MG SS : Ishaqzaade *pt 35 @ pg 148* LINK OF 2ND THREAD @ PG151 - Page 70

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So geet's family has showed the pictures of maan with Annie to her,really wondering what will be her reaction,waiting for the update
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Nice teaser..Waiting to know Geet's reaction..
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MG SS Ishaqzaade



PART 25

Aap yaqeen kijeye chacha gi ..mien geet ke sar se uss larke ke pyaar ka bhoot utaar kar rahunga ...thori takleef hugi geet ko magar zindagi bhar ke liye unn Khuranas ke saath phas jaane se tou better hi hai ke hum abhi ussko thora dard de den ..

Plan kya hai ..??


**^^**

Asha tai : Geet kya choroon (thieves) ki tarha chup chup kar aarahi hai ..wohh bhi itna late ...sab theek hai na ??

Shh ..shh ...tai ..maan kahan hai ?? uss se pata nahi hai mien aayi hoon ..

Hmm ..tuo tu apne romeo ko wohh kya kehte hain ..sur per eyes ...(curtesy Mrs. Bhalla from YHM😆)

Geet controlled her laugh n corrected her ..

Surprise asha tai ...han mien maan ko surprise dene aayi hoon ...upar jaa rahi hoon hopefully wohh bahar nahi aayega jab tak mien nahi puhanchti wahan ..

Asha tai placed a hand on her head blessing the innocence of thr love while Geet went upstairs still smiling ...she had been in her office till late evening n then decided to meet maan ...surely she won't be able to go a day without seeing him ..n here she was all set to surprise maan with her visit to thr home ...as planned she entered the house with a loud scream ..

Surprise ...!!!!!!!

But then thr was no one around ...the chill in the house was enough to tell her he isn't here ..but then its so rare of him to go wondering around in the chawl ...where is he ..geet walked out to find him asking different people ...n was getting annoyed by the way the girls were having that stupid grin pasted on thr faces on the mention of his name alone ...god stupid girls ..!!! no actually stupid maan ...pata nahi kahan chala gaya idiot ...n then she bumped into chinto ...maan's bff the 13 years old boy of the same chawl ..

Hi chinto ..

Hello maan bhaiya ki hone wali wife ..😳

Geet blushed n shook her head ..this was how he addressed her ever since he caught maan kissing her forehead before leaving to office ...he was the one to break the heart of all girls in the chawl by spreading the news of them being engaged ..😛

Kahan hai tere maan bhaiya ...kab se dhundh rahi hoon unko ..

Wohh ...wohh tu kab se chawl ke top floor wale roof par bethen hain ..

Wahan ?? wahan ..Kis ke saath ..??

Kisi ke saath nahi akele ...meri maths problem bhi solve nahi ki ..

Geet was instantly on alert ...what must have gone wrong ..she caressed a hand on his head ..

Teri problem mien abhi thori deir mien aakar solve karti hoon theek hai ...ati hoon mien

Geet went up only to see maan standing thr looking up at the stars ...her heart pained remembering the last time she saw him this gloomy ..the night he left his home ...geet exhaled sharply resolving to take away whatever it is ...n like the fresh air she went ahead n hugged him from back slipping her hands around his shoulders from waist ..resting her head on his back ...holding him in the warmth of her love .. maan stiffened for a second but then gave in the comfort of her embrace ...

Najane kaise tum jaan leti ho mere dil ki bechani ko
Thandi hawa ke jhunke ki tarha aati ho
Aur saari pareshaani apne andar sama lejaati ho
Mishty yeh kaise kar jaati hut um ...

Maan turned n hugged her so tight ..she almost thought she won't be able to breath for a second but when she felt him relax it made it all worth ...nothing mattered more than him calm n relaxed in her embrace ...it meant the world to her ...she smiled feeling him embrace her ...the feeling of his arms tightening around her waist n back was so maddening taking her senses away n his hot breaths fanning her bare neck asn't any help ...she clutched her hands tight over his neck hiding her face in his broad chest ..almost loosing it ...they knew they were beyond the point of emotional ..the hug wasn't anymre to comfort anyone ..but nobody knew when it turned so passionate ...taking over thr rationality ...geet felt herself loosing her control ...a conscious part of her mind told her to back off ...but it was so difficult being in maan's embrace ...until he loosened his hold on her n they parted ...

