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Posted: 12 years ago
Poor maan is in dilemma but what will be geet's reaction..poor maan when he confessed on that time geet dint listen to him...ab aage kya hoga waiting for it dear!👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
want to see some romantic moments
hope geet accepts his love
thanx for the pm dear
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MGFF- ESSENCE OF LOVE-THD-6/part-86/11/7/2013






Part:-86

Its early morning,5.30 a.m.. Maan dozed of then only thinking and worrying about the next consequences. The rain stopped and the trophic started slowly. Geet wake up by the horn of the cars. She sat up and looked to front seat. Maan sat in passenger seat leaning on back sleeping.She slowly put the leg down to come out car. then only she remembered that some thing pricked in her leg by the pain. She looked at the foot bandaged. She carased the leg remembering how he bandaged it. She loved the care he has taken for her. Then only she remembered every thing. She started to recollect all the things fr. yesterday evening to night.Then she remembered their passionable night.She stood rooted like statue thinking her behaviour, she now clearly remembered wat happend? She closed her eyes in pure disgust on her self. How could i behave like this?like a cheap despo?Mai itni bebas kaise bangayi? mai itni kamjoor hu? She wondered how could she ever initiate all this?how much she avoided even thinking about him ,...Where this desire came fr,. wat was all this rush of act of lust?She was hating herself. how can i behave like this? mai koi jawaan aurat nahi hu, mujhe jawaan beti hai, poti bhi hai, ek respectable profession me hu, phir bhi mai ye kaise karsakthi hu?kaha se aayi itni majboori mujhe me? kaise?How on earth i can explain this to him?wat he will think about me?like a cheap despo.,..He will disgust me , he will feel loath to my behaviour. who will accept this? he gave me respect he never behaved with me in disrespect like others,and see wat i have done?He believed me, he trusted me, he never questioned me about my past. How can i initiate this? How can i mend this? itni badi galathi mai kaise sudharu? sorry bolu? per sirf sorry bolne se baath banjayegi?
Geet ye tumne kya kiya? kalhi tu decide kiya na uski baare me isa nahi sochneka ,aaj tune kya kiya u kissed him shamlessly. kaise karsakthe ho tum isa? geets eyes r crying continuosly her face filled with guilt and shame.she cluched her saree near her heart not able to tolerate the shame and pain by this incident. kyu tum apni kaabu me rah nahi paayi geet? her heart is questioning her pointing daggers at her those r piercing through her heart.
Maan woke by the sounds , he looked back saw geet was awake, he said, good morning, how is ur pain? he asked her not looking in to her eyes.
Geet:- see he not want to see ur face he is laothing u ,.. see how he is avoiding to look at u? Jaldi sorry bol warna baath aur bigadjayegi.
Here Maan is reharsing how to start and say sorry to her. even though he is not regreting for their intimacy, he loved it and wanted it but he could not take that guilt.
He closed his trying to get some strength to face her anger, her out burst , pain he is ready to face them ready for her to take her anger out on him. he started to say sor,...
"Sorry,.. geet said.
