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rizwanaq

@rizwanaq

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Posted: 12 years ago

#281

great update...waiting to find out when she finds out that arjun is maan.

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Sampa Ghosh

@sweetsampa39

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#282

" She made herself invisible day by
day .
Just because I didn't want to see
her .
What surprised me .. I hadn't had to
say her that .. she had read it in my
eyes . that I hated her ."

" She didn't answer , didn't cross my
way ..just kept slowly disappearing
from my sight . losing herself in self
loathing ."

How can one be not moved with these kind of writing and lines.The whole self talk of Maan was remarkably touching,telling the tale of his failure but I think time also played cruel to them.But he knows that he is the only person for her so he cudnt break down.Bravo.
Sahay and Dr.Guha,undestood Arjun's pain and love and respected that.Sahay even witnessed Arjun's plead to Geet in the ambulance.

Arjun's motivational talks trying to take Geet out of depression,outstanding.It took all his paitence to stay calm and talk Geet out of her mental state.And Geet reacted,she spoke,she let out her grief copying Arjun's words to he himself.

And then his remedy to remove the scum Vikas's touch fm Geet's body,kya kahu shabd nahi hai.How can smbdy be so so in love?? How can we hate him for making Geet remember only his touch.Arjun and only Arjun cud've done this.No psychiatrist cant do that.Gr8 thinking Reet.

Geet will have to fight along with Arjun to punish Vikas.

AR,inhuman,Arre yaar jaanwar bhi apne bachcho se pyar karta hai,but Anant is worse.

And Satya,the Cupid,awww,I love him.Dia needed to know the truth.

And Reet,tell me are planning for a new pair,hmmm,Dia-Satya.And if you are then its a thumbs up fm my side.

Ek update mein itna kuch ho jaata hai ki jazbaat sambhale nahi sambhalte.But I aint complaining,I m addicted to ur long updates.Thanx buddy for d update.You rock.

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Sampa Ghosh

@sweetsampa39

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#283

Arre haan yeh to bhul hi gayi,

Now awasthy knows that Arjun is Maan and I think Dia too.

Itna tense situation hai ki neend ghayab hai.

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ritzy09

@ritzy09

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#284

Hi Reet

You probably do not know me as this is my first time commenting on your work. I will be frank that I have not read your other works (but will do soon😛). I started reading my teacher couple of days back and you have made me crazy...yes absolutely crazy.

I write a FF too and most of the time when I ma free I keep on imagining my own story. But your FF has taken my capability to think of anything else other than this FF and characters of this FF.

I hardly cry but this story has made corners of my eye burn so many times in these past few days. I keep on thinking of Geet, Arjun, Sunanda, Dia even satya for that matter all the time.

You are an absolutely fantastic writer. I had heard so many rave reviews of your other work but I did not read because it was left on hold. But now I am hoping you have completed it so I will go and read it as well.

Coming to this story, what can I say. Child marriage and girl forgetting her husband or vice versa has been a topic of many a movies. A teacher/student love relationship is also not a new one. But your unique blending of two and writing style has just turned this into a brilliant piece of art. Such impecable writing style that even simplest of words bring out the emotions in the readers. Every chapter, every character, every track from start to now is just a piece of sheer beauty.

I can't possibly comment for all parts but will definately start now. Last chapter was once again a masterpiece. So many things hapenned starting from Dia coming to know the truth and quite an advancement in satya's character. He comes across as a positive force trying to anchor both Maan and Dia. Amidst all dark thoughts, his sole sane voice was enough to disperse those dark clouds. he rightly said that Maan's silence was making things worse. Dia needed to understand depth of Maan-Geet relationship. She isn't wrong but she needs to be stopped before she falls too deep in the emotional well called Arjun.

Geet's depression was evident when she asked Dia to help Arjun move on. That was her acceeptance of defeat. She was already wilting under the burden of her self loathing and Arjun's hatred or punsihment but Vikas's filthy touches just pushed her into the tranche called worthlessnes. She doesn't see herself worthy of him any more.

Her helpless loneliness was just palpable as she laid on that bed with Arjun's words finally not having any affect on her being. Maan's touch to remove Vikas's dirty touch was emotional. I have written somehting similar myslef so could relate to it and as always you expressed it beautifully. Now when she will see herself, feel herself, touch herself she can't hate herself. Bceause it is not Vikas's touch but Maan's touch which is ingrained in her memory.

Anant and his behaviour - what can I say. Can't expect anything more from him. But one line touched me. He saw his own dead wife in Geet. Maybe...just maybe he loves her in his own twisted way but in the end he is too manipulative to keep that love honest and pure.

