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Posted: 12 years ago


Sona for you yaar



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nottyrain

dekh monuuu kaminiii ... meien padhaa.. lik bhi kiya aur post bhi karinggg ... nice update ..accha vhl raha hai yeh stryy bhi 👍🏼... hop iss FF mein tu thodi badi hojaye aur ek 18+ part degi 🤣 .. hehehehe jok karing .. keep writing such neat n clean ff :)




haa dekh li renuuu daarling .. 😃😃 😃

aur tu kitna bhi babaji ko pray kar, laddo prasaad chada le mai bari nahi hone wali 😆 😆

i like my achhi wali saaf suthri stories only

chahe koi padhe ya na padhe 😆 😆 😆


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MonaSWrites



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This FF I am updating daily so please don't wait for my PM because its very hard me to send daily pm for this. please Bookmark or check yourself for update. It's my sincere request to all


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The Downpour... Part 18

Maan walked in his cabin. As he had expected, a red color file was kept there on table. He went and sat on chair and opened the first page of file. Geet photo was there with her details. But his eyes could not move further, it stuck on the small sized photo. He touched it lovingly when heard her voice came from entrance.

"May I come in sir?''

Maan straightened and permitted her to come. Geet slowly pushed door to make it close and stepped to Maan. Her heart was beating uncommonly. She could not specify the reason. Maan had been watching her, sensed her nervousness. For granting her comfort, he acted to read the file but his eyes were as usual, glimpsing only her.

Her small steps she took toward him, wearing a pink colored, beautifully crafted Punjabi Juti. Dance of the frock of her white Anarkali suit was kissing her knees on every step, bouncing back and forth. A long bag was hanging from one side of her shoulder, reaching till her slim waist. Her Dupatta was moving slightly with the move of her slender body. It was properly hugging her neck to chest, giving her beauty a respectable charm. She was wearing a small ear-ring for the sake of ornament with very little sign of makeup on face. Maan loved her simpleness and clarity. His eyes were not ready to move away!

"Good morning sir!!'

Maan came back in sense hearing her calling him but something was missing in her voice. Something, he did not find good!

"Good morning Sir!!'

She again addressed him looking him all mute. Her condition was getting more drawn in tension and this time, he understood what it was.

"Why the hell she is calling me "Sir'!!! he thought but could not have voiced it out. He maintained his position.

"Hm! good morning Geet!!''

"Wo, I want to join this job!' She had hesitation that earlier she had refused this job, what if Maan doesn't allow now! But her all fear took unknown direction when heard Maan words..

"How are you feeling today? Did you see doctor???''

She surprised with his choice of question. She was thinking for formal interview but here he was worried for her health! That surprised her. She remained soundless not could think any reply of this sudden query.

Maan looked up to her.'' Why was she not replying?''

"Geet, I'm asking something. Did you take medicine and why did you have to come office today? You should have taken leave'

"No Maan.. I mean sir..I am fine now. You don't need to take worry'' She felt embarrassed.

Maan sensed her voice was yet not clear. It was heavy. He could see she was not completely fine. But supposing her being uncomfortable, he had to take step calmly. He did not want to call any uninvited uneasiness between them. Yesterday what happened, affected him too much but now he wanted to take things slowly, not to make her feel any force or pressurization. It would be better for both.

"Geet if you want, today you can take leave as from tomorrow, we are going to start a new project and for that, you would have to give your more than 200%. I know your health is not that much improved in only few hours that could be taken this much stress''

"Sir, do you want to say that I cannot work for hours just because I was not feeling well yesterday? Then you're thinking very wrong. You can check my previous record that I had been the best employee of my company and it was because of hard work and seriousness toward my job. You don't need to be worry for your work sir, I can handle them even if, I would feel unwell near to death''

"Geet!!!''

"I'm sorry I did not mean that!!''

Maan offended hearing her using "death' word. It was so hard to absorb inside his ears.

"I know what you saying are right and I didn't mean to check your efficiency. I just meant that today I won't be in office, have long list of meetings so you too thatway, would not have any urgent work to start. Instead of passing time in office you can rest at home and start working from tomorrow. And don't think I'm doing any mercy on you because after starting the project you would not have any time to take rest, not even for a minute. Is anything wrong in this Geet!!''

He watched her thoroughly for reply. She thought for a second then nodded.

"Okay..''

He signed in relief. "Kitni ziddi hai', shook head smiling. "But I liked that!!''

"So see you tomorrow Geet''

She gave her sweet smile in reply. Pushing chair back, she stood up and reached to door, tried to open it but it was locked. She looked back to him.

"Its password protected Geet, you can't open easily!'

He stood up and walked to her. Stopped facing her, very close and removed her hand from knob. Geet moved back, slipping her hand from him hold. Maan saw her clutching her Dupatta corner tight, in anticipation. He also stimulated with the effect.