Geet looked down ..blushing pushing her loose strand at the back of her ears ..while maan stood thr trying to control his own ragging emotions ..its so difficult to keep a check on himself being around her lately ...it took all his self-control to part from her knowing they both were equally drowned in the moment ...he was still lost in the warmth of thr hug when geet cleared her throat n asked hesitantly ..

Kya ..kya hua hai ..??

Maan glanced at her while she looked everywhere else than him flushed with her cheek tomato red ...all he wanted in that moment was to grab her n kiss her hard ...but her words jerked him back to reality as if she had drowned him in a tub of ice cold water ...as he remembered how his boss asserted his orders on him ...

Geet wohh ...

The tension in his voice was all it took for geet to breakfree of her reluctance ...all images of last few minutes at the back of her mind with worry clouding them ...n she placed a hand on his shoulder as he faced his back to her ..

Maan ...u share anything with me ..u know that ..right ..!!

Maan turned holding her hand on his shoulder n gave her a gentle smile ..

U don't have to say that mishty ...

Tu bolo kya hua hai ...itna tensed kyun hu tum ..??

Geet I ve been given a project ...Monday ko uss project ke contestants would be giving a presentation ..

Is that the mehra group's project ..??

Hmm ...

Tou problem kya hai ..?? budhu it's a great thing ...before u get ur own project started this is the best possible opportunity for u to get an exposure of it all ...

Maan sighed in defeat n geet really couldn't understand the reason behind it ...for her this was such a bright chance for him show mohinder brij n evey damn person in the world how much capable he is ...then what is stopping him ...

Baat wohh nahi hai geet ...

Tu kya baat hai maan ..jab tak tum mujhe btaoge nahi ...mujhe pata kaise chalega ..

Geet KC ...dad is probably going to be thr for that project as well ..

N now everything was so clear ...maan's fear to face his father as an opponent ...he could never bear that ..n geet knew ...the restlessness in maan's heart was mirroring in geet's eyes ...her sweating palm was so evidently saying how much she is nervous about it all ..

But ...but this is such a small scale project ...even papa isn't going for it ..

I know ...I m praying dad decides the same ...but geet agar ...agar aisa nahi hua tou ...mien dad ke saamne unn hi ke against nahi khara hu sakta ...

Maan walked ahead still not able to think of any possible solution he can walk away from this situation ..
While geet stepped in front of him with a firm determination in her eyes ...n may be ..may be proud for having such a person in her life ...

N u don't have to maan ..

Geet looked in his eyes straight making him aware of her stand she could never ask him that ..she would never ..!! maan knew that but seeing it clear in her hazel brown eyes gave him the confident that he was right ...

I couldn't turn Mr. Aggrawal down on this ...its either this presentation or I'll loose my job ..

What... !! but ...// (geet was loosing her cool she knew ...she couldn't n so she took a deep breath n turned him to face her) okie listen I ...I have a plan ..

Maan was confused but he could see his mishty turning into business mood ..😃 it gets so clear when she is her practical self in her eyes ...cold ..all business like ..nothing about her could tell about the soft heart she possess when she wear that look ..

Kya matlab ..what plan ..

Well ...I have enough contacts to know if KC is going to contest for that project ...u prepare for ur presentation for now n as soon as I get the word ill let u know ...if KC is participating u walk out of that office n if not u go ahead with it ..cool ??

Maan gaped at this woman ..n her amazing way to make his life so easy n simple ...he had been so worried ever since this afternoon his boss walked in the office n summoned him in his cabin ..but a few minutes with her n everything is so clear ...simple ...a smile touched his face ...n he shook his head this girl really had magic ...

Abb hass kyun rahe hu ...u might don't know it but both of our fathers have thr spies in either of thr offices ..

No I don't know it ..but I know that I have a magician in my life who solves every problem so easily ..

Geet smiled n looked at him with a slight blush forming on her cheeks ...his ever flattening one liners ..still make her blush so hard ..

Let me meet that magician ..i'll tell her to make u more disciplined ..

One day for sure ...

They smiled n went down ..only to have chinto waiting for them in thr home with his maths homework ..maan got busy helping him with his maths problem ..while geet smiled seeing maan all light hearten ...he truly was like a child so easy to convince ..so easy to get distracted ..just as she was about to go prepare thr dinner ...asha tai walked in with some delicious smelling Marathi food ..they enjoyed the meal n had great fun before maaneet left to geet's house ...
completely lost in thr blissful world filled with thr love unaware to the cunning planning her father n brother were upto .. of the upcoming storm that will turn the love birds into true ISHAQZAADE ... 😉😳



As per plan geet had checked in with her sources to know if KC is going for that particular project n for her relief they weren't ...maan was working on the project with full concentration n dedication ...

