MG SS : Ishaqzaade *pt 35 @ pg 148* LINK OF 2ND THREAD @ PG151 - Page 67

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hi all,
sorry for late updates but u all know my university is hell ..n this would continue till late june ..🤢

anyways
thanks to all u lovely people for commenting n liking


u r my only motivation to update at 3 in the morning ..😆

here is the next one ..😳

MG SS : Ishaqzaade



PART 23

enjoy ur day there .. see u soon ...

n ..I.Love.u ...mishty

urs ..Maan

sighing he looked ahead went in towards the 2 darling ladies of his life ...n found aniee sipping her orange juice aparently pouting in disapointment ..n then heard ..

how could yash uncle leave for business tour when he knew I am coming .. mujhe nahi pata dadi aap unko bolao wapis ..aaj hi ..

maan smiled at her n then entered knowing its not for nothing n being away from his home would earn him a pride in his father's heart for the rest of his life n a position no one would ever challenge him about ...n also the love of his life with him forever ...

as expected they went for thr fav ice-cream of a stall from a park near-by ..some may be shocked to see a London return girl in branded stuff from head to toe standing at a local stall asking for an ice-cream but it wasn't just an ice-cream it was the memories associated with it ..taking thr cone the three of them sat in the park ...relishing it silently with aniee ocasionally mentioning thr childhood n all maan n dadi did was to smile at her ...n then maan cleared his throat n dadi knew its time to give her thr the big news n maan started with a simple line ..

aniee I ..i wanted to share something with u ..

(still lost in her ice-cream).. han bolona bhai ..

Woh ..i ...I m ..I m in love with a girl ..

WHAT ...(she turned wide eyed towards him) ..what did u just said ..

Yeh hi k wohh pyaar karte hain ek larki se ..

Shocked with the sudden news ...kab ..kab se

Umm ..i ..i proposed her 6 ...6 months back ..

Holy shit ..n u r telling me this now ..here ..maan bhai how could u ..aapne mujhe bataya tak nahi ..i hate u ..I hate u so much maan bhai ...(she turned her head away ...actually she wanted to dance manically but I little part of her heart was hurt too ...n she just sat thr grasping the biggest news of thr life ...her charming casanova brother finally in love ...!!!!!!!

Aniee listen I ...I have a lot to say n baby u need to be patient ..

She was on guard her bro didn't worry or fumble upon his words for nothing ..something big was thr hidden n when maan started telling her the whole of it she was shocked to the core n left speechless ...but most of all angry at those in-sensitive people of geet's family n how the hell could her brother do this to her bhai ...n that god damn father ..what does he think of himself ..

As expected thr were a series of curses that followed from aniee for geet's family ..maan thanked his stars that he had the chance to explain this aniee wihout geet being here ..she won't understand the possessiveness aniee holds for her family ...nobody says a word against her family n he knew she would freak out hearing about her family ...but let her say all she had to ...n after she was falling short of curses for handas ..n maan guessed her temper has lowered ...he explained how geet has been supporting him ...n all the goodness of this situation n y he is NOW living outside KM ...his reason to want to be a self made man .. aniee did cooled down a bit by the time maan ended ..she may appear a completely spoiled childish girl but she has a brain n certainly do have a heart n she understands her bhai every well ...she just wish it wasn't so difficult for him ..his love is clearly shown in his eyes ..n even that girl seems to love him a lot or she wouldn't have stuck with him through all those hardships .. but she still hate her father n want to murder her brother for making her bhai's life hell ..but seeing at her brother's hopefull eyes she couldn't say much then to hug him n cry ..

Isska matlab u won't be with me in this tour this time ..

Maan hugged her back but didn't answered as that would have hurt her more ..his not staying in KM was enough a shock for her n he didn't wanted to spoil her mood further ...n then she parted sniffing ..

I hate that brother of ur gf ..n her father as well ...how can they be so cruel to u both bhai .. I wish I could cut him into pieces n throw them in the sea ..

Maan laughed at her agitated expression n her imagination ..n hugged her side ways ..