"Geet, this is the password''

As he entered password buttons someone from other side pushed it with force that it hit Geet head straight away as she was standing very near to it. She clutched head groaning.

"Geet!!'

Maan hand without delay pressed on her hand to support her. The person who was there to check was Maan in cabin or not, trembled in fear. He apologized. Though Maan wanted to shout him but Geet said "It's okay' and he left saying sorry for one more time.

"Are you okay Geet??'

She nodded but Maan was literally worried. He removed her hand from place and cupped her face, brought it near his mouth and blew his warm breathe on it. There was slight bump had appeared on her head. He caressed it softly. Geet breathing was going slow in consequence. She clutched his hand in reflex.

Maan moved back and left her. She found herself in forbade position with him and runs out, feeling awkward.

##

She was walking fast, composing her vibrating heart when bump into a girl.

"Heyy!!''

"I'm sorry!!'' Geet spoke.

"No, it's okay. Btw I'm Anwesha, you can call me Annie'' She raised hand toward Geet.

Geet liked her way of talking. She shook hand with smile. "I'm Geet!!'

"So Geet, do you work here? I mean never seen you before!!'

She nodded. "I have joined from today only!'

Annie smiled. "Okay Geet I'll talk you later. Now in rush to meet bhai!!'

"Bhai?'' Geet asked confused.

"O yea.. Maan bhai.. I mean your boss Mr. Maan Singh Khurana. He is my brother. So see you again Geet, bye''

Annie left. Geet liked her nature. She also left but not before informing Ash that she was going back.

##

Geet was stood, waiting for bus. She had not much money to spend on taxi but after watching the condition of buses; how people were running and catching already overcrowded bus, she lost spirit to get it. She had never experienced it before, always travelled in private vehicles or taxies. She decided to walk for half way and then catch any taxi to home.

She was walking in open sunshine. Due to weakness her legs started paining and she was feeling dried throat. But had no choice, she had to move further like this only. She was praying Babaji to help her but hope was very less. After going some far, she had to stop catching some relief breathes.

She was standing when someone called from back.

"Excuse me, Ma'am'

Geet turned and looked him. He was a stranger.

"Ji'

He pointed toward a car and said that owner was calling her. Geet looked to the direction and surprised to see, it was same girl who she had met in office!

"Anwesha Ma'am!!'

She found Annie was gesturing her to come. She proceeds to her.

Annie car was waiting in traffic to be it over when her eyes fell on Geet who was panting heavily standing alone in roadside. She called her and offered for lift. Firstly Geet denied but then agreed thinking it wouldn't be good to argue with her boss sister.

##

On way they started talking casually. Annie came to know about Geet place and family.

"You know Geet, I know your place. Bhai had been there for few days'' Annie said surprisingly, knowing Geet was belonged to the same place where she had lost her things!

"Maan sir?'' Geet desired to know more. "Why?'

"Haa Geet. You know what had happened? Once I was coming back from airport. That was night and my car got out of order so I needed to take an auto. I had to go for my friend's wedding and in hurry and I forgot to take my things out of it. I called Maan bhai urgently and he immediately came for me''

Then she told the whole incident how Maan used to follow that auto driver and finally got her things out of him. Hearing everything Geet mind started connecting puzzle pieces on place.

"So it all was just a misunderstanding???'' She was stunned. "Maan did never follow me. It was I only who imagined him stalking me when he wanted to catch my auto driver!! Oh Babaji' ''

"Geet!!!... Geet!!!'' Annie stroked Geet shoulder to bring her back in sense, looking her totally lost. Geet drew back.

"Uh-m Anwesha Ma'am' we reached my home!'

"Geet please.. call me Annie okay!!'

Geet smiled, nodding head. She came out of car and thanked Annie.

"Geet are you okay? I mean you are looking tensed?'

"No I'm just fine Ma'am.. sorry Annie. Thank you for everything''

Annie left biding good bye leaving a complete dumbfounded Geet on the way to her home.

(I'm sorry for not giving precap in today's part also But Pakka promise, tomorow it will be coming for sure 😛. Giving some more of tomo part in compensation 😆)


Precap : "And ya Geet, please tell her to make something of my choice also. she knows what I like''

"It means you are also coming sir!!!'' Geet shocked.



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Edited by MonaSWrites - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Me first.. Hyaee love Annie for unknowingly clearing all Geet's stupid confusions
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24



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Posted: 12 years ago

Update padker aati hoon...jana mat..😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
haan toh mattt likh na 18+ mein kidhar boling 👏 accha update htaa.. bt dnt mke geet shout at myy MAANU JAANUUU 😡 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful ⭐️update
maan is so much lost in geet n annoyed with "SIR" ... hahaha
maan nicely convence geet to lake leave for today n send her ... so sweet
wow... aniee met with geet clear MU n also gave her life ... awesome
👏love it👏
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Originally posted by: singh24


Update padker aati hoon...jana mat..😛


nahi bhagungi .. tu aaja 😆


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