While on the other side brij had well drafted his plan .. he knew what he needs to do to get things turn back in his direction ...

**^^**


Today, Geet again couldn't make it to maan's chawl to meet him ...lately its been so difficult for them both to keep thr daily schedule ...being busy with thr respective work ..geet staying till late in her office not getting up early enough to make it to him ..n then only having to make it up with a short call during the long day ...

I m so looking forward to Friday ...(maan said yawning with a tired voice) n get over n done with this presentation ...

Hmm ...(geet sipped her 2nd cup of coffee to through the day) ill be submitting my project file Friday morning as well ...i hope aarti aaproves it ...

Ofcourse she will yrr ...oh bye the way ..i have a surprise for u on friday ...

Really ?? (n the whole tiredness went away from her voice with excitement) kya surprise n when did u even got the time to plan it ??

Well actually yeh project n presentation k chakar mien i forgot to tell u ...mien last sunday KM gaya tha n umm it was planned thr n ...//

oh yes yeh tu mujhe tum se pouchna tha ...stupid maan khurana how could u forget ur mbl ...pata hai i called u aur tumhari dadi ne pick kya ...god kitna darr gyi mien ...samajh mien bhi nhi aaraha tha kahoongi kya unse ...😆 zindagi mien itna embarrass nhi huyi thi mien kisi se baat karte huye ..

Geet went onn n onn abt hw she felt while maan burst into a laughing fit n then controlled after a while feeling geet going quite ...

Really geet ...tum meri dadi maa ...like dadi maa se darr gyi ..thts a first in the history of forever ...aaj tk kisi ne yeh nhi kaha k dadi scares him ...tht i had to see ...abb tu i am really looking forward to friday ...

Maan u ...u r so mean ...mujhe koi baat hi nahi karni tum se ...

Geet end the cal feeling so embarrassed while maan couldnt stop smiling ...

Oh god dadi ...aapka plan tou superb hai ...really geet aniee aur aapse milegi tu kitna fun hune wala hai ...the great geeet handa would be feeling scared in front of someone ...aur woh bhi kuan dadi ..😆😳😳

Monday had been so event full for maan he didn't remembered telling geet abt KM or aniee anything n then aniee was so insisting on meeting geet so only dadi planned to have a lunch with them ... her, aniee, geet n maan together ofcourse even she wanted to know her would be bahu ...but fate ...maan was so busy with his office n work they barely met or talked n when they did he had so much to say n so much to hear this never came up n when it did he decided to give her a surprise ...aniee n dadi r most important ladies of his life n it was important for him they all get along with each other well ... 😳


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MG SS Ishaqzaade



PART 26

Mohinder on the other side was in another dilemma all together he could see maan working hard for the project ...he could see geet not going to meet him that often coz of her own project ...she is stressed off late but never missed the smile she has when she is on call n he didnt needed to know who was on the other end ...yet those pictures of maan n aniee ...ofcourse khuranas didnt ever made thr private life public n left for others to assume things never caring what they think ...maan was that way as well ...he never could imagine his little surprise for geet would create this mess for them ...mohinder did tried getting to know if geet knew abt anvesha singh but she didnt however maan was talking to her almost daily ..actions can get so mis-leading if accompanied with wrong words ...brij handa never left poising him ...n the father in him could never over a possible threat to his daughters happiness ...wish he could be a bit more emotionally strong as a person ..n less insecure ..but his loosing his wife left him as a shallow man who can never believe in love ...people can be so different in nature ...the same loss was handled so different by Yash Khurana ...he made maan his life but never ruled him ..or never manipulated his character ...yash khurana being the optimistic .. had given all opportunities to his son to become what he wanted to giving him the right morals ..making him strong both emotionally n morally ...while mohinder handa being the pessimistic one influenced geet's character making her loose faith in love ..relationships making her an emotionally weak person ...who looks so strong at front but actually is so sensitive with her heart ..who had lived her life with a belief that love hurts but now she is actually living the most beautiful feeling of the world ...love !! that makes her coe out of the shell her father always kept her in ..that makes her live a new journey everyday ..where there is no fix path no set plans ..still she is loving it coz the person she loves is with her ...yet mohinder handa cannot see any of it coz he has become blind to the feeling love ..!! for him love hurts n he wants to save his daughter from the hurt ...totally not getting that her love is her happiness ..

