."
Anant raichand😡

Loved how maan manofying her...convincing her to come back from her cold shell...⭐️
Geet's word pained me..she is like beyond repair now...
even maan's positive words she took it as against herself 😔
"I Cant move on..
Can never ever do that for her.
If she wants to walk alone ..she can.. I will be here just waiting for her .
Because she had once asked .
Never to leave her ."
How eanerstly he is saying he can't be with anybody else...he is only his geet's 😊
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"Hoping so badly that she didn't mean it when she had said ..she wanted me to move on..
Because that means she has lost the faith on life ..hope for herself.
Because that's not her defeat ..that was mine
I was defeated .. defeated by time , my destiny , her and love ..its only so much I could take ."
Loved these lines...it express geet's pain as well as maan's feelings ..
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"I m the worst of my kind sir .. I m the only one who deserves the cruelest punishment
Rape..!"
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It felt me like geet is just like broken flower...that vikas fiasco left her broken completely...
she was already broken due to guilt & that incident left her completely trashed 😔
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geet's each word like bullet to my heart...
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Incridible part⭐️
Loved it...

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Will be eagerly waiting for next part...
pardon for any mistakes😊
Thanks for update 😊
Luv u di😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
ye kya ho raha hai
i think tht dia and satya will make a good couple as perfect to hamare maaneet hain jee
so no i think its high time geet should know ki arjun is maan
her maan her huuby
and maan to confront geet the come wike tsunami in front of hamare dadaji
kinna maza aayega dadaji confuse ki maan ya arjun
haye
loved it
awesome update

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Posted: 12 years ago
breath taking update reet. spellbound .
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Posted: 12 years ago
maan did a fabulous job
now AR caring for geet...disgusting man
satya & dia...hummm
now dia knows thier secret
poor awathi, scaring for what will AR do if he comes to know about maan
cont soon

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