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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sonai-adrica

poonam thakur... by heart and soul poonam kapoor.. i feel like someone caged her inside her own body.. living two parallel life. Sattered,bruised,tainted but pure soul.
About chandan takur i do have a feeling that he was in love with poonam much before amarjeet's demise. He is not a vile person like his other family member.if he then he never allowed poonam to wear jeet's mangalsutra.i know that he did an unforgivable crime. after that also i am saying this because somewhere i fell he did that not out of lust but out of love.

I know that when u love someone u can never degrade him/her.but when we wish for something which is beyond our reach and suddenly we get the thing all for ourselves then sometimes we can't think or act rationally.That night he was high on alcohol. And did something whose consequences were beyond repair. He lost the person's love before getting it. He did the second mistake by leaving poonam alone in the hands of his family.in his guilt he forgot that how the thakurs are and went for an extended business trip.and when he returned the damage which he started was already done.and he had already lost everything. But i think he is a headstrong man.and cares for naintara.
One question do they share a husband wife relation?

Do the have any children except naintara?
I don't know if i'm making any sense.
I've gone mad.
Sorry for this crap..




It is not crap. I am very proud that I have readers who are so intelligent. thank you for taking the time to think about the character this much. I cannot answer your questions at this time. I hope you will enjoy the rest of the story as much.
Avi
Edited by dqno1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

Dono bhai 😉 dhishum dhishum
Precap dekh le: Kya mera buddhu de paayega...😆


dishum dishum ke liye tayyar 😆



Yeh scene hojaye tou kaisa ho


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Posted: 12 years ago
It's when I read update like these, that I wish I could reply with all the thoughts swirling in my head. So many little things, feelings, and people.. I really don't know what to say.

If you think you can convey your message in a few updates, then go for it. And if you want to take your time with lots of updates, then do that. Either way, I will be looking toward to reading the updates. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago


Brij ke liye ... 😆

Abhi time hai 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago


Loved this valentine wala ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aaj kya shaadi mein jaana hai 😆

Mera GN Sheen

Kal office early hain 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Krishnaluv94

It's when I read update like these, that I wish I could reply with all the thoughts swirling in my head. So many little things, feelings, and people.. I really don't know what to say.

If you think you can convey your message in a few updates, then go for it. And if you want to take your time with lots of updates, then do that. Either way, I will be looking toward to reading the updates. :)



Thanks Krishna! Hope it is not too confusing.
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 21
awesome...
Dev is so affected...
and Daadima is too much...
OMG so this Tara's history...
her mom was ra*** by her step father?
was that kid this rogue's?
poor her mom...
and that Brij swine...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

Naina's past was painful. She must've been Dad's little princess when Jeet was alive. Poonam's story was so harsh reality and saddening. So much to endure & living like a dead corpse. Her feeling of being dead when her Jeet dies was so hurting. The torture she endured of being drugged to get hitched to someone else by her so called own people, then being physically forced and tainted in her house which was filled with her love & his memories must be so tearing & shattering for her to endure that too in front of his picture, Then tortured by people for their own insecurity & cruelty dying each day & then loosing a child... no matter what the child symbolizes it will always remain a child - a part of the mother whom she nourishes & then finding her still born anyone would go into depression. Avi that whole scene was such beautifully worded ... and you introduced me to a different style of your own self.
I did not get the last phrase.😕 It was harsh to put it all there but I could not drag it for more than one chapter so although it was a lot, at least it is out.


I was so torn to write this or not since I know quite a few readers only read for Maaneet but after being the one to drag Reet it gave me strength to just put it. I could have ended it in 5 more but now there will be about 20 or so. Wanted to do justice to the story.
Thanks for being my staunch support Onir. 🤗

the last phrase meant that I've always pictured you as happy go lucky, smiling and one who I associate with happiness so this was a new side to you where I got to see the Avi who could portray pain & hurt and so much brokenness leading to depression with such beauty and flow. 👏

I agree Maaneet are integral but then a story can't be running just on them and believe me I love each thing that runs parallel to the story of just the leads... for that matter I just adore D-N story my weakness for second leads. 😳

You've justified it all... and never say about stopping because I want it all. Don't even go to Reet's story the last part has me in its clutches till now that I could just not come off it & yet trying to.

I will always be there, as you deserve it and much more. 🤗

Edited by Onir - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
@Onir: preconcieved notions are never too good. There is more always when we scratch the surface.
To the outside world, Poonam Thakur has everything, beauty, a rich husband a palatial home. I wanted to show the reality of how much she does not have.
Reet makes me crazy to the point that I don't want another update from her so that I can obsessively re-read the way she wrote the last one. Talent in a dynamite form... I am so glad that you are reading that one with me...😃

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