****^^^****
FRIDAY IN MEHRA CONS.

Mr. Agrawaal : maan u r ready with the presentation ?? we're the first to present ..

Absolutely sir ..everything is ready ...I m sure we'll get this

Great ...I expect nothing less ...c'mon lets go in ..

**^^

Maan was busy checking last minute details of his presentation in his laptop when his mobile buzzed with an sms ...he checked it n it was non other than his mishty ...

We r going to celebrate after ur presentation ..i m on my way ..*smiley*

Maan smiled excited n replied ..U got ur project quotation accepted by that lady don ..??

A second later his mobile buzzed again ..Ahaha ...yes "Lady Don" approved it ..when will u be free ??

Maan shook his head while he type his reply ..this is her first project ever n she got her quotations approved at once n thr his mishty is taking it so casually as if such a big achievement of her career is nothing ..

So we will definitely have something to celebrate this evening ..congrats mishty ..

Thank u but we had u r success to celebrate anyways ..

Itna confidence ..??

Ofcourse ...now u better concentrate on ur presentation ..

Maan smiled ...he knew when she gets speechless she changes the topic ...😆

Bye the way u look beautiful blushing ..

How can u say I am ..??

Mishty abb tum bologi I am being filmy but really I don need to see u to know ur reaction

Good luck for ur presentation ...

N that was her bye ...😳😳

N a timely one coz just then Mr. Agrawal called him to meet Mr. Mehra ..apparently he was praising him before mr mehra ...maan smirked inwardly knowing this man would never say a word of appreciation to him in house yet here he is praising his capabilities like he is his biggest fan ...god this fake commercial world ..😛 but all his good mood went out of the window just as he saw Yash Khurana enter the conference room with his team ... both of them stood shell shocked seeing each other ..while Mr. Aggrawal continued praising him actually challenging Yash Khurana within the lines ...

I fully trust my employee to defeat any rival of my company with thr skills ...n maan I m sure will win this project here today with his presentation ...Mr. Mehra he won't let u have a second thought about it ...

His nasty comments went on n with every sentence maan felt as if he has been placed as an opponent to his father in a battle field ...he knew yash khurana never tolerates someone talking shit about his company but here he stood not saying a word to his jerk of a man ..to top it all Aditya ..the man standing beside yash gave him a confused un-approving look ...he is the CEO of KC n from few selected outsiders who knew maan as Maan Singh Khurana ..n him being standing with KC's rival was beyond him ..maan tried looking at yash ...trying to get a single chance to explain himself but yash was totally ignoring him not even sparing him a glance n that was all it took for maan to snap ..

I m sorry Mr. Aggrawal I ...I can't give this presentation today ..

What !! maan have u lost ur mind or something ...u can't do this ..

I ...I am sorry sir but mien yeh presentation nahi de sakta ...I am sorry ..

Everyone was looking at him as if he has grown two horn the man who was getting praised by his boss so much a minute ago was now back stabbing him leaving him like this ...it was really shocking for everyone but mostly for Mr. Agrawal n thr he was shouting like a mad man seeing maan leaving the conference room .

Ill fire u maan ...u'll be finished ...ur career will be finished ...

***^^***

N thr he was brij handa standing just outside the conference hall with mohinder handa listening to everything said n the way maan reacted ...

Dekh liya aapne chacha gi mene kaha than a ...maan ko geet ki khushi uski mehnat ki koi kadar nahi hai ..uss ke liye uske father sab kuch hain ...dekh liya na kaise presentation chor kar chala gaya ..aage bhi yahi huga ..zindagi mien jab bhi maan ko geet aur apni family mien se kisi ko choose karna huga wohh humesha apni family ko hi choose karega ..

Brij smirked seeing his plan working ...he knew after his encounter with Yash Khurana at the delhi airport few days back he would definitely come today not even knowing that thr will be his son shattering like broken pieces of glass seeing his father in front of him ...

Few Days Back At delhi airport ..

.today was the day Yash Khurana was going to land in Delhi ...n Brij deliberately collided with yash khurana ...still he apologized

I m sorry ..
Itna darte kyun hain aap ...