' Sorry Maanji",.. i am really sorry , kal raath jo bhi hua uskeliye,pata nahi mai ise kaise kiya? mai itni bebas kaise bangayi?itni kamjoori kaha se aaya mujhe me?mai apni hosh me nahi hu ki maine aapko kiss kiya.. i am sorry , mai isa nahi hu. Aap mujhe galath math samajiye pata nahi ye sab kaise hua? I hate my self. mai apni barthav keliye patchthi hu. Gin aathi hai mujhe mujh per. mai apni hi nazaron me hi gir gayi hu. I behaved like a cheap despo. mujhe isa nahi karna chahiye tha. Aap mujhe maaf kardijiye.
Maan stunned by her words He knotted his eyebrows, this woman in front of him is an enigma, he had to agree, he could even think that she had some super natural power r something like she cast some spell on him. He expected her to shout, put up fight on him, here she is saying sorry.
Maan:- Geet,... and wanted to say something ,but,
Geet:- i know ur loathing my behaviour, isliye aap mere taraf dekhna nahi chahtha,,aap ko gin araha hai na mujhe per?my jaanthi hu, aap bahut acche hai, aap kabhi nahi sahthe isa barthav
and she is going on and on,...
Maan,s.t. OH;god;, how on earth i explain her my guilt to her? why is she taking all the blame on her?its not her fault only, i too responsible for it, why she blame herself?how much faith on me? can i deserve this?how i mend this, god show me some way, by which i can bring her out of this guilt.i cannot see her loathing herself. he has to stop her drowing in that guilt,..
Maan:- Geet,its not only urs fault, i too equally responsible for that. its mutual geet, we carried away like that its a weak moment geet.
Geet, why u think that all is ur fault? mai bhi insaan hu geet, koi bhagvaan nahi hu, mujhe bhi kamjooria hothe hai. galathia mujhe se bhi hotha hai? kyu apne aap dosh derahi ho? I started it geet to sooth ur pain and i carried away, i loose my control, we carried away like that. its a weak moment ,geet jisse hum bhul na chahiye. Geet kabhi kabhi haalat aur majbooria ke haathion me insaan kamjoor hotha hai. haalat humse jithegi. per iska mathlab ye nahi , ki hum apne aap ko doshi maankar tut jana. Hume himmat se khade ho kar aur majbooth banna padega. mai maantha hu jobhi hua wo galat per iskeliye tum aapni aapko dosh maana thik nahihai, jo kuch hua isme hum dono barabar hissedar hai, mai guilt hu geet isliye mai tumse nazar mila nahi parahahu.Geet we should forget it. hume ye hadsaa ko bhul na padega, isa sochna hoga jaisa kuch nahi hua hamare beech bilkuk waisa hai jaisa pehle hai, Mai aaj bhi aapko utnahi izzat kartha hu, jithna pehle kartha hu,.. aaj bhi aapke liye mere respect bilkul waisa hi hai geet jaisa pehle. so no regrets, no complaints, hume ye baath yahi bhuljayenge, phir kabhi nahi baath karenge iske baare me. I promise u phir kabhi isa nahi hoga,.. kabhi nahi o.k.?
She looked at him with tear full eyes still not convinced and slowly nodded her head to yes.
Maan:- chaliye,.. ab ye aashu bujh kar smile kariye. Geet smiled lightly.
Maan s.t.;- chalo ab tho wo chup hogayi, per lagtha hai usse kuch aur wakth lagega sab kuch bhul jaane ko, tab tak mujhe isse smalna hoga, intezaar karna hoga,
Oh;god; wat have i done? Iwant to cofess my love to her and propose her for marriage, but here wat happened? god;,.. ab tho mai isse ye kah nahi paavunga. kaise kahsaktha hu? kya soche ga wo mujhe? god mai kya karu? kya ye kabhi kah paavungaa? kitna yakeen karthe hai mujhe? kitna viswaas hai mujhe per? kaise kahungaa ye baath ?kitna respect hai mujhe per, ki saara dosh uski sir per utha rahi hai.Agar me kah diya tho ki mai usse pyaar kartha hu,.. usse shaadi karna chayhahu, unki man me mere liye hai ye viswaas, respect khojaunga.kahi wo mujhe galat samajhe tho?Oh; god; kya horaha hai meri zindagi me? Kya kabhi khushiya nahi likha hai mere takdeer me? Ab tak mai unki mehsoos nahi ki, aur ab karpaaya tho bhi nahi milpaaya , jo mai chahtha wo.

