my teacher (II) c index for (III) - Page 28

Great one. It is getting more n more interesting.

Firstly thanks a ton for writing this story. Such beauty in words, such flow of perception in true form. Loved each part, each progression, I'm left mesmerised with it all. just loved it all for the perfection in imperfection, for flawed attraction yet binding promise, and mostly for love that is beyond hurt, pain, humiliation and one that comes to be the source of life. ❤️

You updated this part in bits & pieces and I read them in bits and pieces, so with each new addition I have my heartbeat raising. I had thought that part 23 I will always treasure but NO, this one is added to the list with this one being the topmost in the list for now. A beautiful piece with nerve wreaking nervousness anticipating the next progression and high speed pumping blood in my cardiac system 😆 you're brilliant you know that.

The update started off with the end of the last one "…She is his wife…" Wow the numbing silence & anxiety was perceptible. She was taken for a toss completely. She must not have even ever imagined this news and that too coming out in front of her minutes after her heartfelt confession. She must have felt her heart squeeze when Arjun remained quiet not protesting once to Satya's claim. She pinned for his one refusal, that even though Satya was talking to her she had her eyes fixated on Arjun for getting some solace. Satya yet took it all calmly & continuously wanted her to hear it all out. And then comes the final blow when Arjun agreed to it so sincerely that it meant the world to him, this single fact of their relation.

Poor Dia … But I would say fear not Satya is here for you, why I'm right na? He had kept a watch in Geet and then Dia. Hmmm Satya babu must say along with his Bhai he had his own motive too. )Just kidding) I really adored Satya when he said that he is the "cupid" that too winking at her, trying to ease it for her as he knows it's not such a light matter for a girl like Dia. All of Dia's questioning & every doubt must have come to a standstill with the harsh realisation Satya drilled in Arjun would have shared it with her if he trusted her for it. But no he trusted Dia for self but not for his life… his JAAN.. his Geet. This proves Geet is much more important to him than anyone. Only if this Maan in him would have realised headstrong earlier without Satya involving in so much could have been avoided. He could come out clear about Arjun=Maan. That no pain, hurt & humiliation now boils down to anything above his love. What had me grinning was "He can't trust you with this information, but on the other hand I do…." Oh my quite a lot is given out Satya ji.. *winkwink*

When Arjun moves out as he realises that it's the most treasured and cherished love story … I fell for this teacher again. ❤️

Girls are complicated, when you feel you can trust them, they start off with other language…. 🤣 Oh my I wanted to say this is so because girls think from their Heart that has more space for all while men think from their mind. I ahs heard a saying and quite believe it that for a successful relation the woman should understand her Man more & love less as that's what they need, while the man should only love his woman above all and not try understanding her at all. Saves all complications… 😆

The outside scene where he is angry on Geet to think for him to move on was too good. I loved it that he didn't take it the other way. He does know what she must have felt. Then came the phone call and I skipped a beat, honestly I was so shocked ki ab kya hua?

It was nerve wreacking, my neurons were firing at great speed to absorb all of it & yet understand. I had Goosebumps with that description. His anxiety & numbness was touching. How he zoned out everyone except them two. He made her form clung to him… "Clung the body with himself.. trying to induce his life in her from him…" Oh I was so touched by this. It showed his ultimate acceptance, helplessness and fear to lose his only relation & love. She had closed her eyes the last time he had seen her while tucking her in her bed after the hospital visit and since then he couldn't see her love filled eyes. The way he sat static holding onto her dupata was so painful. The flashbacks scenes of her confession, her helplessness, his humiliation, his so called hate, her guilt & punishment, herself disgust, her insecurity and loneliness, his being late in realising it all, the rooftop words …Because I have no one else; all of it was so well mingled. Great description! I could feel it all happening in front of me. I was afraid of this from the very beginning. That it shouldn't be too late for him to realise how far his Geet has gone not one that he knew of; not this one who is depressed, lost on life, clinging to hope to die saying him to move on. I was afraid that the opportunity if a second chance will be too dreading. And this will push him in self failure and dejection but he rose off it marvellously for them, for her, for his wife.

Mr. Sahay … is my another favourite here. He's such a cutie. He knew it all, saw it all and understood the undercurrents. He helped these two love birds, facing Anant bravely & uniquely in his own way, also helping Arjun to be away from Anant. Even so much so taking the blame off Arjun on himself, just because he knew that no harm should come more than that has come on these two souls destined to be together.

Anant comes in now. I just don't know what to feel for him. He saw his dead wife's state in Geet yet I feel nothing for him. He raises so many Qs in my mind. Hard nut to crack I say. He comes now and shows his authority & so called love for Geet where was he when she actually needed him as father figure to protect. That time he wanted to safeguard his own reputation. That's why Uday gave all of Geet's responsibility to Arjun as there could be none other than him for his Daughter. Indeed Arjun is worthy of Geet and the only guardian. Now too he asked whether she's raped. Again just thinking of his name status and reputation, not once going to comfort his granddaughter. I loved the Doc's answer that she is a virgin, that's what people like Anant are concerned with A fitting reply to him.

there;s more but will come to it soon... 😊

Originally posted by: Amour_Reet

i dont understand

do you mean u like it ?
u actually do ?

i mean the controversial part ????

YES i LIKE IT... I love it... LOVE...❤️

Originally posted by: dqno1

I am holding my breath and there was no controversial part at all...😕😕

Superb tha,...👏 check pm

I agree it was beautiful as a free flowing poetry & splendid.. just & what I find very apt. 👏

nice update it was painful regarding geet condition in the start ,both are hurt i wish they soon become fine loved the last part how arjun tried to soothe geet but i also wanted to know the feeling of geet when he is doing it what she felt when he is trying to heal her wounds

they r the ones who have ability to hurt each other, they r alone capable of healing each others wounds. they are meant to love each other and they alone can do anything to keep that love alive. they r the true love pair.

Oh God,as always pehle sochna padhega,kya kya hua,then comment karti hoo.

Originally posted by: mannubhardwaj

i'll start from the end..

She can return the favor .. right ?

she will???? hmmm we will wait for this...

satya-dia?????? nice combo if it is..

btw i hate AR from bottom of my heart. so selfish he is.😡

i loved the way Arjun removed that🤬touch from geet... finally now it's her arjun's touch..

i don't know whether u know ritzi di or not. she has used similar sequence in her FF. there maan told geet that she shud treat it just as a physical violence.

here also maan removed 🤬 touch from geet's body..

now her healing will be faster.

the wounds are very very deep both for geet and maan. and only these two can heal each other.

but here comes the powerful villain who thinks he is invincible.😡😡😡

i loved the sequence when satya persuade arjun to let him tell the truth to Dia.

BTW i seriously want that vikas to be ebaten by girls. he shud learn the esson from girls...

loved the update..

no dear ..i came across any fic like that . i hav hardly read any maneet fic. i m myself crazy about aarmanshilpa/ridz or angad kripa fan..later read stuffs on arshi too

maneet i didnt read other than one or two very good fics .

that must be co-incidence ..

Will comment 2mmorow di 😔sorry !!