Yash turned his head slightly in his direction n gave him a chilling look he was getting so familiar with due to his often incounters with maan ...

Yash khurana ke itne boore din nahi aaye brij handa k mujhe tum se darrna paare ..

Haarne ka darr tu sabko huta hai Mr. Handa ...aur aaj kal wohh aapke actions mien saaf dekh rha hai ...

Really ...kahin aisa tu nahi apni haar se thak kr tum hallucination ka shiqaar hugaye hu ...after all ur company lost last 3 projects to khuranas ...

Brij smirked with a challenge in his eyes ..

Mr. Khurana apni jeet pr itna guroor mat kijeye ...agar aapko itna hi yaqeen hai apne aap pr tu kyun back out kiya hai Mehra project se .. Maan lijeye u fear to loose it ...after all mehras se humare relations aapse kahin better hain ...

Yash khurana smiled un-humorously n shook his head ..

Tum se aur umeed kya kar sakte hain brij ...but chalo sirf tumhare liye KC will participate n win that project ...aur han kisi personal relation ki waja se nahi apni excellence ki waja se ..

Fine ...dekhte hain Mr. Khurana ...

All the best kid ... 😛

Yash left with a smirk ..sometimes even the smartness of people fall prey to the cunning .. n thr he was the evil standing with a winning smile ... 😡

Thank u Mr. Khurana ...aap maza aayega ..geet wahan maan to encourage kar rhi hai project win karne ke liye aur yahan yash khurana apni poori jaan laga denge iss project ko hasil karne ke liye ...maza aayega jab beta aur baap aamne samne huge ..jab pyaar aur parivaar ka samna huga ... Tb pata chalega ..kuansa rishta kitna mazboot hai ..🤢

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Mohinder handa never said anything n went outside the building standing by car ...shaking with fury ..realizing that guy is not good enough for his daughter ...

Chacha gi mene kaha tha na humara plan yash aur maan ko aamne saamne lekar aayega aur uss waqt geet ke saamne yeh proof huga k maan ke liye uske father hi sab kuch ..geet ..geet ka pyar kuch bhi nahi .. iss hi liye mene yash Khurana ko uksaya so that he takes part for this project n maan ka asli chehra hum sab saamne aaye ..

Theek kaha tha tum ne brij ..maan ...maan ke liye geet ki khushi uski first priority nahi hai ..🤢
Kitni khush thi wohh office se nikalte waqt ..
Apne project se kitni ziada ..uss maan ki presentation ke liye khush thi aur ...aur uss ne ..uss ne ek baar bhi nahi socha ...

How could u papa ...aap aisa kaise kar sakte hain ..😲

Mohinder n brij turned shocked seeing geet standing thr almost in tear ..eyes turning red .. shaking with fury ...geet took few steps ahead n stood in front of her dad ..who was shocked seeing his daughter in so much anger ...

Dad aapne bhi ...aapne bhi maan ko trick kiya ...??

Han kiya mene ...kiya mene maan ko trick and I had a valid reason ...Geet he was cheating on u ...koi pyaar nahi karta wohh tum se ...

Bas dad ...ek aur lafz nahi maan ke khilaaf ...mujhe ...mujhe tu abb bhi yaqeen nahi aaraha aap yeh sab kar rhe hain ...inn se (pointing out at brij) ... tu phir koi expectation nahi thi but aap bhi ...

Geet tu meri baat tu sun ...//

Nahi ...nahi Mr. Brij aaj mien bolungi aur aap log sunege ...aaj tak mien chup rahi ...aap ne maan ke saath jo kuch kiya ..ussko job na milne dene se lekar ..Aggrawal Group mien uske saath hone wale har sulook tak sab chup chaap saha mene ...andhi nahi thi mien k mujhe kuch dekhta nahi ...but phir bhi chup rahi lekin aaj ...aaj jo aap logoon ne kiya wohh theek nahi tha ...itna kaise gir sakte thay aap log ...//

GEET...yeh mat bholo ke tum apne papa se baat kar rahi hu ...

Takleef huyi na papa ...

Mujhe bhi hu rhi hai ..n trust me maan ko iss bhi kahin ziada takleef huyi hugi ...aap kais eek bte ko usske hi dad ke against khara kar sakte hain ...kya expect kar rahe hain aap maan se ...aaj tak aapke har challenge ko uss ne poora kiya ...aapki izat ki ...par phir bhi wohh aapke liye perfect nahi hai kyun papa ...kyun papa ..