Precap:-" Do, do khushiya anewaali hai humari pariwaar me"

Edited by anuradha.nandam - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Subah geet ko sab yaad aata hai vo apne aap ko kosati hai
Maan sochta hai geet gussa hogi par geet sorry bolti hai
Gilt feel karti hai
Maan kehta hai ye dono ki galati hai
Maan geet ko samja to deta hai par sochta hai
agar vo geet ko apne mann ki baat batayega to geet naraj ho jayengi

My pov Jane-anjane dono paas aa rahe hai dono ka rista jyada majbut ho raha hai
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
maan is ready for geet's anger...bt here geet says sorry to him...
she feels guilty...
both respects each other very much...
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Posted: 12 years ago


aww Maan ne itni himmat kar ke Geet se apne DIL ki baat kahi thi and he was planning to propose her but saare armaanon par paani fir gaya...

update was wonderful...

dono ko sab yaad tha and they both handled it very maturely...right now they both are not in condition to accept their feelings...so they are avoiding it and trying to pretend that it is all the mistake done when they are carried away with situation but the reality is that they both wanted it to happen from their heart...

waiting for next part...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 12 years ago
taking responsibility is different from being responsible for happening of life.geet maan r responsible people.rather than blaming themselves they should have given a logical thought.why the weak moment occur now not before?why didnot they behaved same with other person?
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Posted: 12 years ago

