my teacher-(I) chap-22 pg 135 LINK fr 23 c index - Page 83

Before talking about the update, thank you so so much for a wonderfully written long update. Kudos to your narrating skills that make a silent reader like me (In love with enemy is one of the first FFs that compelled to pen down my views) turn into a regular commentator. You have maintained the pace, seriousness, and the characters in tact all the way.

wow. u just took us through a roller coaster ride...the characters are something u end up falling in love with despite their flaws, and inspite of they behaving irrationally in situations, where u feel like smacking their head and knocking some sense in them...
there are so many characters i adore, ofcourse the leads are perfect...but dia, su, zaria, vikas, because each character make me believe what they are...they make me love , respect them or despise them, its nice to see all the characters having been explored and have some significant role to play...in making the story progress..itrs hard to feel bored, coz the story is moving at a breakneck speed with the past revealed and the leads who loved each other madly at one point of time, now feel so much hatred for each other that he cannot stand her presence...

great story..looking forward to some brilliant moments and path breaking twists and turns...
keep writing

very emotional part felt pity for geet but i think what su said may be right for someone but this does'nt mean that we hurt the one we love so much what geet did is not right and she is facing it after effects she should have to be strong to accept her wrongs and try to the lessen the damage to the heart she loved bcz when u make other hurt its ur duty to heal the wounds too i like the thing in this that geet realized her mistake soon now she have to heal his him too waiting for next tonite till then tc bye love u dear so much for this amazing story

want to write

Originally posted by: LILY111144

reet waiting 4 back wala updtt...😉

tears in my eyes .. i could feel d pain geet is going through ... arjun needs to get back to her yar ..

Hi reet,
After reading all the chapters my heart went for the most underprivileged character of the story "Geet".
Yes, as per me geet has nothing.only money can't make a person privileged. She never had the privilege to lay on her mother's lap and feel protected. Brought up in a joint family could not provide her anything except father's love.and that also snatched from her at the tender age of 13. At the same time maan"s hope also faded from her life by misleading facts given by her so called blood related family.so when she got arjun in her life she wanted to hold him as her lifes last resourse.
I think if she knew that maan and arjun are the two faces of the same coin then she never belived vikas.actually she never belived vikas at the first place. Arjun's wrong timing of answering and non answering her questions instigated her to believe vikas.
She was insecure about their relationship due to her past and arjun never tried to assure her.arjun knew how is vikas.then also he taken him for granted after kanpur fiasco. Vikas grab the opportunity and hit the nail.
She was totally wrong when she supported the false accusation.she never uttered a word except "he dishonored me".which somewhere true as when she begged infront of him that time he didn't respect her love.no i'm not supporting her in this sin and i'll never.. but at that time she was a broken soul.who wanted to cocoon by her mother. She didn't want her father only wanted her mother whom she never saw.that time that geet reminded me of my 3yrs old daughter who is her papa's gal but whenever she gets upset she only wants her mumma.that's why i can be angry with geet But can't hate her.
Offcourse she is a brave girl.when she did the sin at that time she was not in her proper state of mind.but when she undid it she was.and it
needs a hell lot of courage to defame ownself infront of everyone.

Something that I love... probably applies to both now

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

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