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Posted: 12 years ago
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already read but a pleasure to read again
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
Chapter-3

As I said earlier you have an outstanding writing skill.I wonder why havnt I read you earlier!!!

Anyways,about the update,well I've found both Geet and Arjun not exactly correct at their places.

Like Geet fihghting for Archana absolutely correct,you need guts and feeling of self sacrifice for that.But before Archana's case she's too leinient about studies.Under her Grandp's influence,she always going ga ga over raichand name.


And Arjun was also correct,feeling offensive with Geet's behaviour as a student.He is no where wrong to have concern about Geet's career but but but he shouldnt have neglected Archana's dignity in d name of education.He shud've understood and Supported Geet's cause to fight.


And the argument b/w Arjun and Geet,phew factual and emotional both.No words to explain how I loved it.Arjun making Gee realise she must come out of raichand shade and Geet making him undestand the graveness of Archana's state.

I love the rageful Arjun.


Great part.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
This one is amazing
Cant wait for chapter 7

P.S :By any chance , ws dis already available on geet forum ??? Im baffled by this whole re posting thing 😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter-4

Finally smthng going good for both Arjun and Geet.
Great that Arjun helped in getting justice for Archana.And Geet's tamed down behaviour is also a treat.And oops poor girl is jealous of Dia.

Loved d whole saraswati puja prepartions,celebrations,Geet in yellow Saar,Arjun gaping at her and the wearing kurta on her request.


And saraswati puja,uff,my favourite festival after Durga puja.We used to have blast during the puja and not only during d puja,the preparations used to be more fun.We felt a sense of responsibility.Golden days.

Lovely update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part-5

Ufff

These fighting emotions,try to avoid them and they keep on lingering in ur head like a toxic fragrance.

The romance between Arjun and Geet,mmm,awesome.Geet asking for books,Arjun easily giving her keys,Geet cleaning Arjun's room and then the fall...mesmerisingly explained.

But then Geet's misery as she's confused,missing her father and missing her MAAN.It think Geet's granpa had a hand in Maan's disappearence.

Grt part.
Edited by sweetsampa39 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
Part-6

AWWW

Our cutie pie Geet trying so hard to avoid her object of obsession,and to an extent suceeding,not only in avoiding Arjun a.k.a Maan but also making him restless for her.And then unknowingly making him jealous.

And our Maan is toh famous for bursting on his favorite punching bag and later regretting.



Going great buddy.Phew after read all the parts.

Waiting for next.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
this is the same as the other thread right?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58



u have started this FF in Geet forum also...

wonderful idea...

I have send buddy request to u...

please pm me when u update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
awesome updates dear
pm me too when u update
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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chapter 7



The next day arjun found the desk belonged to geet was vacant .she didn't attend the class.After class he quietly replayed the whole day . the grudge was personal. He should not have over reacted that way in front of the whole class . just because she had decided to date .

She can date anyone .Oh really ! hell no ..how on earth she gets the right to flirt with anyone?

But whatever it was he shouldn't have over reacted in public.Specially when he could feel from the way she looked at him..he could feel it in her eyes . her eyes tell him a different story .something had changed between them that day at his apartment.

he knew something was off with his conclusion .He had been restless since then.he hadn't have much sleep last night . if he could tell her anyhow ...damn .he didn't even know what he would say to her ..

what the hell was he supposed to say

hey geet I lost control of my freaking mind as I heard your little love talk with vikas...i tend to do that a lot recently whenever I m around you ?


He slammed his fist on his table..

darn girl !

Somehow deep in his heart he was waiting for geet to turn up at his door .though he was fully aware of her self-esteem that she wouldn't ever appear on his doorstep if not been called.

Then he would call her ... he cant let everything go to ashtray just for that ruffian vikas .


***


Geet was sitting in the union room when the peon informed her she has been called by arjun. She duelled on the thought and decided against it.

But any how she felt compelled to go .

