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Alamelu

@Alamelu

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#801

Reet, what a brilliant update.

Absolutely loved the part of the brave front geet is putting up in front of the others, her resolution to stick it up as a punishment to face what arjun faced that one day...since that is what arjun wanted for punishment for her...

she is dying within, but still surviving...she could have run away, but no she stays put, she is tempted tho'

she wishes her grandpa could help her, but then does not blame him for not coming through for her ...

loved the friendship of su and za...them accepting they are equally responsible for the situation, and I loved the part where they told geet that arjun is to be blamed too...he never denied geet's allegations nor did he tell her of his true feelings...isn't he at fault too for not confessing his intentions and who he is?? Not that geet is not wrong, but still there is some blame on arjun too...

and loved the last part of her wanting a glimpse of him and him sensing her as always and realizing that she does love him in her own way...

waiting eagerly for the next update...I really want vikas and dadaji to be punished in some way or the other...want geet to realize the truth about her grandad...and waiting to see how you take this story forward with regards to maaneet...will there be one or not??

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lovepoo

@lovepoo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#802

its too emotional part
i can'nt stop my tears
u beautifully potrayed their emotions
amazing loved it

Edited by lovepoo - 12 years ago

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lovepoo

@lovepoo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#803

egarly waiting for next part

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#804

yes when these types of comments were made against any women I really hate those people...they don't have right to disgrace any person...

but for Geet I don't have any feelings...now she is realizing what is called insult...here she did mistake and for that she has to bear fruits of her doings...but what Arjun has to bear insult and remarks until Geet confessed her crime were not his mistake...he was innocent...what hurt he must have felt...she could have destroyed his career...

we everyday watch and hear news girls getting raped...many are demanding capital punishment for rapist and I also was in favor of capital punishment for rapists...but after reading in this FF how Geet and her so called low-life friends did with Arjun I now realize that these type of incidents can also happen...when girls can frame boy for rape in jealousy or revenge...so may be innocent boy can be hanged...I think if LAW is made to hang rapist then there should be another LAW that if girl blame any boy falsely with rape then she will also be hanged...when rape is termed as a crime where the girl is snatched from her dignity and destroy girl's life then these type of false allegations also snatch dignity and destroy life of a boy so why we act biased between boys and girls...punishment should be same for snatching anybody's dignity and life for girls and boys both...

and usne confess kiya to kaun sa bahut bada ehsaan kar diya kisi par jo log yeh yaad rakhein ki usne sach kabool liya...jhooth bhi to ussi ne bola...this true that she confessed and this is very brave decision...many people don't have guts to listen to their morality...but that doesn't lessen what she did with Arjun...if she would not have confessed then may be he have to loose his life also...when even Anant was gawking like a hawk to throw him out of her life...may be angry mob could have killed him...

yaar mujhe Sunanda and Zaria ki baat samajh nahin aayi...why they are mixing 2 different things together...whatever he did with Dia, he may have slept ok but what it has any connection with sexual harassment with Geet...he may be guilty as Geet's lover or two-timing with her and Dia but he is not guilty of sexual harassment on Geet...ek baat mein guilty hone par u don't have right to charge anybody with different lies...if in their eyes he is guilty of lieing and two-timing then Geet could have broken-up with him...fight with him...slap him...but blaming him with sexual harassment is not right...I totally disagree how what Sunanda trying to say...they are twenty...they can have boyfriends... knows about s** ...they can plot such a horrible case against innocent person but they are JUUUST TWENTY...

and people will surely hate her for what she did...she also many times taken action against students who did any wrong...in previous update she with other students were on strike against teacher who sexually harassed a student...did that time she or any students think that same teacher used to teach them and they respected him...no...the person whoever he/she may be did any wrong then they have to bear hate and punishment...why she is so surprised with people behavior that she have helped so many people and this student used to butterring her...does she expect all this when she did a sin...

yes Sunanda is right in saying that they are equally guilty...who needs a foe when a person has such cheap friends...they knew very well that Arjun didn't sexually molested her...they knew very well that they kissed but never had any physical contact... Geet has spend whole night in Arjun's house but he never crossed his limits...they should have respected him for that but no just some misunderstandings and they helped Geet charging him with sexual harassment...and Zaria desperate cheap S** puppy...she was the one who came with all the s**t Vikas told her...

these are all my thoughts for characters in update...

I loved how Arjun still want to remain there to be by her side so she must be safe...how he still feel her presence...

it is wonderful how u write all emotions, feelings of both Arjun and Geet...it is way above fantastic...I don't know how will u make us convince with Geet's character...so eagerly waiting for more...

