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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
interesting starting...

loved it very much...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
very interesting and totally twisted of Geet actual story
wow love it
great start
humm hope it's Maan
thanks for pm
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice start Hope it's Maan
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
Awesome first part
glad that sense came on Dev
and he refused to marry geet
and telling them the truth
who is the person willing to marry geet
hope it is maan
please update soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
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dat was awesome
thanx fr d pm
i think itz maan

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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
hi thanks 4 da pm..read n commented! update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I think maan hai.
Bol jashmine hai na.
Nyc update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38

Some where some one Part 2



It was Maan.

Dev was relieved.

Geet was shocked to see him.He is the man who saved her many times from dangerous situations…from the sea….from the goons…

Maan was also shocked to see Geet.He never knew that the girl whom Dev was cheating was Geet.

Flash back…

Dev confessed the truth to Maan and he got slapped by Maan.

M:How could you stoop so low Dev?

Dev cried:I am sorry bro.Please help me to save her life.I am scared if that girl will have to face public humiliation when her wedding gets cancelled.Please bro…help…

Maan promised him to save that innocent girl's life without knowing that he had saved her life many times.
Maan was still tough:Dev,only because you have decided not to spoil that innocent girl's life I have decided to help you.
Dev was relieved:Thank you so much bro.


Present…

Maan:I am Maan Singh Khurana;Dev's brother.I will marry Geet.And I will not let anyone else to point their finger towards my wife.

Geet's family members were relieved.

M:Can I marry Geet?

Daarji,Geet's parents Mohindar and Rano became emotional.They nodded their head giving him the consent to marry Geet.Because they wanted Geet to escape from public humiliation.
Maan married Geet.When he tied mangalsuthra around her neck,when he filled the prting of her hair with vermillion,when he held her hand and walked around the fire she was reminded of her savior who saved her life before.

She thought:Look at destiny's game.The same savior saved my life again by marrying me.

Unknowingly a smile appeared on her face when her eyes followed Maan secretly.
Pammi and Kamya witnessed the wedding silently.

But Naintara was not able to tolerate all these.She blasted at Dev.

NT:What nonsense did you do Dev?Because of you our whole plan is spoiled.

D:I was just saving a girl's life.If we had done that crime Geet's life would have been destroyed.

NT:Stop it Dev.What about our debt?How will you solve the problem?

D:I don't know.

NT:You fool!Because of your unnecessary sentiments you dug your own grave.I don'twant to live with a duffer like you.

Dev became upset.

Naintara walked off.

Pammi:Naintara!

D:Let her go mom.If she had loved me she would not have done this.

Dev said in his mind:Naintara misled me,but Meera showed me the right path.Meera loved me sincerely,but without realizing that I fell for Naintara whose love was fake.
Dev wiped his own tears.


Maan's Dadimaa Savitri Devi received Geet and Maan happily.

S:I am so happy for you Geet.Finally Maan who was'nt interested in marriage got married…all because of you.

Geet smiled.

Geet wore the lehenga which Savitri gave her and sat on the decorated bed.Maan came.She was nervous.

M:I will try my level best to be a good husband.But I don't think it's possible for me to accept you soon.I know you also need time.Take your own time.Good night.

He slept on the sofa near by.Geet was relieved.She started respecting him more.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sahi socha dev ne...nt ne kabhi use pyar ki hi nehi...bechara dev...

awesome n wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
nice update
so maaneet married
thanks for the pm

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