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ammu5

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Posted: 11 years ago

#431

beautiful update with da beautiful song...

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#432

part 38
awesome dear...
excellent...
Maan is changing...
cont soon dear...

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punam2712

@punam2712

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#433

FIRST TIME GEET SAW A SOFTER SIDE OF MAAN

AND BOTH WERE LOST IN THE MUSIC AND THE DANCE

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Onir

@Onir

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#434

The Unheard Melody: Wow! I am always short of words to express what each update of yours makes me feel. This was beautiful, serene and held passion.

Like the title states both of them through this melody were acquainted with a newer shade of the other ... she saw a glimpse of his soft, tender self who was so lost in her essence, while he came face-face with her shy and entranced self. For a change both were not passionately hating or holding distaste , indifference or anger towards the other ...but their whole being was so intensely passionate for the other in their arms. So much so that just a glimpse of the other's undiscovered shade felt as if they were in a web of dreams. 👏

Loved it Shika... I'm so curious to know where all this will lead ... Continue soon. 😃

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Onir

@Onir

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#435

I see you're going to update this again tonight 😃

Waiting ...

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fantasy..4me

@fantasy..4me

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#436

let me catch some breath first...

ummm that was BEAUTIFUL.

superb dee for once our angry man is in mood of romance .

Maardala dee.

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KittuPratzz

@KittuPratzz

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#437

hmm well... i just read it Again...

Unheard Melody...

"Heard melodies are sweet, but those unheard, are sweeter"

the dance.. the passion.. and the love... unspoken love yet again

i have to state the reason y i dint feel the same way when i read it for the first time.. cause Vyan and Geet occupied my mind.. and YOUR Munba ve casted her spell on me .. and at last did nothing but visualized Maan and Geet during their waltz..

so it took time to come out of cruise and come to Taj 😛😆 *flight is delayed u know 😉😆*

I second Mannu ... you did splendid job.. 👏

Edited by KittuPratzz - 11 years ago

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Susegad

@Susegad

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#438

Originally posted by: KittuPratzz
hmm well... i just read it Again...
Unheard Melody...

"Heard melodies are sweet, but those unheard, are sweeter"

the dance.. the passion.. and the love... unspoken love yet again

i have to state the reason y dint feel the same way when i read it for the first time.. cause Vyan and Geet occupied my mind.. and YOUR Munba ve casted her spell on me .. and at last did nothing but visualized Maan and Geet during their waltz..

so it took time to come out of cruise and come to Taj 😛😆 *flights is delayed u know 😉😆*

I second Mannu ... you did splendid job.. 👏