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Posted: 12 years ago
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Finally here!

My my Shika! This one made me laugh too much to tell you. For some strange reason, I laughed when you described me and got it quite close to what I am (minus being a beauty, that is!). 😆

Oh yes, I wouldn't peek into his shirt to look for a vest because I like him in his office attire too. 😳

I knew that 'horn okay please' phrase and I agree with Geet's interpretation of it. 😆

Loved Madhu in here with her hyper persona and the way she cornered Geet. 😆

Maan being sensitive about it, worrying about Geet speaking those words which had him thinking on those lines actually had me wondering how you just changed the mood of the OS so easily.

🤣 is what I actually did while reading the confused conversation between Maan and Geet! Seriously Shika! Him being so sensitive and emotional and her thoughts treading the wrong path was just too much to handle. Can you believe it that I had to divert myself and stop reading it midway so I wouldn't choke on my laughter and have my mother thinking I've gone crazy. 😆

That song I never heard before and I had to scale my mind to understand what that word meant. Too good! What's he was singing and what he thought she was saying! Must have been embarrassing for Maan! 😆

What I really liked about this was the fact that you actually included a serious issue in this short piece and the readers didn't get all serious with the mention of it for once. 😊

Thanks for this Shika! 🤗
And yes, I'm grinning at the moment. 😃
Edited by mayyo13 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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plz check ur inbox. one msg is a mistake. check the other one and if possible plz give a reply.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Reserved (and may possibly remain so for life 😆).
Edited by kaamchorni - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome OS
thanx for the pm dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh my!!! 😆 This one was too good... 👍🏼

I had not read the first part to this... so it was a double treat for me... 😳😃

Yayy!! Meri twinnie bigad gayi... tak jahk karring that too forbidden person pe... 😲 bilkul mujh pe gayi hai... meri twinnie... 😉
SBV ... Bechara Maan was in his own Geet land aur Mayyo wanted to pour water on him... kya khatarnak ideas aate hai deabte queen ke dimag me... 🤣

Madhu as usual mast thi... apne bindaas self aur love gurru ke mode mein... Loved her in between tube light moments... 😆
Oh that song... 😆 Me too was confused for the first time I heard it but then got the meaning later...

Maan was so tensed for one word. Anyways he got what he wanted some close moments with Geet and also he made her say the four golden words he would be wanting to listen... "I want just you" 😳

And none of us can live without Madhu and her awesome shayaris so Geet had to lose the bet... 😉

Can we have a part 3 some time later... I just love these OSs... ❤️



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Posted: 12 years ago
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I loved it ...it's awesome 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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terrific OS! Well written 👏😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wonderful...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely story...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Always have loved the first part...
Second one was fun to read.. Mari and Madhu watching poor Maan and scandalized Geet...😆
Loved Geet here.
Nice gift for Madhu...

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