Uss ne apni family ko chuna hai geet ...tumhari khushi se upar ...mien apni beti ka haath ek aese insaan ke haath mien nahi de sakta jis ke liye meri beti kisi se bhi 2nd hu ..

So what to do expect ...papa aap ek aise insaan ko mere liye pasand karenge jo ..jo apne khud ke parents ki izzat na karta hu ...really !!! ek insaan jo saalon ka khoon ka rishta na nibha sake kya aapko lagta hai aisa insaan aapki beti ka khayaal rakh sakega umr bhar ...I m sorry dad but aaj shayad maan aap logoon ke test mien fail hua huga magar mere liye uski izaat hazaar guna bhar gyi ...hazaar guna bhar gyi ...😃

Yeh pictures dekhne ke baad bhi yahi kahogi geet ...??

Geet wiped her tears roughly from her cheeks ...n glanced at the same pictures f aniee n maan in brij's hand n made a disgusted face ...

U think mien yeh dekh kar maan par shak karungi brij veerji ..

Ankhoon se dekhe huye sabot ko jhoot kehna pagalpan huta hai geet bte ..

Sorry dad but meri dictionary mien issko trust kehte hain ...trust jo kisi sabot ka muhtaaaj nahi hai ...wohh trust jo mien maan par karti hoon ..mien in tasveeroon ki sachai se ziada maan par yaqeen karti hoon ...
Aur aaj aapne jo kiya ...(geet looked away with tears falling down her eyes).. u ...u've hurt me papa ..(she really couldn't hold herself together any longer).. I ...I never thought mere papa aisa kuch karenge ...humesha sachai ka saath dena aapne mujhe sikhaya aur aaj aap ne hi maan ko dhoka dia ..

Dhoka mien nahi ...maan tumhain de rha hai geet ...

Geet shook her head in dis-believe ..

Papa agar itna sab kar ke bhi maan aapko convince kar sakta na tu phir life time bhi nahi kar payega ...but mien abb aur usko hurt hute huye nahi dekh sakti ...iss liye ...aaj se ...bulke abhi se aapki har shart ...har challenge yahin khatam karti hoon ...aaj ke baad maan aapko ya kisi ko bhi kuch proof nahi karega ..

Tum bewakoofi kar rhi hu geet ..wohh insaan tumhare trust ke layak nahi hai ..

(geet wiped her tears for last time n looked at mohinder handa with a determined look) .. Mera pyaar agar bewakoofi hai tu ... bewakoofi hi sahi ...aur jahan tk layak huni ki baat hai tou dad iss dunya mien sab se ziada trust mene aap par kiya aur aap ne hi ussko torr diya ...abb ...abb mujhe sach mien nahi pata kuan mere trust ke layak hai aur kuan nahi ...

Geet tu apne papa se baat kar rhi hai ...kya saara lahaaz sab bhool gyi hai tu ..

Nahi Mr. Brij Handa ...mien apne papa se nahi ...mien ek aise insaan se baat kar rhi hoon jo sahi aur galat ka farq bhool gye hain ...jinhien sirf jeetna hai ...aur inki jeet maan ki haar mien hai ...magar ek baat mien aap dono bata dena chahti hoon ...mien apne maan ko haarne nahi dungi ...na hi aap logoon ko uss se torne dungi ...

N with that he turned around to walk away when mohinder roared in panic ..

Rok jao geet ...

Kahan jaa rhi hai tu geet ...ghar chal ..

Geet turned her head in thr direction still facing her back to them ...n answered

Maan ko zarorat hai meri aur mien uss hi ke paas jaa rhi hoon ..

Geet tum uss larke se milne nahi jaongi abb ..

Sorry papa but iss waqt mien maan ko akele nahi chorungi ...

Agar tum iss waqt uss paas gyi tu bhool jana tumhara koi papa bhi hai ...

A tear slipped from her eyes n she faced away from her father ..

Mien maan ko akela nahi churungi papa ..😭

N with that she left making mohinder handa stumble ...the strong man for the first time ever took hold of his car to stand steady ...unaware to the person standing by the entrance door hiden duw to the pillars hearing thr whole conversation geet went past wiping her tears calling for the auto ...while brij continued poisoning mohinder ..