Once again beautiful story. i am sure you get such comments ona regular basis but still it is my pleasure to say that you have earned yourself a new fan.

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sonai-adrica

@sonai-adrica

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#285

.And if bhai wanted to share this piece of information with you he would have done that long ago .. now I want to tell you but bhai stopping because .. geet is so important to him ..he cant trust anyone about this information . but on the other hand I do

With these simple lines satya proved to dia that what geet means to arjun and what dia means to him.

Edited by sonai-adrica - 12 years ago

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#286

chalo abb diya bhi janti hai...kash abb sab thik hojaye...arjun ka medicine is d best one above d medicines given by d doctor...love d way arjun expressed his love in axxn...not in words...

awesome n beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

Edited by love2_soma - 12 years ago

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palindrome

@palindrome

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#287

res..😃

I know you have asked for quick feedback but I am really sorry,I am not allowed at pc in night..and right now i don't want to read it in rush..You writing is for enjoying each and every word,,..Please bear with my "late latifi",,,

and you have got another wise reader here,dear.."ritzy09"..congrats...😃

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I have literally no words for you today,reet...!!! You have outdone yourself in this chapter..!! Each and every word in the update went into my heart straightforwardly,may be because each word of this chpater had come from you heart...!!!

Arjun,is by far,best maan I have ever found in any of the stories on GF..His monologue in hospitals was very painful and It told everything,what he felt,what he is feeling right now, in his words...Sometimes i wonder,who is suffering more here,Maan or geet..???

You have perfectly maintained the meaning of "The title"of this story,in this chapter..The one who was trying to bring out geet from her depressing state with his clever{sorry i could not find any other word} words,was "Her teacher"...!!! He was encouraging his student to fight back and show the world that she has not lost yet...!!

and the one who was trying to make her forget the "worst-est" memory of her life,was "Her lover"..He wasn't touching her during those moments..He was "Healing" her...!!!

Take a bow Reet for conceptualizing this..!!! I honestly can't put in words,what i felt while reading this portion..I would call it "sacred intimacy" in true senses..Because It did not make butterflies churn in my stomach,It soothed,warmed as well as pained my heart simultaneously...!!! I want to dedicate all the "praising adjectives" in this world to you for writing this story...!!!

Coming to other characters,,

Dia-Girl has known alot in such short time span..I am wondering how she managed to digest such vast information...I am liking her more and more,as the story is progressing...!!! Though,she has confused maan with her confession but it was needed,you know..Arjun would keep his behaviour in check around her now,i guess. and dia would be saved from getting false hopes from him...

Satya- He is indeed a "cupid",,and my feeling is getting stronger.This cupid is hit by his own love arrow...He is surely falling for Miss Dia...

Ananat- No comments..His presence scares me always..!

Awasthi ji- I think,he has some important role in future..!!!

Mr.Sahay- He is the lucky one to witness a "real love story" with his own eyes..I love him for his mature understanding towards Arjun's behaviour around Geet...I love him for his trust on arjun and geet both...

Sunanda- I am sure,she has some plans for Vikas..Since satya is also accompanying dia to hostel,I am pretty excited to know what would happen there...???

Waiting eagerly for next instalment...

ps- Special thanks for giving us such long chapters,reet,,Hope my poor comments could compensate little the hard work you are putting in this story..I might not included some things in my comment but that does not mean I have ignored them...Each and every word of your chapter are like gem,i cherish in my heart.,either it was arjun's attempt to make Geet smile by saying that she did not let doctor check her because she was already aware of her inefficiency...,or his words when he begged geet that she won't forget his touch..!!!!

Edited by palindrome - 12 years ago

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Alamelu

@Alamelu

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#288

Reet another brilliant update...man that was so emotional...i was crying as i was reading...did not know for whom i was crying, geet or maan or both...

loved satya...glad did got to know the truth...loved sahay the principal...he has figured out something is definitely there between maaneet which is quite serious...loved the way arjun took away the feelings of vikas from geet...his reverse pshychology might work after all...

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fffanatic

@fffanatic

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#289

reet take a bow...this story is simply an amazing roller coaster of emotions...each and every emotion beautifully and flawlessly depicted...i have more to say will b back soon

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Papon Tabassum

@paponecon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#290

Read all parts together in one go...u knw wht ystrdy nght i didnt sleep...continuously reading one aftr anthr part...thn wthout sleeping came to office...finally on th way my office i finished alll n nw commenting during office time...comment for updates later

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