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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Amour_Reet



no arjun didnt know what anant did . he thinks geet was as indifferent as anant . he knows that much ke anant didnt want maan to come back . at any cost . but he thought geet too doesnt want him back . she has moved on ..
most importantly there something happened more becaudse of anant that is yet to unfold .

so that is the reason arjun cant forgive geet . even if he wants to . he s in dilemma what to do .

he had lost something very dear to him in this war between anant and him .

thats yet to unfold .




thanks u answered my query but wat abt dia?
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Posted: 12 years ago

no bebo . not now . around 10.30 i guess
about dia . check what i have replied to sarita .
u will get ur answer may be on page 56
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Posted: 12 years ago
hmm got my reply...
n I agree abt chest hair...LOL !
we r so naughty
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Posted: 12 years ago
finger crossed for next update...
n no we won't throw chappals coz good or bad update u will write according to wat story demand,isn't it?
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 17
awesome...
my God this is getting so much interesting and me getting so involved in this...
Maan is gonna face so much later when Geet gets to know about him...
why the heck is postponing in telling her everything...
oh this adding many more troubles...
Geet has this motive and Maan never ever tried to find out why she wanted that scholarship but just assumed something and helped Dia...
hes in serious trouble in may ways...
i just want Geet to be happy and want her to win and come out of any hurdle and trouble...
Maan is gonna lose his trust Geet has on him...
and this old man is such a shrew...
no one actually cares and loves her other than Maan but at the end only Geet is gonna be hurt when she comes to know about everything...
damn it...
Sunanda is the only genuine person her and this Zaria can stay away from Geet till she stops her ways with that swine Vikas...
cont soon dear...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter 17: Is it possible to feel more tangled in a story after each part. Your writing is doing this to me. With each update as few tangles are clearing many more are getting added, more complex than the other. It just keeps going in mind like a scene but with gaps to be filled and theses gaps are something that is making me apprehensive, curious and also a deep anticipation for knowing what new comes ahead this time around.

A slow kiss was something that was so well craved for & met with. Their kiss wasn't that of hunger but of quenching of souls, healing within the hurt of years. I know ironical not being of hunger but yet quenching... but that's what I perceived & liked the most as this contrast was so well put together. The kiss spoke of longing, without hurry to seal it as physical but something very deep that two innocent souls of young M-G longed for and have still locked up in their adult self.

But then with this realization another thing comes forefront that now the thin line of difference that Arjun was holding onto from being her Maan is becoming hazy & weak. Its almost complete transformation for him. But I feel there's much more than what is revealed yet. There's something more horrid in the past that Arjun had to face cruelly by faith having the face of Anant's Mind. The hurt within Arjun is much corporeal & has caused him to see red & revenge that initially he just wanted to be physical with hsi childhood love, where the Maan in him was suppressed... that's why all the ring & proposing but know but now Geet's confession has stirred him within ... it has soothed his hurt self within him. He can no longer just name it as physical between them as now he is her Maan the one who loves her with hsi entire being. All of this so beautifully put together in few lines...
" Burnt beliefs, thoughts, needs, taking a new found assurance, love was working up from the ashes of Misunderstandings... Like a Phoenix.
This was so true to their state. 👏

There's more I want to know but then let me regroup my thoughts...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Geet with each update is emerging to be more stronger for me... I am going to side her big time for now.

She has invested much more of herself completely in to her bonding with Arjun, she's almost made him her future Hubby. The reverence she feels for him speaks so much of her trust & depth of love she has for him. If she's broken now then I don't know how she will bring together bits of her shattered heart. I mean how many times can she go ahead with betrayals in her life. There's a break point, point of no return from. And now Geet is in that stage very close to the edge of break point, though she's oblivious at present but then she's standing at that precarious edge. Her emotional connect with her Father is so touching & the pride she feels to be known as his daughter is so much a part of her being... and if this scholarship is withdrawn from her, she will ,loose out on some part of her being, she won't be the person she is. I know both Dia & Geet are at equal deserving position of the scholarship but then it should be just. Let them achieve it by their own worth. Why is one given (read Dia) more benefit, Arjun shouldn't be going out of his way to help her... and if its something he did for revenge then he will regret it bad. I am in no way saying that he shouldn't guide or help his student but then not even use other students weakness to let other excel. There's more to it than just helping Dia.

Dia here is a big '?' for me. She's someone a different shade of grey for me. She makes an interesting character for me. Her stand for things makes me queasy.

Anant & janki oh my... it seems to very cruel but then that's how many function. Manipulating others, thinking ten steps ahead, loving self more are the only means some can use to defend their own ego. These characters are raw in the intensity of manipulation they can make evil sound very much intense & dark.

Geet and Maan last scene romance was that made me grin like a foolish dreamy girl. I haven't ever mentioned but then your use of English literature in the updates makes me so much in trance and feel it all that I don't have words to put words of appreciating it. I am not a literature person yet I could relate to the feelings emitting from them. Great gelling & inclusion as one with the incorporated scenes.

What made me all dreamy were... they slept in each others arms the whole night, they wanted to have future of their s as this with being each morning in the others arms. Her ringtone in the lecture, their romance hidden and not so hidden from others...😳

Waiting and wanting more soon... 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
Yayy!! this time I commented before the next part was updated... 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

The official comment:

The passion and the sizzle of their hug and kiss was intense, scorching and amazing. At last they are with each other. ☺️

Her confession, the scorching kiss and the hug ... loved it so much😳

The pin prick moment when he realizes that it is Arjun she loves. How must it feel to be jealous of oneself? He does not know that she never got his letters. He does not know what her grandfather has filled her head with. He does not know how much she was hurt by the Maan she thinks betrayed her.

I can only dread her reaction when she finds out that he betrayed her for real this time. Helping Dia, hiding his reality...

The scene where they fall asleep together was perfect😳. Love which is new, so tender, so compelling... you never realize when you cross borders. Although they didn't her friends waiting for her must have worried about that. Zaria's displeasure was obvious. Sunanda understands her more. I love the friendship between the three.

Mohit, Samrat, Janki and Anant can be dumped into a well! Maniputaltive people.😡.. although can't say that too much about Dev though...I still don't like him..😡

Another sweet moment when they were checking the emails together😳. Some of the past is opening up and Arjun realizes why the scholarship means so much to her. For someone left so alone, it would be natural to hold onto that thin tie to her father which is left.

The ringtone on her phone had me cracking up... baby... 😳sigh...the scene after class.. cute❤️

Mere UN se milne... hai.. lovved it...😳

Can't wait for more...

So much you write and yet I am asking you to continue super soon..

Thanks for updating Reet.🤗

Edited by dqno1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
is there anyone want an update?

a long eventful one ???


do you have your chappals with you ?

if yes . can you please take them off and keep it under lock and key .cause i have a fear . you are gonna use it . on me .!



okie but i need you to tell me , leave it just say
if you want the update ?

i m so wary of it , i might go back hibernating if you dont reply soon .



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