Don't worry aniee darling ...ek baar geet meri hujaye phir dekhna aisi halat karunga na mien unn handaas ki khatir-daari karwa karwa kar ...jitni band unhoon ne meri bajayi hai na ...usski double abb unki bajegi ..akhir pata tu chale uss brij ko k Maan Khurana se panga kitna bhari parta hai ...after all tab tu mien damaad hunga uss ghar ka ..(n he said dramatically in a slow motion) ..aur unki izzat tu tab mere haath hugi ...

Dadi maa wiped her tears n scolded him sternly ..

Maan yeh kahe jaa rahe hain aap ..

Mera matlab dadi maa ..damaad ki izzat karne mien hi tu unki izzat hai ...coz abb wohh tu yeh nahi chahenge na ke unke damaad ki khatir mien koi kami reh jaye ...aur waise bhi uss brij ne geet ko aur mujhe jitna pareshaan kiya hai na ..usske liye tu usko jitna bhi sataya jaye kam hi hai ..kyun aniee ..(n she smiled n giggled with him as they both hi-fived each other)..

Dadi maa shook her head at thr childish behavior ..

Han dadi tou aur kya ...waise bhi saala hujayega tab tu who idiot bro ka ..tab tu uski sahi ki band bajaye jaa sakti hai ..

Maan n aniee smiled n they sat thr for few more minutes n left from thr to explore few more places... it was lunch time when maan n aniee were in a new restaurant at aniee's request to eat in ...dadi maa has requested them to drop her at KM as she won't be able to accompany them for thr day long tour ..n they did ..munching on her food aniee finally asked about how geet is n how they met how he proposed etc etc ...n maan gladly narrated about his hot headed theekhi mirchi .. n the way thr relationship started from being friends to best of friends then lovers n now she is the soul of his life ..

I can't believe this ..unhoon ne aaj tak apko I Luv u nahi kaha ..thats weird bhai ..waise itni strong headed girl aapke pyaar mien phas kaise gyi ..

Maan chuckled that's something even he don't know ...but then he was in a good mood to joke n replied rather proudly ..

Arre tum ne samajh kya rakha hai mujhe ...Maan Singh Khurana kisi ko patana chahe aur who na pate aisa kabhi huyya hai ..?? even geet had to fall for my charm girl she is no exception baby ...

Aniee laughed at his weird filmy english accent ...n he joined her n then sighed aswering her honestly ..

Well on a serious note mujhe bhi nahi pata how geet fell for a complete idiot like me ..but I am so glad she did ..

Aniee smiled seeing the dreamy look at her brother's face that's the same expression girls at thr parties n functions use to carry looking at him n now just thinking about that girl his eyes turns all lost n in another land of his own ..she couldn't understand how her Maan bhai who use to run from commitments n love fell so hard for a girl ..n she asked rather awed this time ...

But she still hasn't confessed it ...

Maan looked at her n smiled ...

Sometimes ur actions are enough to compensate for ur words aniee ..n trust me tum geet se milogi na tumhain koi doubt nahi rahega uske baare mien ..but problem yeh hi hai k dadi ..dad koi uss se mila nahi hai ..u have just seen my love for her ..tumm ne uski deewangi nahi dekhi ...but I ...I see it every day in her eyes in her actions ...
Who would come to u at 6:30 in the morning just to make sure u had ur breakfast ..

Aniee smiled n held his hand over the table ...n said amused by his words ..

Bhai u have totally lost it for her ...

The day went super fun with his baby sister ..ofcourse thr were messages from geet n he did replied in his own way ...n finally she gave up ..not wanting to have any more teasing by simi aunty on "y she is blushing so much ..."
But then in the late evening it stopped all together ...while aniee was finally tired with the jetlag n all her exploring city adventure ..they went back KM ..n dadi maa was all so happy she prepared a lavish dinner for them all thr favorites ...the two of her children were back with her after so long ..maan had planned to leave KM dropping aniee but seeing all the efforts by dadi maa he couldn't ..he just didn't had the heart to ...n thr armaan joined them as well ...n the evening was one of the best ...

Flashback ends ..


Maan was still sitting thr smiling at the memories ...but then realized amid all those fun he had left his phone in KM only ...maan glanced around his apartment ..it feels so vacant without her but y isn't she here yet ..??
Maan hurried to get ready n made a mental note to call her first thing getting in the office ..