"You asked for me...?"

Her voice made his heart take a somersault . gathering his calm slowly he looked up from the book in front of him .

"Sit..." he pointed at the chair . his face not giving away any emotions.

She neared the table tentatively but didn't take the seat.

"Sit .." he said again.

"I m fine."

"I m not.."

Her eyes shot up at him.

"Take the seat geet ..."

She didn't object this time.

"You didn't attend the class today .

Geet didn't reply to the statement.

"What happened?"

"Had to attain a party.." geet retorted remembering his words .

"Really ? at this hour ? ...?who threw it ? vikas..!" he played along knowing fully well she is being sarcastic .

Geet was mum for a moment..she didn't understand where vikas's name came from ?

"You never concentrate in my class . you know that's disrespectful. right ?"

"I .. I don't. ..its just that .. I would try not to disturb you anymore in your class."

He snorted ."Was that your way of saying sorry ?"

"Calling me in your office after what you have said in front of the whole class . ..is that your way of saying sorry ..?"

There she was . never beating around the bush ! much direct !

They stared at each other unblinkingly .None ready to admit it .

"I would now take your leave sir ..if you are finished with your ..u know .." she gave him a knowing look before pushing off the chair and stood up .

"Wait .."

"by any chance, have you been avoiding me...geet ?" arjun couldn't stop himself from asking that..the question was itching his tongue for a few days now.

She looked straight into his eyes .trying to fathom the words hidden in his question.

"Why would you ask that."

"thats not the answer "

she stood there awkwardly playing with her fingers.

"When are you going to show me the thesis.." he changed the subject .

"I don't understand you .." she blurted agitated by his constant prodding.. "a moment you despise me like a nasty virus the moment next you ask me if I m avoiding you like you were expecting me...decide your mind sir...what you want to do with me..."

The innocent yet daunting heart spoken nature of hers always impressed arjun.before she could understand what she was saying she was out with it .he couldn't suppress the chuckle..

what i want to do with you...bad question geet..!!

Seeing him smirk geet was more angered...

"i m going to go now sir...need to be somewhere."

"What ? a date ?" arjun find himself commenting while rubbing his chin with the thumb..the whole time gauging her with scrutinizing eyes. Eyes that she felt laughing at her .

"I don't have a boy friend sir " ..she stingily retorted emphasizing on boy friend.


what was he getting at ?Arjun watched the frown to hover on her face.

"What about vikas...!!"

"What about him ?" Geet dumbly asked still not getting the origin of this scrutinizing sessions about her boyfriend.but suddenly the whole matter was clear to her in a flash.

Arjun noticed the confusion to wipe out and the realization dawn upon her..

he cursed himself for blurting the questions . he knew geet's transparent way of talking ...he wouldn't have a single answer to anything she says next ...damn jealous heart ...!!!

when in first place he shouldn't have been at all .

She put her arms on the table and looked pointedly at arjun whilst he pretended to flip through the pages.at that moment dia entered the room along with another girl..

Arjun mentally gave thousand thanks to his saviour of the moment ... however vikas didn't matter to him anymore.But the smrik on her face ..he didn't dare to even look at her .

"Sir the paper ...is it ready ...how did I score..?"

From the further conversation geet understood dia was giving preparation tests arranged by arjun.oh so he was private tutoring her. a wave of irritation flowed through her immediately. How convenient for dia.is she that shallow'.!! Most importantly why arjun allows her near him .has she gone to his apartment and got rewarded with "that" moments '..!!!

she flinched at the thought which didn't escape arjun's eyes.

How come he never asked her..oh wait he was busy following her private life...though she wanted to feel the anger...all she felt a sudden lift of weight from her chest ..it wouldn't be far stretched to guess that he was jealous ...well may be a little jealous...would it ?

"I would bring the papers to you tomorrow after the afternoon period .you don't have any classes that time." Geet addressed arjun getting up from the chair..

