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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: .Maggie.

MY DARLING Avi,

That is an interesting set of rhyming names. More about that sometime later.
It boosts my ego to see two hot women fight for me. It is tough to choose of course, and I ask, why choose? After all interesting females with wit and depth like yours are a treat to date.
However, this woman called Shika who writes me has locked me in my own room and pulled my bike keys away, in order to have me not to flirt with anyone else.
She says she has something planned. I do not understand the working of that woman's head anyway.

So, here I leave my mail ID to you. The wittiest one, of course, you AVI gets the first date.

Write to me at andy@bikesboozebabes.com


ALWAYS YOURS AND ONLY YOURS
Andy.

🤣
Edited by dqno1 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: .Maggie.

Dear Avi and Nivi,

That is an interesting set of rhyming names. More about that sometime later.
It boosts my ego to see two hot women fight for me. It is tough to choose of course, and I ask, why choose? After all interesting females with wit and depth like yours are a treat to date.
However, this woman called Shika who writes me has locked me in my own room and pulled my bike keys away, in order to have me not to flirt with anyone else.
She says she has something planned. I do not understand the working of that woman's head anyway.

So, here I leave my mail ID to you. The wittiest one gets the first date.

Write to me at andy@bikesboozebabes.com


Andy.

🤣and the final round of the fight goes to Shika.😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

This is EPIC!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: KittuPratzz

Ignore my typos and grammar...

Forgiving..and Forgetting...are difficult things to handle...

Huh...its just a character...but sometimes every writer give a glimpse about their fear and insights about themselves...

Geet ..Naina...and Tweesha...

I want to know each one of their reaction..or more like want to witness the pain..and hurt caused by Naina...

Tweesha..Geet ...and Sameer


Tough to write I am sure
Still a riveting topic
I have to re-read all of it from the start because I am sure she has given us clues in her words
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Posted: 10 years ago
Off topic but as I was writing about Tweesha (Yes working on next chapter) I couldn't help but picture a new face for her...


Edited by .Maggie. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
I m liking everybody's comments here my net is little slow so not pressing the liking the button now..

After reading Avi's and Kittu's comments i get a gist of as to why she put an end to her life .She wanted to end this game of her father without harming people who were close to her heart.She did not run away because her mother would have to suffer.She rejected Sameer thinking she would save him from the pain. But didnt want her father to win as well. The pain that she caused to Sameer she wanted to feel that pain even more than that.
An act of defiance may be as Avi pointed out. Thinking putting end to herself would be more courageous act.
But this is a misplaced sense of courage and denial. Nobody gains anything from such an act.
It is not a question of forgiveness.You dont keep grudges against people who has to take such a step.
I might look judgemental here.
People whom she left would not be angry on her. No never even if anger is there it is momentary...after which there is enormous grief ,pain, numbness.It doesnt go away it stays there forever , might lessen a little but resurfaces from time to time.
The ones who go away leaves various self doubts for the ones left behind. The question on faith ,trust, love.

She did put an end to her misery but while doing so added many more for others.

Life is worth fighting for.
There are even greater miseries in life .

"No matter if my father leaves, no matter if my mother leaves too .Let them all go but Meera will persevere Lord whatever may come to pass."
And to persevere after all is to be saved.

For love is not bounded by any relation or vows
For love does not die with separation
If true it flows in your veins
To love you dont need the person beside you..

She was educated. If she wanted to be loyal to her loyal to her love there could have been various ways.She had a few people who loved her immensely. Life wouldnt need to be that bad as it saw it to be. Yet she chose the easiest and still the difficult path. That is why i choose her to call an escapist. Because instead of persevering ,fighting she chose a way to escape


They say when your time is over one or other way Kaal will find a way to put an end to your borrowed time.A madness siezes you and you dont realize the difference between wrong or right and the inevitable haapens.
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Posted: 10 years ago
sad update! beautifully written! Naina is dead! She killed herself on her wedding day! her dad forced her to marry! he death had consequences! Vikram bedridden! he realises too late wt he did! Where is Sameer? she left a letter! update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
And you wicked wicked Avi * glares*
Removing My name from there wouldnt change ANY thing .
My name is inscribed in his Heart.

Hamara naam toh sath sath Aasmaano par hai likha

pyaar ke dushman karte rahe jo karna hai

Shika zara bike ka keys de do ..
Kal college paidal jana padega..

Aur haan avi take that mail id shayad luck kaam aa jaye main toh use dusre par mail karoongi
His new personal one..seems Shika is unaware about it
Maan@woundswhiskeynivi

hahaha...jaa purane wale par try karti reh
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ardentfitzcy

And you wicked wicked Avi * glares*
Removing My name from there wouldnt change ANY thing .
My name is inscribed in his Heart.

Hamara naam toh sath sath Aasmaano par hai likha

pyaar ke dushman karte rahe jo karna hai

Shika zara bike ka keys de do ..
Kal college paidal jana padega..

Aur haan avi take that mail id shayad luck kaam aa jaye main toh use dusre par mail karoongi
His new personal one..seems Shika is unaware about it
Maan@woundswhiskeynivi

hahaha...jaa purane wale par try karti reh

😆
wounds whiskey nivi🤣
dangerous one you are😆
poor guy!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Jaate jaate kuch antim panktiyaan pesh karti hoon doston gaur farmiyega...

After giving such a long lecture on how wrong or right it was
The fact holds that she had a terrible example at home a father who was violent with her mother
and a mother who silently bore the pain .
Sameer was the prince of her fairy tale
She lived her entire life in those days
Geet might have wished many times to change the past and not let Sameer and Naina meet
But that wouldnt be true for Naina
And every fairy tale doesnt end happily
May they meet in some other world
(Shika plz write another story with naina and sameer when you have time a short one will do where they live happily together)

Everyone has their own reasons.
Quoting Vicky" There is no right and wrong. Its just your right and my right."

Its like i am writing literature answers.
Awesome storytelling.

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