***^^***

While here in handa house everyone was seated at the breakfast table when tai ji asked pammi ..

Geet kahan hai pammi ...bola kar la usko warna phir bina khaye chali jayegi office ..

Uski zarorat nahi hai pammi ..geet so rahi hai n pls usko koi uthayega nahi ..let her rest today subha simi ke jaane tak jaag rhi thi ..

Aap fiqar mat kijeye chacha ji mien geet jab uthigi tab usko garam garam nashta paroos (serve) dungi

Magar chacha gii geet ko tou aaj who new project details study karni thi n sab plan bhi karna tha ..

Brij I hope agar mien as MD of HI apne kisi employee ko ek din ka off de dun tu tumhain koi problem nahi hugi ..

N that was brij's cue to shut up ...n he did however he turned his attention to his mobile n it was the 6th time he checked his mobile since last 15 min ..mohinder handa noticed it but choosed to ignore ...n left for his office while geet slept out of depression till late morning never realizing her buzzing mobile ..

***^^***

Got damn yeh larki bhi na ...pata nahi kahan ghayab hai ..

Hi maan ...any problem ..?? subha se preeshan lag rahe hu ..

No ..nothing purab ...its fine ..nothing serious ..

Hmm ..bye the way u heard about the new project ...its huge ..like huge for our company ..all the the big fishes of the construction world would be participating in it ...the company with best presentation n bit would win it ...

Yeah I just heard about it this morning ..but I don't think its that big ..i mean its just a million's contract ...

Oh c'mon maan ..its not like we fall into the category of those Handas n Khuranas ...its big for us ..n I m praying I get to work for this ..

Well all the best ..

Thanks ..i need it ..!!

Purab left as he was called by someone but Maan was still thinking about the project ..not that the boss would even consider him knowing the influence of brij here as well to make him flourish but just in case he did ...he was praying KC wouldn't compete for this ..they usually skip a contract or two of this small scale maan knew that n he wished they do the same for this one ...

*****^^^*****

PRECAP :- Sorry couldn't type anymore precap remains the same
Brij Backfires ... maan is in trouble 🤢

enjoy reading n do leave ur reviews n comments ..😃

luv ya
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice part. Liked Annie's reaction to Maan's story😆 What is Brij upto now? Hope Maaneet are able to overcome whatever he is throwing their way.
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update ...
Aniee's cursing was cute... I wish...thode curse true ho jaye...
Geet's father is not playing double game.. with MAANEET right ??
Brij's plan .. What is that ... Maan in trouble but who troubleed him...
I hope MAANEET won't be separated...
Waiting for next part ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
so loved the bonding between maan and annie...wish he was in km so that they could have spent more time with each other..but what to do...and here brij grrr..precap scary with more bad things happening with maan...poor guy has he not had his fair share of bad things happen to him, is it not time for good things now...hope mr. handa puts a stop to all this backbiting now...
whats up with geet where is she????
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update..
loved maan-annie bonding..grrr brij want to kill him😡 wat he is upto now..
nd y brij is seeing his mobile again n again..hope maan will overcome every trouble thrown by brij..
waiting 4 next..
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update...
loved annie's reaction...
what is brij uotp!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
It's amazing. Maan and aniee were roaming in city for sightseeing. They were enjoying so much. Maan shared his love life with anniee. Firstly , she was startled but afterwards she was very happy. Knowing about geet , Annie get amused as geet is very difeerent from maan. Maan was missing geet. What is brij planning. Waiting for next dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update
Anni share lovely bond with maan's family I loved her sweet n angry gesture lol n maan's funny way to make handas life hell ...anni is supprised knowing maaneet love story n maan n geet's opposite nature she tells maan how geet fall in love with him n she soo happy for her bhai...
Maan was missing geet and wanted to talk to her ... me too wondering geet hai kaha n no maaneet scene in this update ...
grr that ugly creatures brij esko toh dafaa Karo yaha say now he is up to something ... i wish maan will overcome every trouble ...
Edited by brandgurti - 10 years ago

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