MG OS 'But...' - Page 4

Originally posted by: sarita21992

That diary enry moved me. With jiah khan's sad demise, this one actually kind of threw the light how celebs might feel..that constant pressure...smwhere the yearning of true human love,really a gr8 read palin👏.

Originally posted by: .Maggie.

Subject: You never say But.

Dear Maggie,

I know you love me so much, but when you always praise my work, I feel you do it out of your love for me. If i write stories you come there and analyze the characters and also guess the future track. So I came up with this brilliant idea. I wrote a One shot, which is short and simple. Now I will see if you say "But" about my work or not.

Love

Palin.

{HOLY CRAP..MUJHE YAAD KYUN NAHI AA RAHA YEH APPLICATION MAINE KAB LIKHI????😕🤢😆..}

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Re: You never say But.

Dear Palin,

First of all let us talk about your subject alright? I never say But? Probably I don't. Because I like "However" more. However...(notice what i used just now) how does that matter?

If you are referring to your stories and I not indicating a but, then oh well... I am sorry, today I am here to say some Buts. Please don't take them to heart, I know you won't but still...

1) You are a brilliant person BUT you doubt your work.{WORK HERE MEANS WRITING???IF YES THEN MY DOUBT IS CORRECT CUZ YOU WOULD HAVE USED WRITER INSTEAD OF PERSON THEN..😆}
2) You write amazing stories BUT keep their length short{i AM AN OFFICIAL SHORT STORY WRITER...🤣}
3) You write such thought provoking one shots BUT keep them short and make us wanting for more.{IF YOU HAVEN'T NOTICED I ALWAYS CALL THEM "ONE SHORT" INSTEAD OF ONE SHOT...😆 GO AND CHECK MY PM..ONE SHORT HAS TO BE SHORT...😉]
4) You create your own characters which are different from the usual ghisa pita ones BUT you will end up making us fall for them.[AWW THANKS...😳}
5)Last but not the least, you write a OS like this BUT expect me to comment. How? Hauuu?{WITH YOUR FINGERS AND KEYBOARD OR KEY PAD...AUR YOU CAN WRITE ME A LETTER WITH PEN..😃}



Okay I don't know what had gotten into me that I wrote the above raam katha.{ ILOVED IT...🤗} Yes it is one BUT which would make you wring your fingers in irritation, yet that one BUT will make you out do yourself. Aa ja come give me a hug my BUT wali😆😆🤗[🤗..😆.]

Originally posted by: Aashika_virman

that was wonderful...loved it

i am regretting my incapability to put forth how i feel when i read your works...

feeling lucky to have found your works and to have you in this forum...

when ever i start reading i pray that next line should not be the end..

Originally posted by: dqno1

and the best part is ... inspite of all the buts I love you!

Wonderful OS.

Originally posted by: punam2712

there is o much one can say but i will say that it was perfect the way you showed his feelings at his success, mass adulation, conceit, groupies and what makes him stay grounded on earth

Originally posted by: singh24

Originally posted by: mannubhardwaj

nice os palin...

geet's point of view is easily understandable... small things many a times give more happiness.

how much we whine about something, we love many these things..

like when we want to show some nakhras and there is someone to bear it...[YOU CAN SHOW ME YOUR NAKHRAS,I WOULD BEAR THEM HAPPILY MANNU..😃]

But...

Originally posted by: gudmeet

nice os

a star's life is well portrayed and along with it it's insecurities

not only a star all the human beings need a support system like geet in their life

then life becomes really easy

loved ur views on a star's life

and loved ur view of success

geet was indeed maan's strength

and her but