"Okay.".he instantly said relieved to escape her gauging eyes..

"How can you sir...you have given us the time to discuss the questions you have mentioned in last class ..you know the day of the horrible fiasco" ...dia looked at geet meaningfully...while standing at the side of arjun's desk which seemed to close to arjun for geet's comfort.

Geet felt an nasty urge of slapping her. she clenched her teeth and shoot a pointed glare at her,she turned to keep her out from periphery of her view.

"well sir I wouldn't interrupt your business anymore' you seem to have no time scheduled for me ..i mean valuate the papers " ..she added quickly correcting herself .

"I will just take your leave then" she wouldn't wait and stand all these obscene efforts to woo her arjun sir..

Her arjun sir...? where did that come from ?? she should leave now before she goes fully freaked.She was about to bolt out when arjun's voice drew her attention back .


"Wait ...dia . so bring everything tomorrow I will check the paper by then..do you have anything else to ask.?"he said meaningfully almost asking them to leave geet and him alone.

Dia might be shallow but wasn't stupid to understand that it was her cue to leave..After she left there was an odd air thickened between them .arjun was the one who broke it.

"bring the papers today after class...bring them to my apartment .."

the mention of quarter made her envisage the last encounter ...

NO...!.she almost shrieked making arjun jump out of his skin.

"I wont ...i mean I cant ...i mean" ...she took a deep breath to sort out the words... "i m very busy tonight ...i cant ...see you later sir..."

Saying she bolted out of the room without waiting for his permission like she was being chased.

Well she was...the vision of his face bending down on her mouth was the only thing she could remember ...

***


Geet sat below the sprawling neem tree for hours...looking at the setting sun...trying to reach out to her give last ray of optimism..optimism hope trust these are tricky things .serves the lucky ones.

to day of all days she was reminded of her dad.

she knew it was because of arjun. his gestures had that concern for her that she couldn't really shake off..he had his way of making geet follow his wishes ...same like his dad..


geet couldn't really figure out arjun's true intention towards her .sometimes it felt like he was sailing on the same boat like her .like today the way he repeatedly dragged the boyfriend topic like he was ..jealous..was it too presumptuous of her to think he was jealous of vikas?


Wasn't he..? that only explains that he has overheard their conversation and the jealousy made him react this way ..well if it was before then she wouldn't have said it . arjun was always known for his temper at an inattentive student in his class..but his today's behaviour was outrageous ..specially after sharing the moment that night' ...


but is there a possibility that he shared the same feeling that she was having?it might be she was seeing it because she wanted to see it .

She sat motionless staring at the magenta sky .The feelings made heart heavily pound in the chest.,the rush of adrenalin was wearing off her judiciousness. .the need to search in his heart and see if it was more than the plain teacher student relationship.


moreover ..it was herself..she wanted to know exactly what she felt towards him. admiration or something else. just hormonal infatuation or something stronger .she hoped it was not ..she sat Obliviously surrounded by the layers of dusk .


What should i do ..?keep my distances from him ...or...

Who had seen the fickleness of future more than me.why cant i be happy in this moment..cherish the moment and just be in it ...her heart whined ..

but what is the use..? there can never be anything between them..he will go away at the second best opportunity and she will be left alone..again.

Why does there have to be anything...why cant this be just the way it is...someone to care for me..why cant I live in the moment ...?

seeking straws there honey ?the heart taunted her..

geet herself didn't understand.why after all of these a few kind gazes makes everything alright..or the pull that she cant escape.

Why was he drawing her like this...how desperate she had become to be swayed by him even after such sheer mortification..

Where was she leading herself to...the path of hurt and unbearable sufferings...

I have tried staying away...i have tried keeping distances..nothing worked...except that the hurt was always there...

Oh god..! she clutched her head within both of her palms..

She is even not sure if arjun shared any of these damn thoughts ... she was donning conclusion out of nothing.


chap 8



Edited by Amour_Reet - 11 years ago

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