my teacher-(I) chap-22 pg 135 LINK fr 23 c index - Page 85

Originally posted by: CherubNoor

i m here again...reet u have made me an active visitor again...i had left IF since like last two years...but u have me here...posting comments...interacting with you and msgs too...

i cant stop myself from coming online coz i need to say a few things...BUT there ia also times when i have nothing to say because u say it all...and u said it all in dis update...it was all abt GEETS pain...the aftermath of what happened...facing the reality...realizing how arjun felt in those 24 hrs...it was all perfect from self questioning abt arjuns forgiveness...running from reality and reading fav book...hiding from the crowd which used to surround you...the class fiasco...the library fiasco...the mess fiasco...mahn it gave me goosebumps...her calling her grandfather for help and him blasting her...it was heart wrenching...i could feel her pain...the last bit was awesome...arjun washing his face to wash off the tear that slipped seeing her love...love that he always craved for...when it came destiny had some other plans...some more tests before the love blossoms with no hindrance...i liked dia in the update...one wrong decision...words wrongly uttered ... and its all doomed...well she was in the influence of her frnds too...i loved the fact that dia pointed out that too...abt her not being in senses but her frnds nt standing strong and rational when they shud have...this is something that we can relate too very well...the matter might be different and not grave as geets but we do things in frnds influence and make blunders ...regret it...yet never blame our frnds...thats wat exactly happened with geet...these painful updates attach you more to the fiction...rest all u said with ur writing...i had nothing to say still i blabbered so much...:P

i loved every bit of the update...beautiful expression of pain...the update oozed pain from start till the very end...beautifully painfully written reet...splendid...amazing...mind blowing...awesome...and the list goes on...waiting for the next part...am wondering what turn will the story take now...u have made the story unpredictable...keep going reet

p.s : i japped again on ur personal msg...:P

ur reply to my comment : i m so glad i could get you back to ILWE...thank u for taking the request into consideration and i agree its worth and more recreating...its a masterpiece reet...take my words on it...u could have msgd me...i would have forwarded you the entire story😳

reet whenever you geet back to writing ILWE we can have a revision thread to discuss the story till date...wat say...u will have n number of participators to discuss ILWE...it will help u revise too even if u have caught up with the story😃

Originally posted by: baisakh45

i forgot to thank you for replying to my comment.it means a lot to me.

Originally posted by: daredevilisback

Hey!!

Originally posted by: Rocks.Dhara

😊

Originally posted by: Amour_Reet

@ avi -

if you hadn't been there ..i don't know if i had continued this fic or not ..
yes ..justice has been served !
tables turned ..
what he endured for one day ..she will going through a hell lot of time ..god knows until when .
hmm... how the mighty have fallen ..that would be on everybody's tip of their tongues .. it hurts more from the height . well said avi ..
i love that you trust arjun !
your maturity and perception amazes me ..
you hubby is one hell of a lucky man to have you .
the msg you do before I update ..the way you understand me ..i'm sure he is very proud of you .
thanks will not be enough ..so not bothering ..just glad that i have you .

Originally posted by: daredevilisback

waiting...😊