THE LOCKET(6), MG FF, link new thread pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 109

Originally posted by: dqno1

hair cutting...😆

cute hai ...

Originally posted by: dqno1

Sheen, abhi soyi nahi? Kal chutti hai kya? 🤗Mera GN hai...

Originally posted by: Sheen-Coolkiwi

🤗
Mujhe laga tera GN pehle hi hogaya 😆
Holidays start 🥳
till 15 August

Originally posted by: dqno1

Thanks for the compliments dear. I know how tense I am when I update so I try to not let that happen to the writers who I love.

Don't be tense about your studies. Focus and it will happen...

Also come to IF to relax a bit too...😉

Originally posted by: palindrome

The starting really scared me,avi..!!!

I wasn't over the fear that "My teacher" had caused me and now,this...I am really very scared specially because of college area preference of that bast**rd brij..I don't want Geet to be his next victim...!!!😭

This part brought a twist in character of Chandan..I would wait patiently for you to reveal the past bit by bit in coming chapters...!!!!

Coming to second half...

It was "super cute"..and filled with natural humour..Sometimes humour seems "forced" in the story and I stay quite conscious about this forced humour while writing comic genre but still some parts of my comic stories seems "forced" to me..!!! But this Maan nakul dadi part was completely natural. I really admire you for this avi..👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏

.I was giggling,though i felt really bad for Nakul..Poor guy had to drink neem and karela juice without any reason...😆

and "Jijji" part was my favourite...

Because my younger brother used to call me that sometimes..specially in "HARYANWI ACCENT"..you know,with extra emphasis on "JJ" part...!!!!😆

I loved the chapter,avi..

now waiting eagerly for "Rose day..."

PS- extremely sorry for my late latifi...😳

Originally posted by: Deelight

heyyy nyc update...jz finished readin yor FF at a stretch...lovd it..!! do PM me while updating...!!

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hi thanks 4 da pm n superb update!