Dekha na chacha ji sab kuch jaan kar dekh kar bhi geet kuch samajhna nahi chahti ...itni andhi hugayi hai uss lark eke pyaar mien aur aapko lagta tha ke sirf yeh pictures geet ko mana lengi ...

Mohinder handa was still trying to grasp the fact that his daughter just choose someone else over him ...that his daughter left him ...the only reason for him still being alive just left him ..while the person who was till now silently hearing the conversation stepped out from behind the wall hiding him ..n walked towards them both ...mohinder handa saw Yash Khurana coming towards them n straightened himself not wanting to show his biggest enemy his weak side ...
The proud in yash khurana's posture was so evident that he needed not to say anything yet after hearing everything he couldn't stop himself from saying this before getting into his car parked next to mohinder handas' ...

Aaj mene mera beta tou nahi khoya ...but agar aap ne apni zidd nahi chori tu aap apni beti zaror kho denge ...

The words that was meant to make mohinder understand his mistake only infuriated him more ...n he took them as a taunt ..a challenge that he will make his daughter part with him ...only to make him burn in anger seeing that man leaving satisfied n proud ...

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Pheww its done ..hope u all liked it ...this gets the first half of this story to an end ..😃
so geet has left her father to go to maan ...n now yash khurana has seen how sincere she is to his son
what do u think whats gonna happen ...😉😃

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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing. Geet is very happy for Maan as he is going to give a presentation which would show everyone his capability. Maan is also exited but he didn't want to stand against his father. So he decided if his father also came for this project that he will leave company. Geet agreed with him as she knew how much his father important for him. Geet consoles him saying she would let him know that if his father also applying for this project or not. Geet got wrong news and there maan also started the preparation for his project.
That idiot brij is.feeling mohinder's mind against.maan. by showing him those pics and along with that he is manipulating his mind,when maan left the job knowing his father also applied for.the same project. How stupid is.mohinder. he is upset as maan has chosen his.father over geet as she was very exited.about.his presentation still he.left the.job.
Finally.geet.heard.all stuff and and.getting angry on mohinder and brij.I really liked that part when geet said that if a person cannot guve love and respect to his parents that how the hell he can give the same love and respect to his lady love. But.mohinder is not hearing anything . he is scared for his.daughter but unknowingly he is himself hurting her daughter. Geet left to meet maan . mohinder warned her but still left.
All this commotion heard by yash. Finally he knows that his son has choosn perfect partner for himself. Yash advised mohinder that don't let your daughter go from his life but he took all this thing as.a.challenge. waiting for next dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
jab andhere k parde ankhon mein padta hai tab aisa hi hota hai...achha chhese bhi buda lagta hai ...galat lagta hai...

awesome update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 9 years ago
part 25
i want to kill this brij
he is brain washing mohinder
n he too is falling in his trap
maan is lost in thoughts what if he has to be oppenent to his dad
geet gave him easy solution
maaan forgot to say about ani n thought 2 surprise her with dadi n anie after presentation
this brij..he made geet belive kc is not participating
n maan is not doing presentation against his dad
n she told maan to give presentation peacefully

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Posted: 9 years ago
part 26..
what a terrific update
man n geets cute little msgs
maan is fully confident that he will give the presentation 100%
but his all efforts went in vein seeing his dad there
n he backed out
maan is fired too from the company
brij portrayed maan chose his dad over his win for geet
n mohinder...grrr..doesnt he have brain to use of his own
geet heard brij n mohinders talks..
she doesnt believe when they showed maan with anie too
her trust over him..wow..
she is r8
her father broke her trust on himself before her
she left them
mohinder trying his best to stop her
n she went for maan who will be heart broken now
yash..he heard everything n taunted mohinder for his behaviour
i expected he would have said ani n maans relation ship is sibblings love..
n mohinders mu would have cleared
superb parts
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thank you thank you thank you for double update i really appreciate ur hard work both part 25 and 26 are just amazing very well written i really love this ff .
Now geet has left his father waiting to see what will happen next This ff shows what actually love and trust is.
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Posted: 9 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n double awesome update! superbly written! Geet senses Maan is restless! he explains! she supports his decision! This Brij😡 Maan walks out of the presentation! Brij takes advantage of this n portrays a bad image of Maan in front of Mohinder! Geet overhears n intervenes! she is hurt by their actions especially her dad! She explains! She will never doubt her Maan! she trusts him! she leaves! update soon
Edited by khwaishfan - 9 years ago

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