Edited by 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6 - 12 years ago

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love_lavnya

@love_lavnya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#805

when do you want the next part ?

now

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ambeern

@ambeern

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#806

its too emotional part
i can'nt stop my tears
u beautifully potrayed their emotions
amazing loved it

egarly waiting for next part

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priya

@priya111111

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#807

no words to express for the update it was just fabulous feeling bad for geet how everyone are insulting her with their words she deserved hatred but not this much poor soul how can she able to cope with this ithink it will be difficult after sometime she may just breakdown. Howmuch she can handle when not even her dadaji is their to give her moral support. Yes what su told is right she is not so mature to think anything because already she lost faith once when maan has left it will be difficult for her to think anything wise as far as arjun is considered he also has to be blamed because he also did the same thing by not telling the truth to geet why cant he think that geet is in teenage and she is not that matured moreover she is been taken care by anant who is very manipulative. If geet did the same thing with dev or other without telling anything to arjun then what will be the reaction you should think by putting ur feet in others shoe then only u can decide who is right or wrong. For me the entire fault is with arjun only because he is matured enough to handle everything.

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palindrome

@palindrome

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#808

I read it...!!!

and i would read it again to note down and let you know the "gems" you have given us in this update...!!!!

You are the best reet...!!!!

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alfik

@alfik

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Posted: 12 years ago

#809

dunno what to write...😭this is what I had been doing while reading...

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lily

@LILY111144

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#810

Originally posted by: LILY111144
part20...
updtt s super,osmdia opend geets eyes.i apreciate dia 4 hving faith on arjun.may b i m biased bt stil admire geet.mean 2 say she did wrong wid arjun .wrong s very less word.bt stil she hs de guts 2 accept hr faults in front of all.she proved here udays dauter 2 sm extent still a long way 2 go,2 face de college.i m eger 2 noe hw vil she face de changed arjun...
nd i noe she vil do it...here i remember few lines of a song 4 geet...

RUK JANA NEHII TU KABHII HAAR KE
KANTO PE CHALKE MILENGE SAaY BAHAR KE
SURAJ BHI RUK GA ya heiTERE AAGE JHUK GAya hei
SHAM SUHANI BAN JAti hei DIN BAHAR KE
O RAHI...
SAATHI NA KARVAN HEI YEH TERA IMITHAN HEI
YUNHI CHALA CHAL DIL KE SAHARE
KARTI HEI MNJIL TUJHKO ISHARE
DEKH KANHI KOI ROK NALE THUJKO PUKAR KE
O RAHI O RAHI...
NAIN ANSOON JO LIYE HEI YEH RAHON KE DIYE HEI
LONGON KO UNKA SAB KUSH DEKE
TUTO CAHALA THA SAPNE HI LEKE
KOI NEHI TO TERE APNE HEI YEH SAPNE PYAR KE
O RAHI...

reet alredy eger 4 nxt prt...
nw de table turnd .geet cnt bear hw all misbhaving arjun,bt hw arjun vil take it wen same treatmnt vil b given 2 hr by all...
ARJUN DIA ...here i take as teacher student relations.in whole colege ,arjun earned 1student who bliev hm. de torch of faith 4rm uday - arjun - dia .
vikas nd anant should b pnished 4 deir deeds.
satya,hs fathr,nd anants dautr in laws role s vry crucial.scholarship i think geet let dia take .she s deserving nd needy nd dat s de reason it was strtd by hs father . arjun s stil deir as he promisd uday 2 take care of geet.bt i m eager 2 see hw he hold lover arjun bhind mask of arjun bounded by promise.
thnx reet 4 answering me nd liking de song 🤗,sm songs r vry dear 2 me.all songs used by u r apt nd my fvrt 2specialy tadap tadap ke...
reet u should take ur writing seriosly .i noe u r a doctr,bt an amazing writr 2 nd b rdy 4 big fan following on gf .lov u sweety😊

part 21...

dont hv words 2 describe ur writitigs .

evry one changed in fractin of secnd,no one thinks she did faults bt has de guts 2 accept it.nw she s easily available 4 cheap cmnts.ware s deir charecter wen dey r giving hr sxual invitations.she stands nd fight 4 others,all go in vain .even his fathers gud wrk easily 4gotten .dats hw people r.dey went wid flow

yeh insan ke dushman smajo ki dunia

yanha ek khilauna hei insan ki hasti

classroom scene ,library s,dining room,miss geet its sir 4 u, so heart wrenching i only cried. hw she craved 4 hs one glimpse its so so painful

dil ki najuk raga tutatee hei

yaad itna bhi koi na aaye

vil cmlete later...