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@Oblivion007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#231

waw di!!back to back updates!!!!u're on a spree on writing off sati:)
the changes u're showing is soo much believeable,the change in geet reagarding the food and sleeping on bed was too much bang on!!cause without these changes she can't strt living a normal life.i'm soo glad maan is trying to do so.asusual lovely updates,can't wait for more...

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Water

@Water.

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#232

Loved both the updates.

He was the one who shut down her heart,

He was the one who withered away the essence of her being

And yet...

He is her saviour

He is the one who is awakening each and every lifeless speck of her being

He is the one who is rising her soul

And making her life liveable again.

Yet...

It is wise to remember...

That this is just a beginning

And she has just started to open her wings.

It will take her a while to spread her wings

To fly, to soar, to laugh, to breathe, to cherish, to co-create.

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404703

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#233

for part 41...

wooo...maan has exchanged her lunch with daal chawal...thts really cute of him...changing her habits of last 4 years...may be slowly this will heal geet...

geet may be irritated by his act but he is really tring to undo his doings...as she has never expexted in her wild dreams tht maan would be this person...according to her he was a perfect man...but facing the reality is different...

Edited by manikka - 12 years ago

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404703

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#234

for part 42...

loved it...

just the normal daal chawal bring the old taste of Indian food in geet's mind and she can't resist herself to cook and relish Indian food...

and tht gave a lot of satisfaction with treat plus surprise for maan...

wonderful di...

continue soon...

Edited by manikka - 12 years ago

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#235

part 41 - loving this naughty maan and caring geet for his wounds...he is ebing more & more stubborn at every step whenever she tried to protest

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#236

part 42 - maan is brilliant ...he knows where to start so that she can led a normal life and food is the good start...she took 2 weeks to eat daal-chawal made by him and cherished it whole day and the miracle happened...she made dinner for them...lovley part

two weeks passed then nobody came to his house for weekend party and what about sam

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JeevanaP

@JeevanaP

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#237

😃

Geet got to devour back the taste of a proper meal

that was cute & touchy too

continue soon

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meravigiliso

@meravigiliso

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#238

both d parts are so so cute and heart warming updates muski .the way he is trying to bring back her to lead normal life without any expectation brings tears in eyes . it was so so touchy to read and heart is filling with joy and love .I am waiting now to c how maan is gong to make her hair grow longer .

continue soon muski .