another story. Pain of Love Part-1 page 4

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simran

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

nice part
I think the girl to whom maan lost project is geet

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Deepa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

part 1
nice start...
interesting...
where is Geet?
who is Maan's wife?
cont soon dear...

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tabby999

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

hi mannu

sad story ..oh no ..plz make it happy one plz ...

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tabby999

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

good story ..

but confusion there ..

this is present or past ..

mannu plz put all charactersketch list ..plz ..

and all name matching geet ..giti ..gitu ...so confuse ..plz help ...and put relationship also ..

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Padfoot_Prongs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: tabby999
good story ..
but confusion there ..
this is present or past ..

mannu plz put all charactersketch list ..plz ..
and all name matching geet ..giti ..gitu ...so confuse ..plz help ...and put relationship also ..

Thanx for this tabby. I wrote the part long back. there Anjili's name was Gitika. but i chnaged it. so many Geet's doesn't luk gud.😆

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tabby999

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: mannu_minnie
Thanx for this tabby. I wrote the part long back. there Anjili's name was Gitika. but i chnaged it. so many Geet's doesn't luk gud.😆

so many geet alike make story confuse ...waise bhi geet ek hi acchi lagti hai ..maneet together forever ...😳

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nehakapoor7

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

yeah its nice start.. where is Geet now.. ... & Maan lost his wife 25 years back means wht's maan;s age now? who is this new lady who is only 26 years & grabs a deal from Maan