ESSENCE OF LOVE-THD-6/part-87/12/7/2013



Maan came out of car and checked again if the car will be repaired by him,but it didnt. He came to geet and said,
Geet ab hume kisi se lift lene padegi, car ko yaha chode ke jaana hoga,
Geet:- lekin, ise kaise chode sakthe hum itni mehga car?
Maan:- koi baath nahi geet kuch nahi hoga, delhi punchthe hi mai kaka ko bhejdunga mechanic ke saath. ab chaliye bahar ayiye mai gadi lock kartha hu.
Geet came out and maan lock kiya Then they took lift in some car and started to delhi.
As they entred to delhi out skirts their phones get signal they rang.
Maan:- took out the cell and answered, haa,. annie,..
Annie:- bhai aap kaha ho raath bhar aap ghar kyu nahi aya?
Maan said everything to her including geet condition .[oh,.. sorry not their passionate romance]
Annie:- oh;,.. my god bhai bhabhi ab kaise hai? thik tho haina?
Maan:- haa,.. annie thoda dard hai and she needs urgent medication, i am taking her to dr.
Annie:- haa,.. bhai, mai bhi waha ayunga jaldi.
Maan:- tum ek baar kaka se kaho mechanic ke saath ana car lene keliye chaabi do usse dusari chabi hogi ghar me.
Annie:- haa,.. bhai
Geet answered the call its fr, ankitha, and she told that they r struck up in rains waapas araha hai lift leke . she didnt told about her.
Maan looked at her why, she smiled and said wo bekaar me pareshaan hojaye gi aur dr ne usse tention lene se mana kiya, mai ghar jake bathunga.
Maan nodded his head.
And Maan took her to the hospital. dr. checked her and did some tests to check if there will be some more pieces and done small operation and bandaged her ,prescribed medicines and advised to take rest about 1 week.
Annie came to hospital running, wat happened, aap kaisa hai bhabhi?
Geet looked maan with complaining looks, wat is the need to trouble her?
Annie:- bhabhi aap bhai ko ise kyu dekhrahe ho? Yaha aapko itna bada chote lagi aur hum kaise chup baith the ghar pe?
Ankitha came running, maa,.. kya hua aapko, aap mujhe kyu nahi bathaya?
Geet shocked seeing them there, per tumhe kaise pata?
Ankitha:- Annie ji ne hume phone kiya.
Aakash:- maa,.. aap hum se kyu chupaya?
Geet:- nahi aakash hum ghar araha hai na, mai waha bathana chahthi,ankitha ko stress lena nahihai isliye.
Aakash and ankitha took geet ko uski ghar.Maan and annie went to mansion.
Geet is at home taking rest, ankitha aakash r now with geet helping her. Arpitha and prasant r still in gau as his father is not at fully recovered. Annie comes to her house daily and spends sometime with her and goes. Geet tried her best to forget that night ,with great effort she overcome fr, that guilt After 4 days one evening Annie came to geets house with rahul to see geet. Geet is preparing some snacks and tea to them.
Maan came to see geet
Annie:- bhai,.. aap is wakth yaha?
Maan :- haa,.. mai ,. yaha se meeting keliye jaraha hu, socha ek baar dekhke chale jau. Kaise hai aap?
Geet:- mai thik hu socherahi thi ki kal se school jau.
Maan:- sochna math ghav ko puri tarah thik hone dijiye baad me sochenge, samjhe?
Geet:- hmm,.. she didnt say anything actually she cant say nowadays she felt it difficult to refuse him , dont know why per just she cant.
baithiye na mai aapkeliye coffee leke aathi hu.
Maan:- hmm,..
Geet prepared his coffee and dropped 1 sugar cube in it and went to bring tea to annie,
Annie got a naughty plan to tease geet,she dropped 2 more sugar cubes in it.
Maan saw this and wanted to say something, but Annie winked at him, so he also decided to play along with Annie.
Geet gave coffee to him and tea to Annie.
Maan sipped it and,ye kya hai geet? aap ko meri parwaahi nahi hai?aap mere pasand bhul gayi itni jaldi?
Geet shocked to his complaint, ye aap kya kahrahi ho? mai aapki parwaa karthi hu. kya hua?
Maan :-tho aap meri parwah karthe? isahi? ye coffee mai kitne cubes dala?
Geet:- ek hi tho dala , kyu acchi nahi hai? Maan:- tho ek cube se ye itni meetha kaise? ye cofee ya kheer hai?
Geet:- meethi hai,. lekin ek hi cube dala isme.
Maan:- tho aap ye kahna chahthi ki mai jhute bolerahahu? dekho tumhi taste karo he put the cup near her lips.
Geet without thinking that it is his jhuta, innocently sipped it,
Annie, who just wanted to tease geet now got shock of her life maan turned all to his favour and made geet drink his coffee.She looked him fuming biting her teeth,
Maan immeaditely took the cup fr, geet. he winked at annie taking 2 more sipps fastly without geets notice[ poor geet still confused how it is too sweet]
Annie opened her mouth in "O" shape. Maan raised his collar indicating this is MSK.
Geet such me ye meetha hai annie pata nahi kaise hua?
Maan:- still facking anger, wo aap batayiye, mujhe kya pata? mujhe der horaha hai, mai jaaraha hu.
Geet felt very bad as he is leaving without taking coffee.she fallowed him ,trying to manofy him.
''Suniye' , aap please 2 mnts wait kariye mai aapkeliye dusara coffee banake launga.itni jaldi kya hai?
