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Posted: 11 years ago
Surprise surprise surpriseee!!!! 😃
Ishhh 😎
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi js caught up with all the updates on ur blog! I seriously cannot understand y I did nt read this FF before! 😕 Amazing fab story so far! Loved it! Past n present well incorporated! Superbly written! 👏U r an awesum writer! ⭐️update soon , waiting
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Posted: 11 years ago
🥳 i m first. 😆

well u know many a times i wonder how can someone write a dance. here u are. u have done it twice- once u posted the song and dance with some poses and here with a VM.

u have done a wonderful job, shika.😃 (excitement me i forgot the word.😛)

so finally maan showed his another side. he has surprised Geet with his many shades- every big incident bring another different shade. Time for introspection for both. Realisation is far away but still an acknowledgement for liking is due i think.


P.S. 😆 i m so happy that i m first. first time i think.
Edited by mannu_minnie - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res
EDITED:
Na koi hai na koi tha,
Zindagi mein tumhare siva
Tum dena saath mera, oh humnavaaz...

It's funny, I just quoted these lines few moments ago and here I am re-quoting them here. I don't know their past or their future but I see their present, free of past and present. I can't see love but the feeling of carefreeness kind of creeped in. The moment when Geet felt relief and comfort enclose her, nothing mattered; neither the past nor the future. Hesitation lingers as they try to make peace with their past yet their bodies speak the language of trust. And the touch had erased the past.

"Holding on is believing there's only a past; letting go is knowing there's a future," and letting go to be held tenderly reaffirms the present...

And he let her walk away only to let her run back into him for life isn't the same as before...
Edited by Maaneet099 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Maaneet099

Res

EDITED:
Na koi hai na koi tha,
Zindagi mein tumhare siva
Tum dena saath mera, oh humnavaaz...

It's funny, I just quoted these lines few moments ago and here I am re-quoting them here. I don't know their past or their future but I see their present, free of past and present. I can't see love but the feeling of carefreeness kind of creeped in. The moment when Geet felt relief and comfort enclose her, nothing mattered; neither the past nor the future. Hesitation lingers as they try to make peace with their past yet their bodies speak the language of trust. And the touch had erased the past.

"Holding on is believing there's only a past; letting go is knowing there's a future," and letting go to be held tenderly reaffirms the present...

And he let her walk away only to let her run back into him for life isn't the same as before...


Now I get to quote something from you.

Dil Ko Mere Hua Yakeen Hum Pehle Bhi Mile Kahin
Silsila Ye Sadiyon Ka Koi Aaj Ki Baat Nahin

Jab Koi Baat Bigad Jaaye Jab Koi Mushkil Pad Jaaye
Tum Dena Saath Mera O Humnawaaz

🤗

Edit:

I hate you Madhu, now that I am listening to this song in repeat, and watching it in repeat.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wJ0CQSUn-28[/YOUTUBE]
Edited by .Maggie. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: .Maggie.


Now I get to quote something from you.

Dil Ko Mere Hua Yakeen Hum Pehle Bhi Mile Kahin
Silsila Ye Sadiyon Ka Koi Aaj Ki Baat Nahin

Jab Koi Baat Bigad Jaaye Jab Koi Mushkil Pad Jaaye
Tum Dena Saath Mera O Humnawaaz

🤗

Edit:

I hate you Madhu, now that I am listening to this song in repeat, and watching it in repeat.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wJ0CQSUn-28[/YOUTUBE]

Hate hi kar rahe ho na... good. The day you hold nothing for me, the day I'll have everything forgo me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
This song?? 😲
u sure??.. coz i know the scenario and lyrics.. so im kinda... err.. well song is beautiful no doubt swetha sang it beautifully...

i guess only lyrics and tune go with the update...

good one
Edited by KittuPratzz - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful update! Fab song! Maaneet dance n lost in each other! Geet admires this Maan! Superbly written! update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Continue ?????

Why u leave at such a cliff hanger ????


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Posted: 11 years ago
Awareness. Sensuality. The heat radiating between them, The ragged breath, the clinging eyes, the bodies moving in trance, the palpable intensity.
It was breathtaking. 😳

Only in the hands of the right person, or rather the words, can dance moves come alive on paper. You wove the magic through your words, that transported us right on that dance floor, to feel the live vibrations between Maan and Geet.

I agree 100% with Mannu. Not everybody can write a dance scene and do justice to it.

I loved it, especially the beautiful melody, to accompany that dance that fired our imagiantion. I have really told you this before, but you really do know how to choose your music.😳


Forget to add that I absolutely adore the song that Madhu posted. It is song that speaks to my soul. I loved it when they played it on M&G. Drashti emoted it beautifully. The pain in her eyes is so tangible and live, one could almost touch it.
Madhu and Shikhu, the aces of melody picking.😃
Edited by Susegad - 11 years ago

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