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ChandlerBing

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

If I don't go shopping you'll get an update today

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Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: .Maggie.
If I don't go shopping you'll get an update today

Yayy!!!!! 😃

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gudmeet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

new home????

but our homemaker ( u, shikha ) to jaa rahi hai😭

or we can make this holiday home

where our dear homemaker will come and relax on her holidays

😊😊😊

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Mishu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: .Maggie.
If I don't go shopping you'll get an update today

yupppiiieee!!!!!

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Madhuri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Congrats shikha for new home for WOL

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893213

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Tweesha... I felt for her so much here.

It is the most painful thing to wonder if you have a right left anymore in someone's life; someone you considered your own.

Meghna grown up different from the one with her sister.

Terrified to know what she will find when she actually sees her.

Vicky... ah my latest love...😆

Such a cool dude...

showing up for her and giving Lays ka description...😆

I adore him..

Tweesha finally able to connect with him.

I can see how hard this must be for her. She has lost trust in people and I don't blame her.

I wanted to reach and give her a hug.

Loved the update.

Thanks for updating even when you are so busy...🤗

Edited by dqno1 - 12 years ago

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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

I love how you connect nature with the scenes in the update. They're so well intermingled that it makes the read a package to the senses. The association of rain with washing of sorrows was so well brought out. I usually associate rains with happiness, enjoyment, answer to long wait... But the way you brought out her inner plea for rain to wash out her sorrows was beautiful. 👏

So now there's a clue where Naina is, I hope she is there. I'm quite apprehensive of what is in store for Tweesha & Vicky there. I'm feeling jittery for them both on what they will discover there. All off Tweesha's self contemplation & also gestures spoke of some unpleasantness or to say uneasy and negative vibes that come form this journey ... something that she's dreading to come face-face on her search for Naina.

I felt for Tweesha when she was uncertain of having right on her friends, whether she can question or demand explanations when she was left out of the major life changing phases of tow of her most beloved people. Insecurites are bound to creep in even in an otherwise unfazed & tough and care a damn attitude personality like Tweesha.

On a lighter note : I told you that Tweesha for me is noodles. So her mention in this part of rambling & giving Kicks so resembles & affirms my imagination. 😆

the whole scene with Geet, embrace, difficult to pull out, fear of loosing her, seeking warmth & comfort was setting in the mood & also gave a peak to what Tweesha is facing within... shows her vulnerability.

What should I say about MY Vicky... ❤️ After all he's a sweetheart (You see my choice... 😉😳)

He promised her to not leave her... Hayee I feel for him all over again. 😉

But what made me question is why is Tweety pushing him away ... harsher each time... there's more to their story.

Also make Vicky come to the hospital soon to know about his mother, He will be quite shaken knowing he wasn't there for her when she was fighting within. ...(Also on lighter note... You see I have my own interests there... 😆)

Continue soon... and thanks for taking time to keep updating when you have a packed schedule... 🤗

Edited by Onir - 12 years ago

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palindrome

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

so...She has taken first step towards untangling this web or to know,how it actually got tangled..Naina's entry here is going to answer many questions,I hope so...I am glad,Vicky is with her at this moment..Though she does not show but she needs someone to be with her when old{may be painful too} memories would be revived...!!!!😊

I have always wished for such a bus journey at night and with rains...My parents never let me travel in night and once when daddy was with me{I was going to Karnal{its also in Haryana} during such a night journey,It did not rain...

"Soft taweesha" is like melted chocolate..I enjoyed her most...and you have put the best music to increase the enjoyment ten times for me...!!!

You have no idea what your music pieces do to me..These days,CVs are hell adamant on playing "Ashiqui theme" in Madhubala..and everytime I hear it,I lose the track of serial and goes away somewhere where a man is watching out of his office window with his pinky finger holding the bandaid..

😊

Edited by palindrome - 12 years ago