Maans heart missed a beat hearing "suniye" fr. her mouth, but he facked anger and continued to go.
Geet stood there fully hurt, dekhiyena annie, kitna gussa karthe hai,humesha mujhe isa hi tang karthe tumhara bhai,
Maan came back, tho aap meri shikayath karthi ho annie se? Geet pouted her lips looking complaining.
Annie:- bhai kyu aap mera bhabhi ko tang karrahe ho?
Maan:- Annie ke bacche,.. ye saari shararathi tumne shuruki thi na,.. tumne 2 sugar cubes milaya meri coffee me ye sab tumhe suruki thina? he ran to her to catch,
Annie ran to geet and stood behind her, bhabhi dekhona bhai,.. mujhe chede rahe hai?
Geet:- Aap kyu bacche ke piche padgay ho chodona usse?
Maan:- bacchi,.. koun? ye? ye 10 saal ki beta ki maa hai , aur jaldi dubara maa bannewaali hai.
Geet:- kya ye such hai? Annie ab tak mujhe kyu nahi bathaya?
Annie:- aajhi hume patachala bhabhi, mai aaj aapko bathane ki aaya .
Geet:- mai bahut khush hu Annie, kitne mahina? aur ye tum kyu khadi ho, ishaalat me tum jyaada der tak nahi khadi hona chahiye, aavo batho, mai tumhare liye kch banathi hu, mai pehle kuch meetha banathi hu.
Maan:- pehle mera coffee ke baare me sochiye.
Geet:- haa,.. wo bhi detha hu.Annie bathayi ye kya pasand hai aapko? aur tum tumhari khayaal rakhna chahiye nd she started to tell the precautions to take since it is a late pregnancy for her.
Maa shooked his head listening all, she never leave a chance to care of others.
Two days later,
Maan ,Arjun and Aadi r in an important meeting about 400 crs project. Maan kept his mobile in silent mode, so that he may not disturbed. His phone buzzed. He took it and looked who is that. He smiled seeing the name, Geet, he excused and went to his cabin to talk to her.Arjun and Aadi looked surprised each other as maan will not attend the call during meetings.
Maan:- haa.. Geet kahiye , aap is wakth hume kaise yaad kiya?
Geet:- yaad tho aapki humesha rahtha hai
Maan:-accha,.. thoaaj tak kabhi nahi call kiya?
Geet:-kyunki aaj tak kuch khaas baath nahi hai?
Maan:- tho aaj kya hai itna khaas baath?
Geet:- Aaj mai bahut khush hu, aur mai ye khush kabar pehle aapko bathana chahthi hu.
Maan:- lekin kis baath ki itna khush? Geet:-Ankitha pregnant hai,ye khushi aapki wajese hai, aapne ankitha ko acchi treatment karwaaya ab wo pregnant hai, ye sab aapki wajse hua hai. aapko bahut bahut sukriya. thank.u. very much maanji.
Maan:- thank.u. isa hi bolega aap? Geet:- pata hai,.. raath ko badiyasa dinner arrange karthi hu, aap Arjun sir ko bhi lekeana.
Maan:- is baar sirf dinner se kaam nahi chalega.
Geet:-bathayiye, aurkya chahiye aapko? Aaj humari pariwaar me do,do khusiya anewaali hai,pehle Annie pregnant aur ab Ankitha pregnant, kitna khush haina humari pariwaar me do, do khushi anewaali hai.[Maans heart miss a beat hearing humari pariwaar, she actually accepted them in to her family, its just came out without her notice, as casual, he felt he is on cloud nine, kaash ye such hotha]bathayiyena kya chahiye apko?she again asked
Maan:- haa,.. haa.. wo mai .. baad me puchunga, yaad rahna, u owe me something, badme mana math karna.
Geet:- haa,.. yaad rakhungi, bad me mana nahi karungi. ab khush? shaam ke jaldi ana mai annie ko bhi bulathi hu.mai rakhu pho?
Maan:- hmm,.. suno Ankitha ko badhaiya kaho,
Geet:- khud aake bathana.
Maan kept smiling how easily she said humari pariwaar, kya ye kabhi such hoga?
Arjun came asking kiska phine jiju? but by seeing maan he understand who called, di ka phone hai jiju?
Maan looked at him, hmm,.. aaj wo bahut khush hai, Ankitha pregnant hai aur wo isliye khush hai ki humari pariwaar me do do khushiya anewaali hai,.. pehle Anne and Ankitha, Arjun pata hai aaj wo kya kaha, humari pariwaar.
Arjun :- ye tho bahut khushi ki baath hai jiju, di ne dil se hume apnaliya per ye baath wo khud nahi jaanthi. i hope she will recognise it soon.
Maan hmm.

Precap:- Accident...kiska?


Edited by anuradha.nandam - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago


accident kiska accident...kahin Maan ka to nahin...

please yaar Maan ko kuch nahin hona chahiye...

jab pyaar hota hai tou apnapan apne aap mehsoos hone lagta hai... apne pyaar ke pyaare apne pyaare...Geet ko ab Maan ka family apni family lagti hai but she don't realize it herself...

loved when Maan make her taste his coffee and then himself drink same... he is madly in love but Geet kub maanegi...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 12 years ago
Maan ne school jane se mana kar diya aur geet uski baat tal nahi sakti
Maan, annie geet ko tease karte hai
Jis tarah dono ek dusre ki jhuthi coffee pite hai...awesome...
Maan heart missed a beat hearing,,,,,,suniye...superb...
Loved maan- geet- annie talk
Geet maan ki family ko hamari family batati hai...loved it...
Jane anjane geet kobhi pyaar ho raha hai par vo us bare main sochna nahi chahti
Precap sounds scary...


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