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Pooja Verma

@impoojaverma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#201

awesome update

plzz make maan to stop her and make her clear about his & sam relation

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Alamelu

@Alamelu

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#202

thank you for such a great update...

poor geet still bound by the rules/laws of the society and willing to give herself to maan because of that, but has declared that he has no place in her heart...sad...poor maan, he loves her so much...now what can he do to get her out of this hatred/loneliness/no feelings...question is can he do anything???especially with the way he is feeling now full of guilt and remorse...

waiting eagerly as always...

FYI: just wanted to tell you this past weekend was in a mind to read one of your ffs fully, so went ahead and read the deewanagi fully in two sittings...cried, laughed, enjoyed, smiled...beautiful

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#203

wow lovely heart touching update.. te way geet try to leave and te wya my maan holding her and geet thinking he want to which pierces my mana ki heart was so emotional.. te way geet saying she cant accept him , geet ki each words pricking my maan ki heart with thousand needles was so lovely painful, heart touching scenes.. te way geet in one corner and te way my maan in one, yes geet wont deny her vows, i know from now on my maan will live with his geet ki memories, he will wait for her until she accepts him..i love te update

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take_a_hint

@take_a_hint

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#204

update again

wow feel amazing

awesome update

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Tabinda Areeb

@t_areeb

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#205

truly painful

she is bounded by vows but told him the truth he has no place in her heart

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-Gemini-

@-Gemini-

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#206

poem was apt for this situation
waiting for more

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Deepa

@spvd

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#207

part 35
nice part...
painful though...
Maan deserves every kinda pain but not Geet...
she has gone through so much...
cont soon dear...

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mishtib

@mishtib

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#208

unexpected update

thanx muski

very emotional part

maan in guilt , how is he going to make everything fine????

geet still try to follow the rules made by society (husband has all rights even though ...)

beautifully written poem and the part tooo

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myramabin

@myramabin

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#209

absolutely wonderful sooo painful but u wrote it beautifully ...hopefully maan would be able to stop geet from going to london or will follow her

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sonu4ever

@sonu4ever

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Posted: 12 years ago

#210

Woah Muskan 👏
That was so beautifully written. Intense and deep. 👏
Too heart wrenching. 😭
At last geet told maan that she can never gives him a place in her heart. 👏
I adored how u wrote the last paragraph. " The darkness romancing with melancholy" is my fave line. Brilliant.
Cant wait for more. 😳

Edited by sonu4ever - 12 years ago