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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mayyo13


Ah! I agree to that! 😊

Thanks 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

Tu iss pe drooling...😆😆😆
Tera kuch nahi ho sakta...
Shukriya for the DP. If you can post that pic here or some in this pink shirt, I will put it in the next update...😃
He has to be alone in the picture though... party mein jaane wala hai...inn kapdo mein...😉
🤗



Me Hopeless 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry guys... my update has exceeded the limit of IF so I have to cut some of it...
Please wait a bit...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Avi... copy & paste your update in word pad & then paste it in IF...
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Posted: 12 years ago
6000 words in one post should not be a problem...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fantastic update yaara
😃

Eavesdropping is not that bad sometimes as you get a fair idea of the opinion others hold for you
Like Maan got to know what his Geet thinks about him
Ab pyaar mein itni taak jhaak toh chalti hain😊


Haaye Maan trying so hard to take an initiative so that he can get her to talk, side by side usko nihaarna aur uska sharmana😳

Lekin hamaari Jhalli Geet wrong track pe chadh gayi aur Maan ki pyaar ki gaadi phir se off track ho gayi

Maan showing Dadima pics of his trip so touching he wanted to share his happiness with Dadi😊

So he did see her dancing 😉
Maan ka pyaar ka aur Geet ke ehsaas ka pal😳

So now we get a DQ in caps in TL😆
Ab iska ka matlab samjhe hum🤔

Pinky😡 khud ki lovestory sambhalti nahi aur bekaar Maaneet ki lovestory shuru hone nahi deti
Aadi please isko leke jao
So that we get Maaneet moments😳

Jokes apart good Maan overheard them so now he knows Geet misunderstood him and also he has tough task ahead
Maan also got an insight of Geet's relations
And not to forget SRK🤢

Poor Maan checking out his abs as he is competing with a superstar
Yeh Geet bhi na sach much usse paagal kar degi😆

Maan goes for Pinky's party
and again overhears Sujal's and his wife's arguments
Felt really bad for Sujal and now can relate why he is worried for Pinky's marriage

Loved Maan- Sujal talk
Though somewhere it did dampen his spirits if his love isn't reciprocated but how can his heart accept defeat so soon😊

Delhi ki sadak pe Maan aur uski Meeshti on a bike☺️
Maan purposely increasing the speed and reving up on and on to have her close to him
A moment to cherish for a lifetime😃

Maari Geet's savior and Maan's 🤔
Chalo koi nahi phir decide karenge 😉

Maan lift her up and climbs the ladder
Haaye so dreamy
For the first time I am happy that Mrs Iyer to be so khadoos😆

Maan ki toh nikal padi aur Geet😳

But just loved the way you penned down both their reactions
Maan absolutely drowned in the awareness to have her so close to him
One of the first teenage experience of attraction and our naive and innocent Geet scared of their sudden stunt😃

Geet introspecting over her and Maan's relation
Chalo atleast she is thinking😛

Because Geet Maan is your prince charming😳

Superb one Avi
Thanks for updating
Loved it
🤗


Edited by heytal - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Is it that bad?
koi toh kuch bolo...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb and mind blowing love it
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mayyo13

The answer to the questioning title - in my opinion - is yes and no. Like every single thing in this world, eavesdropping has its pros and cons. The pros may not be as many as the cons but they are still there, and that has been shown in this chapter. When Maan accidentally eavesdrops Sujal and his wife's conversation, it makes him think about his own love in a different way, in a broader light.

The shawl folding scene reminded me of the sari folding scene of the show. 😳

I noticed too, what Geet noticed and took offense over. That Maan introduced himself exactly the same way that Geet had introduced herself. The only difference between her reaction and mine was that her reaction was typically Geet (😆) and mine was 'waah! Dil ka rishta hai jo dono ne ek hi tarhan apna introduction diya!' 😳

Maan and Dadi's bonding is sweet to witness. She treats her with all the tenderness for the shy and less talkative guy he is, whereas for Dev, she is as tricky and naughty as Dev is flamboyant and flirty. Him hiding the last picture made me curious and I was grinning when I realised he actually saw her in that dreamy moment of hers! 😳

DQ has a new meaning and I'll warn you Avi, that you have a username on the same lines! 😆

I did feel a little irritated (not very much, though!) with Pinky as she never let Maan say 'Hi' to Geet. 😳 But just like Maan overheard them and witnessed the real bond they shared, and he couldn't dislike her anymore, I too couldn't keep the irritation up. How can Geet's happiness be begrudged by us?

By the way, I still love SRK, unlike Maan! 😆

I loved Maan inspecting his abs in the mirror and telling himself that it's only for health reasons and not for the obvious reasons! 😆 And yes, stubble is lucky for him. Kya pata kab kya ho? 😳

I felt bad for Sujal and angry at his wife. People like her notice what the neighbour did to please his wife but never give thought into what their own husband has done and how much love he has put into it all! Pitiable! Poor Sujal! I like his thinking though, the persistence he has in him to take one blow after another on his love and still wish to wait for his wife to love him the way he does.

Just like I've said, this eavesdropping has a benefit for Maan since he got to have a profound conversation with Sujal and even think about his own love and what the future could hold for him and his love.

Ek line, sirf ek line!! It was enough for me to sigh happily! "Pehen lo, warna pehna doonga." Only Maan has the power to have such an effect with the least words! 😳

I thank Ms. Iyer for being so strictly punctual and letting the two slow-mos have some moments by themselves. Not going to tell my reaction when he carried her up and she felt his heart and his stubble scraped her. You probably already know it! ☺️

Oh yes, a special mention to the trust she showed in him and her acceptance of the fact that her SRK is here! 😃

I really like the song you used in here. Loved everything about this chapter Avi! Thanks for updating! 🤗

I just released the breath I was holding...
Proper reply later...🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry Tamanna. Like button is not working for your post. Thank you!

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